So finally got my phone to turn on so this is an edited verison of chapter one. I'm already working on chapter two so it might be up tonight :D So this the edited first chapter I posted last night.
Hate Me.
Thor steadied his brother as the tesseract pulled them to Asgard. Heimdall was the first person to grace their sight. The Gate Keeper betrayed nothing as he looked at the two men, though Loki gave him a glare still hindered by the iron muzzle. Loki then looked past the gate keeper to see someone running towards them, gold fabric streaming behind them. The only person it could, it had to be Frigga. Loki tensed as Thor made his way towards her. He swallowed a lump forming in his throat, he didn't want to see her. Or rather he didn't want her to see him like this: shackled and muzzled like an animal. He stood back, an bitter twinge ran through Loki as watched Frigga wrap her arms around Thor.
"Oh, Thor thank the Norns you've returned safe." She sighed as she kissed his cheek and held him tighter. Loki turned away feeling out of place and obviously unwanted, he only removed his eyes from the bridge when he heard a sharp gasp. His green eyes raised and met her blue ones.
"Loki … oh Loki." Frigga let go of Thor and reached out for her other son face. Loki flinched from her touch, a low growl came from his throat. "Loki please, it hurts me to see you as such." She said tears welling in her eyes. "Do you think it pleases me to see you chained?" Her voice broke as she spoke. Loki thought yes as he glared and she must have been able to read it because the tears fell.
"Loki please, she has been worried for you." Thor said disappointed in his brother's actions. They had all been worried about Loki, fearing they had lost him forever. A guard approached grabbing Loki by his arms. Loki fumed, they thought they could sweet talk him, pretend to care for him and then have him treated like a worthless prisoner, a monster. He struggled against the guards as they pulled him away from Thor and Frigga towards Asgard were Odin awaited.
"What's the meaning of this?" Thor demanded before the guards before they could lead Loki away. Thor knew Odin would want to see him but the guards were unneeded.
"The Allfather demanded the prisoner be brought to him the moment he steps into Asgard." The man replied, Thor merely nodded for there was nothing he could do. He couldn't go against his father not in this.
Well here we are, I like this better, I don't know it seems better. Any way working on chapter two might have it up tonight. Thanks guys!
