From your world to ours: rewrite chapter 1

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Maru) Hello Lulu-chan and I have decided to rewrite F.Y.W.T.O because we felt that it was going in a direction we didn't like. Not to mention there were a lot of places we forgot to put certain things and the story wouldn't make sense--

Lulu) --So we're going to rewrite it, we're sorry for anyone who liked the first version of the story but we are the authoresses' and we didn't like it so we're going to fix it, right Maru-chan?

Maru) Yep that's the plan at least, we're not going to change anything big it will basically be the same plot line and we'll put the plot into the story more, also the same ninja will be in it.

Lulu) But there will be more time skips to Konoha and Bob and Tom will be a little more present in the story so will Megan.

Maru) Okay now that we have all of that stuff out of the way now to the story, Shikamaru do the disclaimer.

Shikamaru) But it's a pain.

Lulu) So are you, now do it or I'll blackmail you with these pictures I have of you sleeping with a teddy bear. (Holds up pictures)

Maru) Awwww that's so cute can I see Lulu-chan?

Lulu) Sure here. (Shows Maru the pictures)

Maru) Awwww its adorable Shikamaru has a teddy. What's its name?

Shikamaru) Its ko- hey stop that. Fine I'll do the disclaimer Maru-chan and Lulu-chan do not own Naruto. There now hand over those pictures.

Lulu) Never (Runs away)

Maru) Um right anyways to the rewrite of F.Y.W.T.O.

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(Lulu's POV)

"Maru-chan you should help me with my Math homework when we get home, why because you're my buddy and you love me…like a sister" I said looking over at the girl who has been my friend for the past four years.

"Mmm, Okay I'll help you but I'm not doing it for you Lu-chan" Maru said as we walked down the hall of our school.

"Now would I ask you to do something like that Maru?" I asked giving her an innocent look or at least trying too.

"Yes you would, Oh yeah we still need to find something to build for our class project for Mr. Smith or we'll fail this semester" she said as I pushed open the double doors to go toward the bus stop as I did the doors collided with someone, knocking them to the ground. Stepping outside to apologize to them, the blonde female was pushing herself up then when she was on her feet she turned. When I saw who she was my apology turned into satisfaction I had hit Megan hilt, the school tool if you know what I mean.

"You bitch, apologize now you freak" the blonde teen demanded glaring at me, smirking I lifted my chin.

"Hum Maru-chan do you smell something?" I asked sniffing the air glancing at Maru who was doing the same then replied.

"Why yes I do Lu-chan I smell the stench of a conceited bitch"

"Shut the hell up you freaks, god no wonder no one wants to hang around you two it's a surprise your families want you, oh that's right yours doesn't" She said a smirk on her overly red lips while she looking at Maru who was glaring at her, seeing Maru tense up I decided to say something.

"At least me and Maru didn't have to bribe each other to be friends unlike some people" I said motioning to the four girls behind Megan.

"Shut it Bear" Megan said flipping her blonde dyed hair over her shoulder.

"You know what Megan why don't you take your fucking finger nail painting, toe nail painting, fake, ' nothing better to do than to piss off other people' bitchy self and go jump off of a cliff" I said looking at her a small grip on Maru's hoodie sleeve.

"God you two are so weird, why don't you both get some contacts and you" she said looking at Maru "dye your hair a normal color then maybe you'll get some real friends" Megan said then spun on her heels and walked away the four girls following close behind her.

"That fucking bitch how dare she talk about my family she had no right, then to insult the way we look I just, I hate that girl…we'll get her tomorrow I have an idea" Maru said smiling like a cat.

"Maru-chan you scare me when you're like this buddy" I said as we stepped onto the bus as we walked to our seats people stared at us either trying to be sneaky about it or just out right glaring holes into our backs. Here's why people stare, me and Maru look different than other people let's start with me first. I look pretty normal except my eyes, my left eye is lavender colored and my right eye is a deep purple and my hair is stark black and has natural silver high lights in it and my personality is a bit vocal.

Then there's Maru her differences are a bit more noticeable, her eyes are a golden yellow like cats eyes. Then her hair is a silver-white and she has a quiet personality except when Megan is involved, our choice in clothing is darker than most people, I like greens and reds while Maru likes purples and gray and we both like black and Maru always wears hoodies or baggie shirts.

"Hey Lu-chan what are we doing this weekend cause I'm off Friday and Saturday" Maru said looking out the window at the passing buildings.

"I don't know yet but you can't be at the apartment Friday night" I said looking over at her.

