Kay, I know what your thinking: Wow. A new story and she hasn't even finished her old ones yet! BUT! I had a MARVELOUS idea, and so I just HAD to make it into a story.
Disclaimer: Not mine, bla, bla, bla, Wish it was, bla, bla, bla!
Chapter 1
"You can do better than that!"
"Says you! Your just on the sidelines watching me!"
"Hush, Wild One! It is best to save your energy for battle." Says the guy who's been training since Noah got off the ark. Okay, I know! Not a nice thing to say. But what else can I say? I've been fencing since five in the morning! You try being patient!
Dodge. Strike. Strike. Dodge. Jump. It all comes like a reflex. It should after doing it for 11 years. But suddenly, something goes wrong. Something happens and I stumble. Not normally part of my battles. A hand appears to help me up and even though I accept it, my pride is a little bruised.
"You have much to learn, Wild One. But let us save it for another day when you are not so weary."
I'm the narrator of this story. It's my story. It's rather confusing and I'm not sure you'll believe me when I truly mean it's out of this world. Sure when you read about my lesson, you'll think "What's so out of the ordinary about it?" But if you wait and give me a moment, I'll tell you. There are more important things to sort out. I'm 17 years old and I live in London. I'm the only girl in my whole school who is taking fencing. And the person shouting to me from the sidelines, was my best friend Edmund Pevensie, who suddenly, miraculously jumped to the top of the class. Literally overnight. No joke. I've always asked him about it, but he always said "You'll think I'm crazy." And even though I probably will, I'm still dying of curiosity. But enough of this. Time to move on.
Most of the things I've thought during I went through all this is "Woah. Time is messed up." Along with the ever so famous "I'm going mad." But even if all those things were true, I can't deny that it happened. Because it did. Here is the beginning of my story:
"You were great today, Kira!" My best friend said as he slapped me on the back. He treats me like one of the guys. Everyone in the fencing club does.
"Your just saying that!"
"No really, you were amazing! Fantastic! Truly incomprehendable!" He said, waving his arms about.
I shoved him. "Now your just exaggerating!" This conversation happened often as we walked through the school towards the exit after school.
"No! We should call you "Kira, the Fierce!"
He never failed to make me laugh. Even on my worst day. But suddenly, something changed in him one day after Summer vacation. It was almost as if he acted bigger than he was. I wondered how that happened. Or maybe I just never noticed it before. I know, I'm sounding confusing right now, but this is how it was. And when I confronted him about it, he just shrugged it off. But after badgering him about it for a few months, he finally told. And he was right. I thought he was crazy.
"Are you serious? You think I'll believe that? Your mad!"
"I told you, you would think that. But did you listen! No, you didn't!"
"Oh come on! If you really don't want to tell me, why don't you just say so, instead of making up an obvious lie!"
"I'm not lying Kira!"
"Just don't talk to me, okay!"
"Kira, wait!"
And that was the end of it. It was a month ago, but I've avoided him since. I know it hurts him, but having such an obvious lie thrown into my face, and by my best friend? That's just going too far! I'm still furious just thinking about it. But I met other people in that month, and I've moved on. I've quit fencing classes, and now I'm just a regular ordinary girl again. Which I don't mind. But I'm a regular ordinary girl, who went on a ride in her friend's yacht one Summer day, and nothings been the same since then.
So! What do you think? Is it too... Normal? I don't know. :P It just came to me as I went along. Feel free to leave constructive criticism, and I will love you forever!
