I honestly have no idea what category this should be under, so if you think I should move it review/p.m. me and tell me where you think it should go...Anyway, hope you like it, and criticism is much-needed, but try to not be too harsh...This is my first poem...Here goes...
The flame dances back and forth,
Flickering,
Hypnotic,
It consumes your mind, your body,
Everything.
Slowly,
Painfully, burning anything attempting to stop it.
Controlling,
Growing
More powerful every second, it goes on and on.
Steadily,
Hungrily,
Engulfing anything it can, taking over;
Its name:
Desire.