"Why?" she asked turning from the window to look at me.

"It's a full moon remember" I said simply.

"Oh right I forgot about that, I guess I could do some shopping then" she said mostly to herself then the bus pulled up to our stop. Getting off we started off toward the apartment, and then Maru stopped and looked towards downtown.

"Lu-chan I'm still a little pissed about what Megan said, can we go downtown there's a new book store I wanted to check out" she said.

"Book store now I'm interested, yeah I guess I really don't want to go home either I already have to be home alone while you're at work" I said as we started toward downtown.

Me and Maru share an apartment that my parents let me have while they were away on a two year world tour for their corporation. The apartment is next door to two men my parents have known since collage, their names are Bob and Tom and their like my second set of parents. I had officially lived in the apartment by myself for about two hours before I was bored out of my mind.

I then decided to ask Maru if she wanted to move in with me to get away from her family because I had the room for her and possible eight more people. Maru accepted my offer and has been living with me for the past four months, but she kept her job to help buy stuff for the apartment. People think it's odd that it's my apartment and not Maru's because she's older than me I'm only 17 and Maru is 18.

"Maru-chan, when do you go to work today?" I asked as we walked past some shops.

"Six to nine I think" she said then stopped and looked into a shop window, it was a costume store and you could see Naruto character plushies from where we stood. Getting a look from Maru I sighed and we went into the store. After thirty minutes of looking at the costumes and deciding on what plushies to buy we walked out of the store, looking at my phone I turned to Maru.

"Mar-chan its five-thirty shouldn't you get going?" I asked looking at my friend and the Akamaru and Shikamaru plushies she had bought.

"Yeah I guess so, man and I really wanted to find that new book store too, Oh well guess I can come back Friday see you later Lu-chan" she said turning and walking away.

After Maru had disappeared into the crowd of people I resumed the hunt for the book store Maru had told me about, she had forgotten the address. So now I had to wander around downtown looking for a book store. Turning off of the main street I ended up on a small side street, ready to turn back a small red brick building caught my eye. It was between two bigger buildings wondering if it was the book store I walked toward it.

Reaching the building there was a small wooden sign above the door that read 'Anna's used books' opening the door a bell chimed above me and the smell of lilac's hit me. Sneezing from the smell I looked around the store, it was small but all the walls were covered with books and there were book cases in rows set along the middle of the floor. Walking up and down the rows of books I looked for something interesting, as I passed by a row of books I saw a return cart of older looking, dusty books.

Walking to the cart I looked at them they where thick books and none of them looked interesting, until I moved a book on magic laying under it was a thin book. Picking it up I saw it was bound in tan leather with a clasp on the side of it then the design on the front caught my eye. It was a spiral like the design on the leaf ninjas headbands, smiling I walked to the counter and tapped the bell and waited

Behind the counter a faded green wooden door opened and an elderly woman walked out a small smile on her lips. She was wearing a forest green robe and her gray-white hair was pulled into a loose bun at the base of her neck. As she walked toward me the small smile on her lips fell away when she saw the book in my hands, grabbing it from my hands with lightning speed she smiled at me again.

"I'm sorry dear but you cannot buy this book you can have any other book in the store but this one" she said still smiling.

"Why can't I have that book? I like the design on the front of it" I said annoyed that she wouldn't let me have the book.

"I'm sorry but you can't have this it is not meant for children" she said.

Sighing I walked away to find another book. After another ten minutes I found a book called 'cooking for dummies' and walked to the counter again not seeing the old woman I was about to ring the bell but I saw something. Under a stack of books was the leather bound one, smiling I reached into my pocket and pulled out twenty-five dollars placing it on the counter I grabbed the leather bound book and the cook book then quickly walked out of the book store.

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(Maru's POV)

Running up the stairs of the apartment building I held my plushies close to my chest as not to drop them down the ten flights of stairs. Opening the door to the stairway I ran to the apartment stopping in front of it I reached into my pocket to get my key, not feeling it I tried my other pocket not there either. Dropping the plushies I franticly searched my pockets for my key but sadly I didn't have it with me.

Groaning I hit my head on the white door of the apartment, maybe jarring my memory, Lulu had made an extra key just for this purpose, I'm forgetful.. Grabbing up my plushies I ran back down the stairs and to the lobby, panting I reached the desk and a curly red head was sitting there. Looking up she smiled and handed me the key thanking her I started back up the steps, opening the door I ran to my room tossing my plushies onto my bed I changed and was back out the door in less than fifteen minutes.

