Hi this my first story so dot like don't review please

Disclaimer I don't own my little pony

The moon was raising and the sun was setting the setting sun rays shone into Fluttershy cottage. As the animals began to rest so did Fluttershy spread out on her bed se began to fall to sleep. Suddenly a knock on a door woke up Fluttershy with a horribly fight "who can that be" she mumble under her breath. She began to tremble has her hoof open the door there standing right in front her was Rainbow dash with her wing broken. "Fluttershy please help me I was doing a sonic rainboom and I went straight into a cliff" she said between groans. "Oh dear please come before it gets dark" said Fluttershy as she pushes Rainbow dash. "thanks" said rainbow dash as Fluttershy was making a extra bed " no problem I love helping a friend in need" said Fluttershy getting rainbow dash a hot coca 'hmm smells nice" said rainbow dash sniffing the air. "I know it a homemade just for you" said Fluttershy handing her a mug. "I am just going to bed please call if you need anything" said Fluttershy walking up the stairs. "Okay "said rainbow dash as she fell to sleep. It was nice of Fluttershy help a friend in need when Fluttershy fell asleep night went to all corners of equestrian.

That was my first chapter done please I only expect positive not negative thank you for reading.