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"Talking"
Thinking
Demon Mental Link
"Demon/Inner"
Demon Thinking/Inner Thinking
Demon-Person/Curse Seal
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Flashback
Regular POV
"This is the end demon fox!" yelled Kakashi. "Yeah!' the mob replied. "You killed Minato-sensei, took many lives, and destroyed most of the village! Now you will pay!" Kakashi said as he knocked Naru unconscious.
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Mindscape
Why is he doing this to me? I didn't kill anyone.
"You didn't do anything, I did."
Who's there!?
"Hahahaha! You still don't know do you? I am the Kyuubi!"
Th-that's impossible! Kyu-Kyuubi is dead! The Fourth killed it!
"It's Kyuubi-sama to you kit and The Fourth couldn't kill me, instead, he sealed me into you kit."
Oh. Okay, but why did you attack the village!
"You see kit, I was minding my own business sleeping in my cave when I smelled smoke and snakes. I thought that my husband, the Yonbi, and kits came home from hunting and brought home snakes. When I woke up my cave was on fire,my kits were dead, and I saw a note saying my husband was being sealed into a boy named Uchiha Sasuke. Of course being a demon in all I put out the fire. I went to search for some clues and found a Konoha Hitai-ate that smelled like snakes. I was blinded by anger and went to destroy your village. You probably know the rest of the story. Any questions?"
Wait, You said your husband was the Yonbi. Do you mean the Four-Tailed Wolf? And are thought you were a male fox.
"I am a female fox and if you become stronger I will show you my human form. And yes, the Yonbi is my husband alright. Anymore questions?"
Nope
"By the way, we share a mental link so we can communicate in your head. If you need to tell me something just think it ad I'll hear it."
Okay.
"Well, kit. It's time to wake up, someone is coming."
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Regular POV
"Ugh," said Naru as she held her head in pain. "What happened?"
"You were beaten by a mob because of something you had no control over."
Naru looked up to see a girl who looked about 15 or 16 years old. She had long white hair in two ponytails, she wore a black fighting kimono with white flowers on it, she had two yellow battle-fans, and she had black eyes.
"Who are you?" he asked.
"My name is Kaori Kurohana."
Hey kit! Ask her why she's helping you. Make sure it's not a trap.
"Why are you helping me? All the others just beat me up."
"Well for starters, you're bleeding in an alley in the garbage. Why shouldn't I help you? Also I sense a certain fox within you." Naru tensed up after hearing the word fox.
"If you know about the Kyuubi don't you hate me?"
"Why should I hate you."
"I don't know." Naru said sadly, "But how did you sense Kyuu-chan?"
"I'm the container of the Five-Tailed dog. I have many senses. I'm also here to ask you a question. Would you like to stay this village that only has hate for you, or do you want to join the Kurohoshi (Black Star), a group of containers that want revenge on those who hate us?"
Say yes kit. And nice nickname. Kyuu-chan, I like it.
It just came to me.
I know. You should join her, she seems powerful and you could learn a lot from her and maybe I'll show you my human form.
Whatever.
"Yes, I would like to go with you."
"Meet me at the gate at dawn."
"Whatever." Naru walked away feeling that someone was glaring holes in the back of his head.
End Flashback
Naru's POV
Ever since that day I've been getting stronger, smarter, faster, and wiser. I was six back then and now I'm fifteen. It's been nine years and I'm on the verge of Sannin level and I still haven't seen kyuu-chan's human form. Our group, the Kurohoshi, persuaded the Shukaku to join us. The Rokubi and Sanbi, were extracted by a group called the Akatsuki. Kaori's sources helped us find out about Gaara, the Shukaku's container and that the Shukaku's seal was on the verge of breaking. Gaara couldn't sleep and because of the Shukaku so Kaori and I fixed his seal and Kyuubi had a little talk with the Shukaku about sleep. Our group is in the BINGO book and were S class missing-nins in it. I'm known as Aka-Kiiro, (Red-Yellow) Kaori is known as Kuro-Shiro, (Black-White) and Gaara is known as Haiiro, (Gray). Our group, at the moment, is in need of some cash so Gaara and I were hired by Gatou, of Gatou Industries, to assassinate some old bridge builder named Tazuna, so we're packing up and heading out because that old man will be dead in a couple of days. By the way, He's paying us 24,000 ryo to complete this mission.
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Regular POV
"Kakashi-sensei! When are we going to get to the bridge?" screeched a loud pink-haired banshee.
"YEAH!" screeched an equally loud blonde banshee.
"Sakura, Keiko! (Bet you thought it was Ino.) Shut up!" yelled an annoyed Sasuke. (Sasuke yelled. 0.0 He showed emotions. w) Keiko was Ino's twin sister. She wore the same thing as Ino but it was turquoise and she wore her hair in two ponytails.
"Thank you Sasuke. Now everyone, we may have beaten the Demon Brothers, but that doesn't mean our mission is over. Gatou will probobaly send someone stronger-"
"Don't worry Kaka-sensei. Sasuke-kun can beat them. Sasuke-kun can beat anyone. Right Forehead?"
"Right Keiko-cow."
"sigh Sasuke may be strong. But he's not that strong. . . yet. As I was saying Gatou will probobaly send someone stronger so we need to wait for the back up we called for."
"Hey guys! I guess you couldn't handle your mission needed help from the amazing Kiba and the wonderful Akamaru!"
Everyone turned their head to see Ino hit Kiba on the head.
