This is my second story tell me what you think by reviewing, i do not own Avatar: The Last Airbender
some of the lines come directly from the show, mostly the opening sequence which is then changed.
the Captain is the Leader of the Southern Raiders
Dedicated to Gabriele, you're always there for me
"If I tell you who the last waterbender is, do you promise to leave the others alone?" Kya, Katara's mother, said.
The Fire Nation Captain nodded.
"It's me. Take me as your prisoner." she said
The Captain smirked, "I'm afraid I'm not taking prisoners today."
Then the Captain walked out of the igloo and called a retreat, and then he noticed the small girl whose mother he had just killed. 'Hmm,' the Captain thought, 'the Fire Prince is looking for a maidservant for his daughter. Sorry, lady, I guess i lied. I will be taking a prisoner today.' He grabbed the little girl and ran back to his ship with the rest of his men.
"Take this little girl to a holding cell and head a course for the Fire Nation" the Captain said.
"The Fire Nation, sir?" the helmsman asked.
"Yes, you moron the Fire Nation! Corporal, send a messanger hawk to Fire Prince Ozai telling him that I'm bringing him a little Water Tribe girl to be his daughter's maidservant." the Captain ordered with a glint in his eye.
"Yes, sir!"
Within minutes they had left the Water Tribe as quickly as they came. The Captain walked out onto the deck and breathed heavily. He had fulfilled his mission and had secured a minor task for the Fire Prince. Today was a good day for him. But not for the little Water Tribe girl named Katara...
