This is my first attempt at fan-fiction so, if you are inclined to be merciful then be so. I am sorry to have left off with only a tiny bit of story. Hope you all like this and please review.
'Thoughts'
"Speach"
Jutsu
Changes in scene
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. There are certain kunoichi I wouldn't mind owning in a few years... but I digress.
Prologue
"I'm sorry brother, I wasn't strong enough, please don't hate me for my weakness" that was the last thing the boy had said then he slipped away. Naruto stared at the memorial at the newest name etched into the ebony surface 'Uzumaki Onimaru,' 'No brother. I could never hate you, you gave your life for me. If anyone was too weak it was I. I failed too protect you, some big brother I turned out to be,' Naruto thought to himself as he walk back to his empty apartment.
He was surprised at how the silence of it all started to bother him, he who had lived alone for as far back as he could remember. 'Strange how much two short years could change your entire world.' Naruto missed the child he had come to call brother. The village might remember his brother as the 'Grey Ogre of Konoha,' he would always be his little brother. Brothers in all but blood, Naruto remember back to the day when he found a tired, scared, half starved child clothed in rags.
Flashback…..
Author's Note: Thank you for reading my prologue, I will try to update in the next couple of days, work and school allowing. Sorry for it being so short I have more, but I am still trying to get the wording and pacing more to my liking. If there is a pairing that you want me to place in the story, please feel free to put it in your review. I am sorry, but I do not feel comfortable writing any yaoi or yuri as of yet. Thanks once again for reading my oh too short prologue. Until I update again I hope that all the reader are having a good day and that my work might bring a smile (even if it is you laughing at my fumbling attempts at authorship).
