Hi guys this is my first story so i need reviews from you guys, and i will take flames. Tell me what this story needs. Anyways the setting is mostly at highschool but also in a few other places so I'm sorry if you guys get confused. Also: Disclaimer I don't own The Rangers Apprentice all thebooks belong to John Flanagan.(applaud)

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Evanlyns House 6:03

EVanlyn had just woken up when she looked at the time."OH SHIT, I'm going to be late!"she screamed.

She quickly dressed and made a dash at the bathroom. Only then did she realise she slipped on her skate board."AAH!" she screamed as she went down."Fuck I can't be late on the first day!" she said frustrated.

When she made it to the bathroomto apply makeup, brush her hair and teeth, then brought out her phone to call her best friend and cousin Alyss.

"Hey girl I'm almost readyand I'll be there soon."

"GIRLYOUHAVETOGETHERENOW!"

"Wow wow slow down what happened?"

"Can't talk get here now!" she said cheerfully.

"Ok I'm coming" Evanlyn said quickly.

Araluen High 7:03

"Okay I'm here what's up?"Evanlyn asked annoyed

"There is a new boy at school!" Alyss said happily.

"Really? That's it?"

"No Will is coming back too!"

"WHAT!" Evanlyn squealed.

"Yeah I know right!" she spquealed back.

Will was their best friend before he moved 2 years ago.

"OMG Evanlyn, ALYSS!" will ran up and huged them and kissed his sweetheart Alyss.

"WILL!" Then the whole school yard saw him and began to celebrate his return.

"Oh wow you said people would be excited to see us but I didn't see this happening!" said a strangely tall boy next Will.

"HORACE!?" screamed Evanlyn who was so suprised she fainted.

What do you think so far? I know what your thinking how does Will now Horace. And how does Evanlyn Know Horace. Well in the next chap dark memories resurface. please review.

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