Disclaimer: Rain is my O.C. Along with Scorch and future Bloodclan Warriors. BUT I do not own Bloodclan or Warriors Sorry, I wish though!


"Harder, Rain, use your claws!" A voice shouted, a black tom stood at the side as two she-cats fought. His black pelt, was smooth against his well-framed body. His left ear torn and a scar ran down his flank. His yellow eyes were narrowed to slits as he watched the she-cats fight,"Harder!" He yelled, once again.

Rain, a dark gray she-cat ran at the black she-cat with full force, slamming her head into her side. The black she-cat growled and swiped at Rain, but, she dodged before the hit could strike her. Rain jumped onto the she-cat and pinned her down, swiping at her face, causing good damage to her face. The black she-cat threw her off by kicking her belly, she jumped at Rain and bit into her leg as hard as she could. Rain hissed in pain but she just retorted by flailing in her grip, she flipped herself over so she was on top. Rain smirked as she stared down at the she-cat below her, she rose her unsheathed paw in the air when-

"That's enough," The black tom hissed, stalking over.

The black she-cat scurried away from Rain when her grip loosened. Rain watched the she-cat scurry away before turning to the tom, to her surprise she smacked her muzzle against his, "Ow" she muttered.

He rolled his eyes,"That shouldn't hurt weakling," he growled, though she could tell he wanted to snicker a bit. His gaze wandered around her body, it had a few cuts; some bleeding and some didn't. Her gray was matted with dust and her clear blue eyes shone with excitement, yet, exhaustion.

She nodded,"Sorry, Scorch," she replied.

His ear twitched and in one fast movement, he grabbed her and slammed her onto the floor, he pressed his paw against her head, "Bloodclan cats do not say sorry when it comes to inflicting pain or injury!" He shouted.

She laid limp until his paw pulled away from her head, she lifted it, "Fox-dung," she muttered, pushing herself onto her paws.

He glared at her,"What?" he demanded.

"Nothing," she muttered, clenching her teeth together before she could make an another retort against the tom.

She sat down and stood up straight,"What is next?" she asked, staring ahead.

He smirked,"Were going to learn how to contain your emotions and how to retort with them," he replied roughly. He walked over to her and swiped his unsheathed claw against her flank.

She yelped and growled,"What was that-"

"Trainning," he growled back, "If I do it again I want to hear you laugh," he spat as he raked his claws against her again.

She bit back a yowl and she gave a small chuckle.

He shook his head and scratched her again,"Laugh like you mean it!" he yelled.

She laughed,"Hah! Do you think your puny tricks can hurt me?" she smirked.

He rolled his eyes and gave a small laugh,"Getting cocky, I see?" he replied.

She smirked and nodded, "You said lau-Oof!" she groaned as he threw her onto the ground and pinned her down by pressing a paw to her neck.

"Did you know many cats die from being too cocky," he warned, though his eyes were eyes cold you could see the humor in the core.

She pushed him off, "Yeah, yeah." she muttered.

He landed gracefully on his paws,"Ok,Rain, now show me your stone face. Show NO emotion, got it?" he ordered.

She nodded and her face went blank.

He nodded approvingly, "Nice," he admitted.

She dipped her head,"I've been working on it."

He nodded, "Good, I'll see you tomorrow. Be prepared, your father is coming to watch." he warned, and with that he prodded away.

She blinked wildly, her father was coming? Since when did he watch her? She slowly got to her paws and began to pad around. She jumped onto a round silver tin and then used it to jump onto a red wall; or also known as a brick wall to Twolegs. She sat down and stared around the Twoleg Place.

Her paws shuffled anxiously as she thought about tomorrow, "Dad... the Leader of Bloodclan is going to watch me tomorrow? That means I'll have to push myself if I want to get his approval..." she murmured quietly. She closed her eyes and pictured her father. Tall, muscular, strong; his pale ginger pelt gleaming underneath the sunlight as it turns a bright gold... only if his heart was like gold. She blinked open her blue eyes and she licked her chest fur, "Tomorrow, Rain, you'll get your chance... I promise," she whispered to herself.


Too Short... Ju- no... TOO SHORT! AHHHH. XD I promise the rest will be WAY longer!

It's not the best but anyways, Rain is the daughter of the Leader of Bloodclan. Her father, (soon to be named) has never liked her. It is her most dearest goal in her life, to please her own father, now she will do ANYTHING to please him.