This is my first try, in making a Hetalia yaoi story, so please review and tell some stuff that I should or should not add. Oh, I put alot of spacing so it can be easier to read. Hope it helps! Rated M, don't like, don't read please! I do not own any of the charecters and if I did I wouldn't be doing this.


Paring- Yao Wang (China) and Ivan Braginski (Russia) ~I tend to switch from country name to charecter name or vice versa, sorry~

Rated- M

Title- Flawless at Thought, Flawed by Act


~Past~ Russia's (Ivan's) thoughts

"I'm sorry! I'm sorry…" I whaled in terror of what I have done.

I didn't mean it. I don't like to hurt you, but I …but I can't stop these urges of wanting to do this. Day in and day out, I tried to stop myself, yet it did not

work no matter how hard I tried. And, I always wanted to know; why, why you didn't tell me to stop when you bleed endlessly, when screamed from pain

that I made, and when your tears dried out as you feel asleep. Yao, I'm sorry for doing this. I sorry for being the person I am.

I'm sorry for falling in love with you, Yao...


~Present~

"Hmm…," Yao moaned in pleasure from a growing erection as I made southing circle like movements with my hand on his back, while our lips

were touching. His lips were warm, and so inviting I couldn't stop myself from biting down on his lower lip till it bleed scarlet. In the current

position we were in, anyone wouldn't have second thought to what we were doing. Yao was there with both legs spread out sitting on my lap,

grinding up and down with that delicious movement I just crave for. And I have my hands under his shirt exploring his oh so wonderful 'vital

regions'. As I licked the rest of the blood of his lower lip I graved his growing erection and made him moan so diligently. I took this chance to slip

my tongue into his mouth for more than a mere peck. Certainly, I knew that Yao wanted more, by him pressing his body closer to mine so the kiss

could deepen. And there he went grinding harder this time to make both of us gasp in pleasure of the warmness that overwhelmed us.

Yao and I are different from any others; we aren't needy for sexual relief or pleasure, so we just do it for bond, remembrance, and more

surprising love. The first ones to always come to the world meetings are me and Yao, and that is how I came to realized that I felt more for him

than any comrade should. He was my China, not to obtain, but to hold dear to my ever melting heart. Yet, in the beginning I didn't know about

this feeling that I have. All I knew was how to concur and destroy, and that was my first mistake leading to my realization; on how to depend and

want someone for love and not power.

And, that is were my story begins...


Well, I hoped you liked the first chapter, I know it is short, but in the future there will be longer chapters! Please review about whet you thought of my story and what you think I should fix about it so I won't make the same mistake in the future!

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