When I got to work I looked at the clock it was only five-fifty-five I still had a whole five minutes to spare.

"Hey Maru your on time" came a women's voice from behind me turning around I saw my boss Mrs. Norton.

"Yeah shocking huh" I said laughing a little.

"Kind-of, well go ahead and get to work you can start now hurry up" she said clapping her hands at me.

"Right boss lady" I said grabbing a note pad and walking over to a table I worked at a restaurant owned by Mrs. Norton I've been working as a waitress for the past two years. It's not a bad job you met interesting people then again you met people you want to kill or beat severely. Finally when the dinner was closed I was washing down the tables as always when I saw something in one of the back booths.

When I got to that table I saw it was a book, picking it up I looked at the front and back of it, it was bound in chocolate colored leather and had two clasps on it. Then I saw the design on the back cover it looked like a flame surrounded by the Leaf village symbol. Looking around the dinner I didn't see anyone the book could belong to so I placed it in my apron and finished cleaning, when I was done I put the book in my hoodie pocket and started home. After about two blocks my curiosity finally won, pulling the book from my hoodie I opened it and flipped to a random page and read the poem on the left page.

'From the darkness of our world into the light of another

Through the raging seas, through the gentle breeze,

Through the endless skies to the open arms of our loves

There will be two princesses who shall save our world.

But our Salvation will come with a price.

The sacrifice of one.

So let it be.'

After reading the poem I shut the book and sighed, I grab a free book and it's not even interesting.

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(The Hyuuga library)

Sitting in front of a pile of old scrolls and books was Hinata Hyuuga she had an open scroll about medical jutsu setting on her lap and some more closed scrolls sitting around her. As she looked over the scrolls she had to smile to herself, she was getting better in her medic skills, she was an apprentice to not only Kurenai but also Lady Tsunade and she had acquired some of Tsunade's superhuman strength.

Ever sense Naruto had left to train in the mountains with Jairaiya Hinata had decided to make herself stronger also, to prove that she was worth something. Somehow her determination got through; her father treated her better now than he had in her Genin days. Stretching her arms above her head Hinata looked down at the pile of medical scrolls and note books she had chosen to take home.

There where at least ten scrolls and three note books those would give her something to do between her training with Tsunade and also Kurenai. Standing up Hinata stepped backward and onto a scroll, losing her balance she fell back knocking into a bookshelf full of old, dusty scrolls and books. Hitting the floor the books and scrolls fell on top of her coughing from the dust Hinata sat up and looked at the books and scrolls sitting in her lap.

Then she saw two books tied together with twine picking them up she looked at the cover of the lighter book. There was an odd symbol on it, the symbol was spiraled down like a tornado and there was a small kanji in it Hinata didn't know. Flipping the two books over she looked at the back of the other book and the symbol was plain it was a spiral symbol like the leaf symbol. Sighing Hinata placed the two bound books with the others she was taking and placed the books that had fallen back into their proper places.

Once in her room Hinata tried to concentrate on the medical scroll in front of her but her thoughts kept drifting to the bound books sitting on her bed. Finally her curiosity won and she set the scroll on her desk aside and sat on her bed taking the twin off the books and opening the first book to a random page Hinata saw two pictures on the pages she had opened too.

The page on the left had a black and white picture of a girl wearing a crown of flowers and her hair fell to her shoulders and is dark Hinata couldn't tell her eye color but she assumed they were a dark color also. Then the picture on the left was also black and white and of another girl her hair was slightly longer and her crown looked to be made of ice or glass and her hair was white-gray in the picture and her eyes where lighter.

Scanning the pictures Hinata looked at the bottom of each page and in hand written words 'The princesses' was written, turning the page the words written on the next page Hinata couldn't read. Flipping through the rest of the book it was all the same, an old dialect she didn't know looking at the pages of the book she jumped when she heard her name.

"Hinata-Sama" Turning on her bed Hinata was looking at her cousin Neji.

"Oh N-Neji-nii-san can I h-help you w-with something?" she asked looking at the older Hyuuga.

"You never came to dinner, your father asked me to come and check on you to make sure you where fine" He said looking at her.

"Y-yes I'm fine I j-just got c-caught up in m-my studies" she said her hand on the odd books getting an idea she looked at her cousin "Um N-Neji-nii-san could y-you come look at t-this book?" she asked holding it out to him. Taking the book from her he looked through it then closed it and handed it back to her turning around he walked toward the door.

