Prompt 1
GG Quote - '...my teammate is disobeying my direct order.'


It is a Beautiful Afternoon in Equestria. Birds are Chirping. Flowers Blooming. Some Kids everyday afterschool, like me are resuming our hobbies of playing video games after some quick study. My quote is 'Getting things over with no matter the cost.' and I like to persist because that is my virtue.

Anyways, time for another sweet session of Starcraft 2 Legacy of the Void. I may be happy with the birthday gift, but not so much when Teammates likes to be effing stubbornoids.

I sat at the Computer Screen and type things in to log in. Game Run and here I am.

I rush to the 4v4 and choose Zerg. Game found. 3...2...1... Another Fort map as usual. For Maps are where we allied players share the base together. Much better than a 2-player-each fort in 4v4. So now let' say some hellos to Last Remnant, a Monlyth map that looks almost similar to Mars Sara.

There's my other teammates. Terran, Protoss, Protoss. One of those must be Classmates of mine. StairsFTW who must be Silverstream, and YakKayOh must belong to Yona. Terran and Protoss. Nice combination. The other Protoss player is unknown to me. GramSword.

"G.L.H.F.!" Typed in Silverstream at first,

"Hi Girls!" I typed and they greeted back,

The opponent team... There are two randoms, but two other picked Terran. Before anything else I was pinged. I use the color toggle to find the teal pinger which belongs to GramSword all along. It pinged rapidly.

"Derek, Please rush." It typed,

"Okay," I typed back, "I will attack in 4."

"They'll attack quicker than that."

"Okay then, 3 it is." I typed,

"..." is what GramSword typed before followed by "Do it in 2."

I sighed and do whatever. Getting a healthy economy.

"Stop with the Ecoing Bull****!" GramSword typed, "All Commanders are suppose to rush!"

I do whatever, getting more drones before assigning one to become a Spawning Pool.

"Zerglings come first before Drones." GramSword typed, "You should know that."

I ignored and do whichever still. As soon Spawning pool comes, plus one more Overlord, I select Zerglings and the three larvas started hatching. I see a single marine coming in, belonging to the Yellow, which is our opposing team, the color which I set to. And just in time for my zerglings to be spawn, rushing all the way to the first incoming marine. Then two more which gets surrounded. Two died in battle, but with two equals four additional Zerglings, I regroup them and rush them to the Terran Barracks.

"Way to go!" typed in SilverStream,

The Terran Barracks then lifts up before moving to the base. I rush the Zerglings to the barricade already, Looks like they are smart against the rush so I pull them back.

"No. Go back." GramSword typed, "Go back and attack."

I move to the debris but GramSword rebuted, "Not the Debris. the Front gate."

"They're barricaded." I typed,

"Do as I say and Push!"

I rush in and find SCVs repairing. I attempt three times before pulling back.

"Why are you not being aggressive?!" GramSword asked,

"It's suicide. I won't do it."

"Last Chance, Attack!" GramSword typed,

"I will not let my Zerglings Die." I typed back

I pull my Zerglings back and set them to the Xel Naga tower on my side. It was then GramSword did some typing.

"Gee Gee, my teammate is disobeying my direct orders." typed in GramSword before the system message displays 'GramSword has left the Game!'

"Yona no like Gram." typed in Yona,

"I know. GramSword should've learn it's not good attacking a tough barricade." replied by Silverstream,

I scroll back to the base and start building on the first Expo, while getting some Vespene built and mined. Base Upgrade, and then Spire. Mutalisks coming before sending them to scout. What surprise, the same Terran Barracks trying to sneak fly in, only to turn around. My Eight Mutas starts firing on them, and it is too slow to escape. It catches on fire from rapid shots of acid glaives before BOOM! I then rush my Mutas to do some Economic Damaging.

"Are you ready?" asked Silverstream,

"Yona ready." replied Yona, I scrolled to see Six Thors, and Silver's combined Air force. Voids and Phoenixes. Two of them reach the Barricade and I mode my Mutalisks to attack the SCVs, decreasing their repairing rates.

I recognized some of the names. SpyroIsCoolz, DarkPrincess. That must be Spyro and Cynder. Together as Zerglings sending Hydralisks. I pull the Mutalisks back so the Thors and cannon them. Silver sends her the Phoenixes levitate Hydras up for her Voids to pick out. I resume to damaging most of the economy, by blowing up SCVs, Drones, and Probes. Then destroying their Hydralisk dens, preventing anymore Production of that unit.

"Not bad Kids. GG." typed in by SpyroIsCoolz before he and Cynder left. Followed by other two players.

Then Sandbar who is known as SandBar in this game only typed in the message. "See Gallus? I told you Derek won't fall for the same trick." Sandbar left, followed by Gallus.

VICTORY shines our screen, and looks like it must be Gallus that tried to Proxy with his Barracks.

"Yona's getting sick of Sand's stupid trick." Yona typed, she must be angered.

"No worries." I typed a reply, "I'm onto any Proxys this time."

I return to the Menu Screen. Only to get a whispering from a Teacher named 'PrincessofBooks' who must be from Ms. Sparkle.

"Well done on your Match." Sparkle typed, "But I heard an Argument going on again."

I do some replying, "It was GramSword." I hit enter before continue to type, "He's forcing me to follow direct orders and let my Zerglings attack a Barricaded Ramp."

"It's not that hard. They're just Depots and Barracks." replied Sparkle,

"Well what if they have around ten SCVs to keep the repairing?" I replied,

"Around Ten?" Sparkle replied, "That must be Sandbar. I now understand, but GramSword? I now know him."

"The last thing he said before leaving is 'Gee Gee, my teammate is disobeying my direct orders.'" I replied to her,

"Well thank you for the Notification. I'll see to it that GramSword will receive detention." Ms. Sparkle said, "I know he has Leadership, but that's no excuse forcing orders upon someone." I smiled, hopefully he'll learned his lesson. "Did something else happened during your match? Well besides the rush?"

"Well..." I begin to type before thinking, "Gallus's proxy barracks was exposed."

"Really?"

"Yes, I know how to send Zerglings early." I typed, "But it also helps me Scout for incoming Proxies. Gallus also tried it again."

"I think that earns him a 5 Mile Jog." Sparkle typed, "Again, Congrats. Please carry on with your game."

"Okay" is my replied before exiting the game.

(FINISHED! 7 Minutes and 19 seconds left)


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