First Naruto Fic. Go easy on me.

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Soft Curved Figure. Red Hair Tied Into A Spiky High Ponytail. Green cat eyes.

I am Icezika Minaki. Call me Ice-chan. Known for my Icy attitude that matches my name. I live in a modern century. I'm a trained shinobi. I am able to turn translucent and invisible. My mom and dad look at me like I'm some super star. Wonder why huh? So you may be thinking. In a modern society, how can there be shinobis? Well. It just so happened that my mom and dad as this weird tradition to turn the whole family into ninjas. Which means I can only have a ninja boyfriend which I will not. Ditto the husband.

I started to train since I was three. I've learnt lots of skill and I apply them in my life. I can sprint long distances, jump very high and have superb aiming skills. Not to mention a personal fan club I would desperately want to disband. But of course I don't miss out on technology. I have a mini Tv that runs on solar energy and "Po-Co Skates" which I invented. Basically it has a spring like structure and since I can pump chakara into my legs. I can go far and high. And don't forget the trusty backpack where I throw all my junk into.

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Just yesterday I moved into my new house away from the mountains which means I have to go to school by train. Oh go me. I have a square room just enough for a bed, a closet and a door. Some life. But there is this eerie thing about my closet.

It has a hole in it.

I don't know what lurks down that bottomless pit and I don't plan on finding out. However, due to my disgusting habit of sleep walking. I've most gloriously fallen into the death pit in my bedroom. I have found myself the next day in an olden room, which is MUCH I repeat MUCH bigger than my room. And hey. I have my bag pack with me. What an awesome discovery.

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Why are all these people staring at me? Do I look weird in my Jim Jams? I know it looks stupid you know! Oh My God. I Think I've Fallen into the past.

"where am I?" I managed to say

"Konoha." The orange haired guy said to me.

"In Japan?" Too bad I'm no good in geography

"no. just Konoha." The boy replied.

Oh great. I am in big trouble.

"Naruto-Kun." Some guy say. "don't harass the girl"

"Hai… Sensei…" The boy replied

Oh Wow. The guy is so cool! I think his a shinobi. Wait. I need to find out more about this place. I got up. And got pushed back down by a girl. Got back up again. Push back down

Up

Down

Up

Down

Up

"OH QUIT IT ALREADY!" I had to yell

"but your injured!" the Pink haired girl said. "and you have to get into some reasonable clothes." She stared at me. Probably attempting to hold back a giggle.

"but I'm not dirty." I had to calm down

But seconds before I could forgive her.

X-SPLASH-X

"now your dirty." She replied sweetly.

I officially hate her.

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They very brutally stuffed me into this piece of clothing. Its striking green. Great. Kill the green insect. Kill me now. I feel raped and molested and stared at.

I learnt their names though.

Pinky Sakura

Orange Boy Naruto

The Cool Guy Kakashi

Somehow I have appeared in Sakura's closet. Yes. The freaking closet again. And when I tried to kick my attacker, A.K.A, Naruto, had "accidentally" knocked me out. Oh. So that's why she said I was hurt.

I tried to tell them that I had traveled back in time but they just won't believe me. But they agreed to show me around. –Scream!- Kimono Festival is coming up soon. Their going to buy me a Kimono! I've never worn one before but they looked really pretty in the shops back home.

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They bought me one! It beautiful! I'm going to be wearing it tonight! How about that? It's black! My favourite colour! Its hug my top figure and the "skirt" is kinda short. They told me to wear Nettings. I'm ok with that. The sleeves are so long!! Ahhhh. Pretty pretty…

"are you ok?" Sakura looked at me.

"yeah. I'm just thinking of how pretty the Kimono is!" I had to cheer

"well… you have to be careful!there are many perverts around here…" She smiled at me.

"I can defend myself." I smiled back at her.

"really?! Then spar with me!" Naruto pounced on me.

"o…ok… But..you got to get off me. You. Squeezing me." I almost suffocated

--Training grounds --

"I'll beat you!" Naruto screamed at me.

He jumped at me. I ducked and tripped him. "you have to be stronger than that." I ask broadly.

"don't let your guard down." Kakashi warned me

Suddenly I surrounded by many Narutos

They.Were.Armed

"No fair!" I screamed at Kakashi "I have no Weapons!"

"Your going to lose!" the Narutos chanted

"As If!!" I mumbled

I grabbed some chopsticks and threw them at the duplicates. They disappeared. I knew it.

It made it an effort to now use any invisible or translucent techniques. Well they just come to me. Its not some technique.

I clapped my hand together. Did some hand signs. Pushed my hands to the ground and thought the ground came a ground coffin and "a few" spikes. I got him cornered.

"Ahhhhhh. Don't kill me!!" Naruto wined

Kakashi stared at me. Sakura stared at me.

"what?" I didn't know what they were talking about.

"that was an S Ranked move." Kakashi pointed out

"and you 'killed' the duplicates with chopsticks" Sakura finished.

"the Akatsuki will be after you." Kakashi warned.

"we must hide you." Sakura said urgently

"can someone get me out of here?!" Naruto screamed

Ok. Now there is a Not So Secret Evil organization after me. How bad can life here get?! Heck. I'm wearing the kimono tonight. Nothing can dampen my spirits!

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Actually i got the COMPLETED story in my documents. i just wanted to know if it was good enough a story line to be published.

IS THE WORLD READY FOR MY STORY??