So, I got really bored lately and thought about my story Could Someone Change A Person and I didn't exactly like how it went out or more likely what the sequel was. So I'm gonna re-write the ending and make a new Sequel! Oh, and almost forgot sorry that I changed the name but it was getting boring. Anyways I don't own any Morganville Vampires, though how awesome would it be to but Shane, Claire, Eve and Michael wouldn't have been the same or as Awesome….
Re-make of Chapter 13, Eliza, Could someone Change A Person. (FYI. Most of this is the same I just edited a little probably doesn't really seem like it but I did change some)
Eliza
For once in a long time I felt that I loved that my dad was yelling at me, well earlier like the other day. Right now I was in pain and he was staring at me like he'd never seen his own damn Daughter. It kind of made me fell weird and that I had lost him, maybe I did because I never told anyone this really but for the past six years of my life he wasn't around much and mom, she was always working. I only saw them only ever at night, it seemed like they'd come home one hour before I had to go to sleep. That meaning I could play outside for ten minutes, talk to them as they made dinner, and as we ate and go to sleep. I was always stuck with Eve and Michael it didn't help that them and Drew couldn't go in the sun either so going outside was out.
"Daddy please say something?" I asked as he blinked and smiled at me. He didn't more or say anything not long before that mom came back with the others it seemed really small in the room now.
"Eli!" Jordan yelled before coming over and jumped up on the bed, being careful of my tummy that was like a basketball now. Though my tummy probably weight A LOT more than a freakin' basketball.
"Are you going to be okay?" Jordan asked as he looks at my tummy.
"Lets hope." My dad said and when I looked up he smiled at me.
"Please not now Shane." My mom said not trying to be quiet about either; everyone knew he was going to be a jackass about this.
"Fine." Dad said before walking around the bed on the other side away from Jason and took my hand and kissed my forehead. "Well, your pulse is good." He said before sitting down and looked at my tummy as Jordan puts his ear to my tummy.
"I can hear him." Jordan said meeting my gaze, his big brown eyes hadn't looked this happy in a long time. Hopefully I will be able to see his eyes look like that again.
"Told you." I said sticking my tongue out at Jason as he smiles and shakes his head.
"Told him what?" My mom asked glancing from Jason to me.
"When…before we came here I keep calling the baby him, Jason thought it was weird but I told him that you called Jordan him and he, he stopped saying baby." I smiled as well as my mom.
"This is really hard to say, Eli, but I'm going to say it anyways." My dad said as I look over at him, "I'm happy for you and…and Jason and this… I mean him." He added nodding towards my tummy as I look Jordan had his hands on my tummy now.
"Could I talk to, Jason and my parents alone for a minute?" I asked they nodded, as Eve picked Jordan off me before he gave my tummy a sloppy kiss. "Weird little kid." I said before they went out the door and my mom sat on the foot of my bed.
"What is it, baby?" Jason asked me as I give him a small smile.
"I want to tell you guys that if having baby coming and it's too much for and it starts killing me that I don't want you guys to try and save me, and turn me into a vampire. I mean it'd be cool to a vampire but I don't want it exactly." I said meeting all there gaze my mom looked away, Jason stared at me like you have to be kidding and my dad well I couldn't read him exactly.
Hours later and I was screaming in pain I wasn't sure that I would make it. It was hell, I even wished, again I was back home being yelled at by everyone that I was getting in trouble to much. Soon they HIM out and I had picked a name earlier, Asher Shane Rosser. Though it sounded kind of weird I liked and Jason liked it mostly because I did. I saw my little Asher but it wasn't long before darkness took me over and I thought there was no way of waking up.
