Hello!
First this is my first Beybladefic and tougether with that I try to write it in English, so don't expect to much from me! But before I say much to it I gave you the beginning and then a few points from me to this story. Please read and rewiew
A young boy, maybe in the age of five stands in front of a car, waiting for the mother of his best friend. Next to him stands a girl with elbow long,dark blond and curly hair and grey- blue eyes. They held each others hand. The mother of the girl come two them and also take her daughters hand to take tem both with her.
They make there way trought a nice garden with beautiful flowers all around up to a friendly coulored building.
The name of the girl is Savina, but the most call her only Sav. Her bist friend is Kai, the boy with grey and blue hair and dark red eyes. Normaly the both do everything tougether, but some weeks ago Kais mother went ill and so she decided that it would be the best for him to stay az his grandfathers' for the time. He wanted to stay in Savinas' home, what that wasn't a possibility, because she and her familiy have a holiday planed.
Interesting looks Kai at the sourounding, it seems to be a nice place here. But that isn't really a point for him, he couldn't understand why his mother forbidden him to stay with his best friend. He don't want to go to his grandfather, exspecaly because he don't remember him well. He seen him maybe twice times in his live and had never realy speak a few words with him.
So, I think for the first time that's all from me and whwen you still read this I wand to use it to make some points for my story, would be nice when you read them.
I'm a fourteen old girl from Germany, so my Englisch isn't very good or to say it directly, it's terrible
Because of Point 1 I hope you'll leave a comment for me with or without login. It doesn't metter if it's only one or two words.
I seach a betareader for the story how help me, so when you like the story, it would be nice, when you help me searching.
I'm not very fast with writing, because I haven't plenty of time so it can be a peace of time from capture to capture.
I think that this was all, so a nice day anymore, hope to hear from you
your Sav
