INT. FLOOR THIRTEEN
JACK: It's all my fault.
IANTO: No it's not.
JACK: Don't speak, save your breath.
Ianto begins to sob a bit.
IANTO: I love you.
Jack shakes his head.
JACK: Don't.
Ianto's eyes fall closed—Jack shakes him a little in desperation, his voice breaking during the next line.
JACK: Ianto. Ianto? Ianto, stay with me. Ianto, stay with me please—stay with me, stay with me, please!
Ianto opens his eyes again, and looks up at Jack. Jack is crying. They're both trying to be strong for each other but it's of no use.
IANTO: Hey. It was—good, yeah?
JACK: Yeah.
IANTO: Don't forget me.
Jack smiles.
JACK: Never could.
IANTO: A thousand years' time…you won't remember me.
JACK: Yes I will. I promise, I will.
Ianto gasps a bit, finally dying.
JACK: Ianto. Ianto? Don't go. Don't leave me, please. Please, don't—
THE 456: You will die. And tomorrow, your people will deliver the children.
Jack looks up at the 456, the picture of tragedy: he has tears running down his face and is clutching Ianto's body. He places a gentle kiss on Ianto's lips when suddenly a loud crash comes from the ceiling and the TARDIS is parked in the room. The door opens and The Doctor stumbles out of it dizzyingly.
The Doctor: Aye! What's all this cryin' about? Step aside, good sir and let me show you how it's done!
Jack looks down at Ianto last time and reluctantly steps aside, wipes his tears. The Doctor places his hands over Ianto's chest and a yellow glow starts to transform from his palms. Ianto's skin regains that healthy color and his eyelids start to flutter as he gasps and gulps for breath.
Ianto: J-Jack... A-am I dead yet?
Jack crying from happiness, hugs his form.
Jack: No... No, you're still alive, Ianto... And... I love you too... Don't you ever forget that...
Before Ianto gets a word, Jack presses his lips against his kissing him tenderly. He kisses him back, while The Doctor stares at them smiling.
The Doctor: Aye, ain't that sweet? Well It looks like my job here is done then...
He tips his turban and hops back in the TARDIS, flying out the hole he made in the ceiling.
THE END
So yeah... Please spread out the word and we might get BBC to remake the episode, saving #Janto and the rest of the gang! :)
