Okay, another rewrite. *Cracks Knuckles* Lets do this!
Oga was slouching in his spot in class, while Baby Beel was doing his usual stuff. For example, bothering him with his annoying alien baby language. "GOOOOO! DAH!"
Oga closed his eyes, and sighed. "Stupid baby. I should really give him to Aoi," He grumbled, obviously annoyed. Then, the doors opened, revealing Aoi- red in the face.
She turned her attention towards Oga. "Hey, umm... Oga? C-can you come with me outside, just for a bit?" She stuttered. Oga nodded, and followed her. Everyone stared at the two- well, three retreating figures.
They finally arrived outside, where Aoi had stopped. "Okay, Oga. I have something to tell you." She said bravely.
Oga stared at her, and then smiled. "I know what you're doing!" He took Baby Beel off his head, and held him out. "Thank you for taking Baby Beel off my shoulders!"
Aoi sweat dropped. "Umm, I don't want the kid. I just want to go out with you." She said bluntly. She gasped after she realized what she had said. "U-u-u-u-umm..."
Awkward silence.
Oga furrowed his eyebrows and looked at her. "That's it? Okay."
Her eyes widened. She felt something on her lips. It was warm. It also seemed like Oga was kissing Aoi-which was true. He broke it, and walked away. When he noticed that she wasn't following, he stopped and called over his shoulder, "Hey, are ya comin' or not? Class is starting."
Aoi shook her head to snap out of her daze. She smiled, "Coming!"
This actually turned out pretty all right... I guess. Okay, lets face the facts- it sucked.
Haha. Lets see what readers think! If they actually read this...
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