"Hinata-Sama tomorrow we will visit Nara, Shikamaru and ask him to translate that book it seems… quite interesting" he said and with that he walked out of her room shutting the door behind him.

"W-well I guess Neji-Nii is c-coming w-with me also" Hinata said to herself and closing the book and setting it on her table then she crawled under her blankets to sleep.

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(Lulu's POV)

Running down the street clutching the two books to my chest I ducked and dodged around the people around me cursing the busy day. After a few blocks I slowed to a brisk walk and headed to the apartment, stepping into the lobby I walked to the elevator and hit the button. Getting to the tenth floor I walked to the apartment and opened the door, not seeing Maru's boots by the door I knew she wasn't home yet.

Kicking my shoes off I pulled the books from my jacket tossing the cook book onto the kitchen counter I walked to the living room with the other and sat on the couch. Flipping the book open I started to thumb through the book when I noticed two pages where missing, rolling my eyes at the idea of the old women being overbearing of a ruined book. Sighing I flipped through the rest of the pages then there was a huge bang, jumping I dropped the book onto the floor.

Standing from my seat I ran to the door flinging it open I looked out into the hall seeing smoke slide out from under Bob and Tom's apartment door I figured they had blown up another experiment. Walking to their door I knocked sharply on the wooden door while yelling.

"Hey Bob, Tom are you two okay in there?" then the door opened and smoke poured into the hallway and two men were standing in the doorway sucking in fresh air.

"Oh hello (cough) Lu (cough) Lu" Tom said Shaking his head releasing more ash into the air.

"I'm sorry (cough) if we woke you" Bob said running his hand through his blonde hair and shaking loose more ash.

"No I was awake, but what did you two blow up this time? Didn't the building manager tell you that you weren't allowed to experiment in the building anymore?" I said looking at the soot covered men.

"Yes, but Bob said that this one wouldn't explode" Tom said fixing his glasses that where bent on his nose.

"Um, I think Bob was wrong because that was an explosion… what where you two doing anyways?" I asked curious to know what it was that blew up this time.

"Oh we were trying to make super coffee" Bob said.

"Super…coffee" I repeated slowly an odd look on my face.

"Yes it has more caffeine in it and can keep you going all day with just one cup" Tom said smiling.

"Sweetness, when you guys get it down and it won't blow up in our faces me and Maru-chan will try it" I said and walked back to my apartment waving to them.

An hour later Maru walked in the door taking her boots off she walked into the front room and sat in her chair. Looking at me she cleared her throat to get my nose out of my book looking at her she spoke.

"I think I know the answer already but why is the hallway covered in ash and soot?" she asked pulling her hair from its ponytail.

"Bob and Tom blew up their coffee experiment" I said simply and went back to my book.

"Oh, well I'm taking a shower then going to bed you should go to bed too, remember we get Megan back tomorrow and we have to get up early to prepare the punishment Lu-chan" Maru said standing up and walking down the hall.

"Okay mommy I'll go after this chapter" I said sarcastically rolling my eyes at her mother like tone.

"Kay then night Lulu-chan" she said ignoring my sarcasm.

"Mmm, Night Maru-chan" finishing my chapter I walked to my room and changed into a pair of basketball shorts and a tank top then crawled under my covers, wondering what Maru had planned for Megan, whatever it was it was going to be fun.

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Maru) Well there is chapter one of the rewrite we hope you guys liked it because we did and we think it's a lot better too right Lu-chan?

Lulu)….

Maru) Lu-chan give Shikamaru the blackmail pictures already and come help me do the talking part.

Lulu) I would but if I get out of the tree he'll kill me.

Shikamaru) No, I won't.

Maru) Yeah he's too lazy to kill you, now get down here and help me Lu-chan.

Shikamaru) It's not that I'm lazy it's just not worth my time.

Lulu) Like Maru-chan said you're too lazy to kill me and here you can have the stupid pictures…cry baby.

Shikamaru) (snatches pictures and walks off).

Maru) Whoa you really gave him the pictures.

Lulu) Yes, it was the noble thing to do…plus I made copies here's yours.

Maru) See this is why you're my friend.

Lulu) I know anyways please read and review the story.

Maru) We would really love some feedback to see if anyone likes this version better.

Maru and Lulu) One more thing this is REALLY IMPORTANT WE NEED A BETA-READER...if you're a Beta-reader or you know a good Beta-reader please, please leave us a review telling us about yourself or the Bet-reader you know.