Sweetfur's Destiny

Before I start, Sweetfur is one of my fan characters, meaning she's not in the actual Warriors books. This is her story. Don't yell at me about names, or how everything goes, either. Cause I'll just ignore you. )
(Gonna skip Prologue, because I can't think of one.)

~~ Chapter One

"Uhh...Shadowstar?" Sandypelt asked as she padded out of the medicine cat den. Sandypelt was GoldenskyClan's Medicine Cat, and her apprentice, Emberpaw, was to follow her steps. Shadowstar turned to Sandypelt. "Yes, what is it?" She asked. Sandypelt stirred the leaves below her paws. Impatient, Shadowstar hissed to get her attention back. Sandypelt jerked up. "Oh! Yes, well, last night I was out looking for herbs, and um...I sort of found these kits!" Sandypelt explained.
"Kits?" Shadowstar mewed curiously. Sandypelt nodded. "Come to my den, and I'll show you." She mewed as she padded back to her den. Shadowstar followed.
When Shadowstar entered Sandypelt's den, she saw Emberpaw still asleep, but on the other side of the den, two young kits squirmed on the ground. "Oh, my." Shadowstar purred. "Where did you find them, again?"
"Er...outside the camp!" Sandypelt strangely meowed. Shadowstar cocked her head to the side. She knew where Sandypelt really got them. "Sandypelt," Shadowstar began. "Those are your kits, aren't they?"
Sandypelt's heart suddenly sank far below the Earth. How did Shadowstar know? "I knew because I noticed you were developing more milk. Plus, you often had stomach aches. In fact, you said your stomach hurt so bad last night, you turned in early! You gave birth to those kits last night, didn't you?!" Shadowstar's voice got louder. "Didn't You?!?" She yelled again.
Sandypelt stood still for a minute, looked at the ground, and finally spoke. "...Yes. They are." Shadowstar hissed at her. "You know it's against the Warrior Code to have kits! The smallest kit would know that! You will not nurse these kits!" Shadowstar spat. Sandypelt gasped. "Your not going to kill them, are you?"
Shadowstar hissed again. "I would never kill a kit! Even if it was the most troublesome in the world! But you are not going to nurse them, for you are being punished." Shadowstar was serious now. "Wh-what's my punishment?" Sandypelt asked.
Shadowstar stood still for a minute, trying to think of a punishment. Angry, she sighed, and looked up. She had made her decision. "You will be treated like an apprentice for the next two moons!" Shadowstar spat. "What?" Sandypelt was shocked, angry, and dissapointed at the same time. "This is totally unfair!" "Whether it's fair to you or not, you follow MY rules of the Clan! For the next two moons, Emberpaw will be Medicine cat! As for your kits-" She turned to Sandypelt's kits. "- They will be called Sweetkit and Mosskit. Firecloud will nurse them." Shadowstar announced to Sandypelt. "You will be sleeping in the apprentice den tonight. Goodbye, Sandypelt." With that, Shadowstar stormed off.
Sandypelt stood there. She didn'move. She had never seen Shadowstar so furious. Sandypelt layed on the ground, and cried. Shadowstar had taken her kits, and now she was going to be treated like an apprentice. What more could go wrong in her life?

* * *

A few weeks later, Sandypelt was collecting moss for Darkspot, GoldenskyClan's only elder. "Puh. So this is what Flowerbreeze had to do everyday..." Sandypelt muttered to herself. Flowerbreeze was Sandypelt's sister who died saving Brackenpath, back then Brackenpaw, in battle. Sandypelt, still Sandypaw back then, grieved for her sister for days. The only cat left related to her was Darkspot, Sandypelt's father. Her mother died the day after she was born.

And now, she was collecting moss for her father. Sandypelt was half GoldenskyClan, half CrystalClan. Darkspot was originally CrystalClan, but due to Spotstar's rules, he ran to GoldenskyClan.

The worst part of being an apprentice again, was she couldn't even visit her own kits! She doesn't know how their doing, what they're like, or anything! "I hate Shadowstar!" Sandypelt hissed. "I must do something about this!"

Suddenly, Sandypelt got an idea. If her father went to a different Clan, who said she couldn't? Sandypelt decided that that night, she, Sweetkit, and Mosskit would go to CrystalClan. She would be treated right there. "Goodbye, moss." Sandypelt mewed. "...and goodbye, Shadowstar!"

* * *

That night, when everyone was in their dens, asleep, Sandypelt snuck out of the Apprentice Den and into the nursery, where Firecloud slept with Sweetkit and Mosskit. Sandykit gently touched Firecloud to make sure she was fast asleep. She didn't budge, so Sandypelt carefully put Mosskit on her back, and Sweetkit in her mouth, and they headed for CrystalClan. They collapsed right in the middle of the camp.

The next morning, Sandypelt heard someone shout "Get up!" In her ear. She got up, but her kits weren't there! A brown tom was standing in front of her. "Come on- Spotstar wants to speak with you." The tom said. Sandypelt followed.

On her way to see Spotstar, several cats were staring at her. She heard them mutter things like, "Where is she from?" or "She has GoldenskyClan scent!" or "She's planning an attack- I just know it!"

When they got to Spotstar's den, the tom stepped forward. "Er...Spotstar? Here's the cat you wanted. You know- the one who was in our camp this morning. "Good. I'm coming now."

A huge, spotted tom stepped out of the den. He was a pale yellow, with orange spots. "Thank you, Briarwood. You may leave." With that, Briarwood left them alone. "Who are you? And why do you have GoldenskyClan scent?" Spotstar demanded.

Sandypelt shook a little. "I left them, because of that dirty, rotten, flea-bag Shadowstar! She treated me like an apprentice!" Sandypelt mewed fiercely. "She even took my kits!"

Spotstar purred in amusment. "Oh, those were your kits? I'm sorry, their in the nursery." Spotstar mewed. "You may stay as a queen until your kits have grown. Then, you will be welcomed as a Warrior. Until then, please go stay with your kits in the nursery. Briarwood will escort you." Spotstar mewed. Briarwood came back and led Sandypelt to the nursery.

A whole new life, right here in her paws.

XOXOXOXOX

End of Chapter one

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