This is the first time I've ever posted a story online!!!(Very happeez 4 myselz) well, this is my 1st Naruto fanficcy (even tho I'm a live hard fan!) I'm open 2 good and nasty reviews and there r 2 stories that I highly recommend;
'Hurt' is a romance/hurt/comfort story that starts as a sasu/hina but ends as a nar/hina. It's rated T and GarraRoxmySox made it (yay!)
'Happy Now?' is a romance/friendship with sas/sak .it's rated T and Reesies Lover made it. (Yay again!)
I really want them 2 review my story.
This isn't an AU, but I am adding a few characters. This story will take place before the Chuunin exams…
Disclaimer: Naruto was made by a man. I am not that man. I am not a man period. The original storyline doesn't belong to me.
Claimer: I do own any changes to the storyline as well as characters that aren't originally from Naruto. This is my original work and I hope that no one uses my idea. I really tried to do something that hasn't been done without changing too much of the original story line.
Enough of my ranting. You wanted a story, so, here we go!!!
Chapter 1- running from the rain
She was in sweet bliss with him. Her eyes were closed as she was enjoying a kiss. Suddenly, she tasted blood. She even choked on some of it. When she opened her eyes, six kunai were in the back of her boyfriend- whose blood was still coming out of his mouth. 'Must've concealed their chakra so we wouldn't notice.' She thought. 'Bastards.'
"ALL RIGHT--! Let's get home. Master Iruka's gonna take me out for ramen …" Naruto had started blabbering about ramen and Konohamaru, Sakura asked Sasuke for a date- which he refused-, and Inari's grandfather named their bridge 'The Great Naruto Bridge'. Everything was as it should be in Konoha.
The next day, the team waited for Kakashi, but as usual, he was late. After another lame excuse, he explained that they had a new mission: A member of the hidden rain had three important scrolls. They were to bring the messenger to Konoha safely. An easy C-rank mission.
Naruto- being the idiot he was- challenged Sasuke. "I'm gonna be better than you Sasuke-teme!" Sasuke simply replied "Dobe." And walked away leaving Naruto steamed. Sakura ran after Sasuke again-still trying to score a date. That made Naruto even madder.
It began to pour on her as she ran. She ran faster and faster, trying to reach her goal. She, too, had kunai clinging to her back. 'It hurts so much. When will it go away? I run, and I run, trying to escape. The pain, oh God, it hurts so much. When will it go away?' It wasn't the pain from the kunai in her back that she was referring to; it was the pain of loosing him. A pain that she thought would never go away, not by a long shot. But soon, she'll find out that she was wrong.
(A/N)
I think that was a good start since that was my first Naruto f-f. Please review. Is there anything I need to work on? (I don't think I do but… (Ha ha, that sounded like Sasuke speaking) if I do, please tell. DON'T HOLD BACK ON YOUR YOUTHFUL KNOWLEDGE!!! (And that sounded like Lee :p))
I bet you're all wondering "Who's the mystery girl?" but IIIIII'LLLLLLLLLL never TEELLLLMWAHAHAHA!!!!!(Keeps laughing like a maniac until I start choking. Now I'm hacking like a maniac)