"Shut up Dog-Breath! Team-8 and Team-10 reporting as back up for Team-7."
"Hey Ino-pig! Can you, lazy-but and your fat-headed boyfriend handle this mission?"
"Shut up Keiko-cow! And don't you dare call Chouji fat!" Ino had grown out of her kindergarten crush on Sasuke, and was now Chouji's girlfriend.
"This is troublesome."
"We should be going to the bridge now. Right Kakashi, Kurenai-chan?"
"Yeah Asuma-kun we should. Kakashi! Gather up the brats and go to the bridge."
"What 'bout you and Asuma?"
"I need to talk to them in private."
"Oh. Read this for more ideas," Kakashi said as he threw them a particular orange book."
"Kakashi you pervert! I was going to talk to Asuma about the mission! THE M-I-S-S-I-O-N!"
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At the Bridge
"Man! When is the stupid old man and his guards going to get here!?"
"Naru! Be quiet! Their coming this way."
"Three genin teams! We don't need cover for this!" Naru said as she jumped out of the tree they were hiding in.
"Baka!" Gaara said in frustration as he was forced to jump down too.
"Give us the old man." Commanded Gaara.
"You can't beat us! Your about our age! Akamaru and I can take you down just like that!"
"I doubt it. YOU!" Naru yelled as she noticed the masked jounin, "You're that guy in that mob! You tried to kill me!"
"Naru? Namikaze Naru?"
"Namikaze? Isn't that the Yondaime's last name?" asked Shikamaru.
"Yeah, you're looking at the last Namikaze. Daughter of the Fourth. She was kept a secret. Even I didn't know about her until recently."
"But if she's the daughter of the Fourth, isn't she an ally?" asked Ino.
"Not this time. You probably all know her as Uzumaki Naru."
Everybody's eyes widened with shock. Each of their heads filling with questions that they won't get answers to.
"Then where did Uzumaki come from?" asked Shino.
"Uzumaki was her mother's maiden name. Right Naru?"
"Don't EVER speak of that foul creature! She the one who gave me these whisker marks with a kunai. And there is no Naru here anymore. Naru is died and Aka-Kiiro was born." She replied coldly.
"Aka-Kiiro! Then you must be Haiiro!"
"Yeah. And we're here for the old man so please step aside so we can kill him or we will be forced to kill you too."
"ASUMA! KURENAI! STAND DOWN! These are the S class missing-nins in the BINGO book we're dealing with!"
"But Kakashi-sensei! Sasuke-kun can beat them! He can beat anyone!" whined the banshees. That made Kakashi snort.
"There are ninjas younger than you but stronger than me."
"We're flattered Kakashi."
"He didn't mean YOU! He was teaching us a lesson!"
"No. I meant them. We'll need at least the back up of the Hokage to get out of here alive."
"gulp"
"The fighting hasn't started yet! Boo Hoo. Well I won't need the twirps anyways to kill the old man. All I need is an army of bandits. In fact I'll just have the bandits kill the twirps too." Every one turned their heads to see Gatou and his army of men, except in one second the were all dead.
"I guess we're done killing for the day. Naru, I got his wallet. It has 450,000 ryo in it. Well I guess you guys are safe, for now," Gaara said as he disappeared.
"Hey cyclops! You'd better sleep with your eyes open," said Naru. Naru paused as she spotted a certain Uchiha.
"You. With the duck-butt hair do. What's your name?"
"Sasuke. Uchiha Sasuke." Naru's eyes widened in surprise then softened.
"It was nice meeting you. Please tell Yon-kun that Kyuu-chan says hi." Naru said as she also disappeared.
Sasuke's eyes widened. How did she know about the Yonbi
One Hour Later
"Hey Kakashi how strong are they?" asked Kurenai.
"On a scale from 1 to 100 their at least 51."
"How about the Hokage?" asked/screeched Pink Banshee #2 (Her Mom is pink banshee #1)
"The Hokage is at least 92."
"But Sasuke-kun is at least 500,000,000 so it wouldn't be a problem," screeched the great pink forehead.
"No, Sasuke is 19, you and Keiko are 12, and the rest of you are 18 ½ ."
No one is stronger than Sasuke-kun CHA! ARE ALL BLONDE HAIRED AND BLUE EYED PEOPLE RETARDED!
( BLONDE HAIRED AND BLUE EYED PEOPLE: Naru, Ino, Keiko, Yondaime )
Troublesome
Sasuke-kun is the greatest!
Sasuke-kun, Sasuke-kun, Sasuke-kun! It's more like SASUGAY! Right Akamaru
ARF! (Yep!)
Chouji's is taking me out for BBQ when we get back home. .
BBQ, FOOD, Munch-munch
Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Th-that wa-was Na-Naru-chan. I m-miss you so much. You were my- No ARE my best friend AND I WILL HELP YOU
WITH YOU'RE REVENGE. FATHER YOU WILL PAY. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
( 0.O Hyuuga Hiashi! Run for the hills! )
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Mindscape
That girl… Some how I know her from somewhere…
YAWN! Hey Uchiha. Did anything happen while I was asleep.
I'm not sure. But a girl told me to tell you that Kyuu-chan says hi.
Yonbi's eyes widened.
What was the name of that girl?
Namikaze Naru.
Phew! I thought you were gonna say Uzumaki Naru.
Uzumaki was her mother's maiden name.
And then something that has never happened before happened. A demon lord, specifically the Yonbi, fainted.
