Hi everyone. Just some short pieces of writing for you to read and tell me what you think of them. Thanks
You're crying. I'm dying.
How do you finish a life you haven't started?
Dance with me in the moonlight.
Sway with me in the ocean.
Jump through a ring of fire with me.
Shoot down a cloud.
Promise me you'll never cry out of sadness, but cry out of happiness, for our love will stand against eternity.
When you're ready, float on the cloud we caught up to heaven.
There I'll be waiting, waiting to dance with you in the moonlight, sway with you in the ocean and ready to shoot for the stars with my one true love.
Darkness falls.
Shadows appear.
Ghosts of the past emerge.
Your smile begins to fade.
Don't say this is the end.
Please don't say anything.
Don't let the darkness swallow me whole.
Left your coat hanging in the hallway.
Left your shoes at the back door.
Left your hat at the end of the bed.
I am still waiting for you.
Waiting for you to walk through the door, saying "G'day love, how was ya day?"
Never again will I hear those words.
Never again will I see you.
You are just an everlasting memory now.
Graceful and cheerful on the outside,
Silently crying on the inside.
Lost my way in life,
Don't know which way to turn in a world fast becoming an unknown one.
There is no end to the pain endured,
Yet there is a timely end to happiness.
Love comes and goes, but loneliness is always lurking.
It is difficult to see such happiness when busy drowning sorrows.
To see the light, one must escape the common dark surroundings,
One has become familiar with.
To experience what life has to offer,
You must first open your heart to change.
It is vital to know that not all experiences will be good.
It is apart of life to move through difficult times.
Remember to pick yourself up off the ground,
And life will be yours to live.
Darkness
Conversations full of nothing,
Useless lectures,
Random wanderings,
And forbidden love.
Watching hopes and dreams fade into long-awaited misery.
Crawling back to what I've become familiar with;
darkness.
Is this what my life has come to?
Floundering through the void.
Listening to the gentle breeze,
Under the soft glow of the sun,
I feel ready to face my fears,
Let's end this darkness once,
And for all.
The past weaves it many regrets and indescrepencies through the present and the future.
To bare your soul, may come easy to some but many cannot escape the shadows of their past.
If living a lie consents to escaping such shadows,
Few remain content with continuing in this deception.
Deception of the heart.
Many would rather face the truth before dying of a life built upon lies.
It is better to have lived on through the heartache that comes with truth, then to not have lived at all.
If we are to live in the future, really live.
We must bare our souls occasionally to strangers and to those we hold closest to our hearts.
Let the shadows creep out around us.
And appreciate how we have lived and prospered through such hard times.
Hey everybody, i'd really appreciate if you reviewed these and told me what you thought of them. I know, they might seem a bit depressive, but at the time i hadn't written any happy pieces before. Working on that :)
