Explaining

Stellar guardian: Alright I don't own any final fantasy games only my story.

Ramza: we also have something else to say.

Stellar guardian: Oh right, the plan.

Stellar guardian: Here's what you do, you read the chapter, you then review, then sometime in the week e mail me with character ideas, after that wait I'll write the next chapter and you might read about your character.

Well here the main character to start:

Name: Judas

Class: lancer

2nd ability: bushido

Reaction ability: dragon spirit

Support ability: equip knife

Move ability: Ignore height

Okay now the chapter

Chapter 1: the loss

A lancer appeared on a black Chocobo with a female summoner, a male ninja, many squires and wizards, and a woman looking much like a Divine Knight behind him. "Charge!" the lancer yelled as the men ran down to the city below. The sound of metal clashing was everywhere. But in a few hours the knight and warriors of this city were longer an issue.

"Yeah!" a wizard stated

"Another win for Goltana." Judas said to himself.

Goltana's castle

Judas entered Goltana's presence,

"My lord, we took the Hakuten at the village."

"Good, now you and you men should…………. Take the week off, go home see your family, that sort of stuff."

"Yes lord." said Judas bowing and walking out. When he was outside, he saw his knights.

"Knights we are of the job for the week!" after he spoke cheers came from the crowd. One man stood over the rest.

"Sir."

"Yes Jack."

"We wanted to give you this," the knight passed his 8000 gill. "For all the work you had to go though."

"Thank you." Judas said mounting his chocobo. He left saying nothing more.

Judas' village

The lancer was shocked to see his home destroyed. "Helen!" He yelled over the broken down city. "Wait, Helen would have left." He flew out his chocobo and searched the though the rubble and charred wood. Hearing a child's cry sent him diving into the pile of dead wood and destroyed bricks. He did not just find a baby, he found his son. The baby was wrapped in fine cloth and had soft, red hair like his father. Another death corps knight came to the city on a chocobo. Judas walked to his and asked "What happened here?"

"Lord Goltana ordered us to take this town down looking for the Hakuten."

"But why?" he asked the other knight

"All I know, is you carry a Hakuten child in your hands"

Before he said any thing else he was stabbed with a long sword slaying his defenceless son. Judas laid there until some men dragged him to a chocobo and brought him to his fortress……