Chapter 1

The two statues stood across from each other their stature, the same, was straight and imposing, their hands were held up in a handsign their bodies covered in the same armour the only difference was the history behind their carvings and the heads at the top even at their feet they shared similar wounds from battle.

The wounds were giant craters smashing both of their ankles to smithereens and at the centre of the craters stood two figures.

One of the figures stood at the feet Madara Uchiha this young man had skin the colour of grey which suggested far too little sun, his eyes were a deep red surrounding the iris were three tomoes the sclera which was usually white was now a deep black, his hair which was usually a deep black was now a depressing grey, from his back sprouted two giant webbed hands his original left hand held a crackling ball of grey and black electricity

Right in front of him stood another young man almost the same age as him, he was cloaked in a red form of the energy the boy across from him held in his hand, the boy wore a bright orange jumpsuit and had blonde hair his eyes which were usually a calm blue were now a fiery angry red with the iris instead of being the usual black circle was now a black slit resembling an animal's eye, he held in his hand a purple sphere of spinning energy

Both of the boys were covered in cuts and bruises, both of them were tired, both of them knew the battle would be decided with the next attack.

The two launched themselves at each other thrusting their signature attacks at each other the two balls of energy collided chakra exploded outwards everything was bathed in a blinding light enveloping the two, outside no one would have been able to see anything but within the light was an impressive sight the boy with the hands from his back thrust his arm into the blonde boys chest crushing many ribs the other child had planned on scratching his opponents headband but then he remembered the promise he had made to his teammate earlier so he opted to mirror his opponent and drove his own fist in the boys chest cracking a few more ribs, the two were blown apart with incredible force from each other landing right back where they started out cold and completely returned to normal.

It was 10 minutes later when a man in the standard Jonin uniform with gravity defying silver hair appeared on the screen with a small pug dog wearing a headband and little blue shirt.

"SASUKE, NARUTO" he created a shadow clone before going to investigate both of them they were both battered and bruised but both were still alive.

Naruto woke with the most killer headache he had ever experienced if this was what a hangover is supposed to feel like Naruto would never touch an alcoholic drink in his life.

"Hey you're awake." everyone sat before him everyone had smiles on their faces and were clamouring to congratulate him and yet all Naruto wanted to do right now was sleep and every time he would try to get the message across it would be ignored with a big round of smiles.

"Well well isn't this party in full swing?" Naruto thought it couldn't get any worse but then the perverted hermit turned up and it all has to go downward from there "you're lucky you made it out alive." Naruto suddenly thought of something.

"How is everyone else?" everyone gave a rather sad look at that

"Shikamaru was the luckiest out of all of you he only got a broken finger mixed in with the odd cut and bruise Choji swallowed an extremely powerful soldier pill that would have killed him if not for Tsunade Kiba had a small stab wound in the gut and a huge number of bruises he will live easy but he had been restricted to his bed by his mother, Neji was not as lucky he took a very unique arrow to the chest it missed his heart but still dealt some pretty serious damage to him he is still in surgery but Shizune tells me he should make a full recovery." Naruto couldn't help but let the smile break out across his face after all everything had gone perfectly and he had kept his promise to Sakura nothing could ruin this moment.

the door opened to reveal Tsunade she walked in with skin paler than when she used her mitotic regeneration technique and she didn't even seemed to be awake she just seemed to walk in a daze. Jiraiya was first in noticing her presence

"Tsunade what's wrong?" Tsunade seemed to recoil at the voice of Jiraiya before she suddenly broke out into hysterics.

"I tried to stop them I swear I did, there was nothing I could do." everyone looked at each other confused Jiraiya walked up to Tsunade and lightly grabbed her shoulders.

"Who did you try to stop?"

"The council." it all went downhill from there

(30 minutes earlier)

Tsunade was dead.

Or at least she was as close to death as she could possibly be, not only had she been up all night looking for a way to save Choji but she had also used most of her chakra trying to heal Neji Hyugas incredibly painful wounds including the huge gaping hole in his chest and now she had to sit through an emergency meeting called by her least favourite person in the whole world and as she walked through the door to the meeting room she spotted him.

Danzo he was an old relic from the third Hokages era but no one disagreed that he was a strong ninja his head was covered in bandages except for his left eye and his left arm his right arm was held in a sling many believed it was rendered useless years ago but Tsunade held her suspicions.

"greetings Tsunade thank you for responding so quickly to my message." she ignored him and went to her seat at the head of the table on her left were the 12 clan representatives these were the leaders of every notable clan in the village many were well known like the Hyuuga and Aburame clans others were not so well known on her right were the 12 village representatives these people brought forth issues with the villagers.

"Now then the villager representatives have come forth with a request." Danzo explained as Tsunade wondered when they didn't the main man of the villagers, a big man who had more stomach than brains stood.

"We request that Naruto Uzumaki be banished from the leaf village indefinitely." Tsunade nearly fell out of her seat at the absurdity of the request many of the clan representatives were in an uproar even the usually stoic Shibi Aburame furrowed his brow in anger, Tsume Inuzuka was the most vocal of the group.

"HOW DARE YOU, HE IS FAR MORE IMPORTANT TO THIS VILLAGE THAN YOU LITTLE SHITS WILL EVER HOPE TO BE." these extreme words started up a vocal fight between the two factions that was only silenced when Tsunade called the meeting under order.

"Why do you want such a request fulfilled?" Danzo spoke up quickly.

"I have a list of charges against the young right here 1. Grievous bodily harm to a fellow leaf ninja 2. Interrupting and stopping a fellow leaf ninja from completing his mission and finally posing a great threat to the civilian population." Tsunade couldn't believe her ears.

"When has he ever committed any of these allegations?"

Quite recently actually you have seen the terrible wounds he has inflicted upon Sasuke Uchiha."

"Naruto came back with far worse injuries than Sasuke-" Tsume tried to interject but was interrupted by the head of the civilian factor.

"You shall hold your tongue when we are speaking Inuzuka if you know what's good for you." Tsume held her temper with great difficulty, Danzo continued.

"He has also wrecked Sasuke Uchihas most recent top secret mission to infiltrate the ranks of Orochimaru under my orders." Tsunade kept a level gaze with Tsume to keep her quiet. "And he is a grave threat to the civilian population because of the Kyuubi within him." Tsume did not "hold her tongue." after that.

"THAT IS NOT HIS CHOICE THE KYUUBI WAS FORCED INTO HIM AS A CHILD." most of the clan heads roared their agreement but the civilian population roared back it took even longer this time to settle the council.

"Danzo this secret mission you assigned Sasuke was not cleared by me thus the charge of interrupting a mission is dropped and the grievous bodily harm he inflicted upon Sasuke Uchiha was in self-defence and under my orders to do so if he resisted thus the charge of grievous bodily harm is dropped as well as for the charge of being a threat to the village is ludicrous and thus dropped." Danzo, bravely, spoke up.

"I am sure most if not all people remember the incident with the sand jinchuriki not a few months ago he is a prime example of how great a risk jinchuriki are to the general public." Tsunade responded quickly.

"And the person who stopped the sands jinchuriki was Naruto-" once more Danzo interrupted Tsunade.

"So he is even more powerful than a killing machine hell bent on murder and slaughter and we are supposed to just let him roam loose in the village ready to explode at any time?" the civilians nodded in agreement.

"He is not a bomb he is just a child to suggest he is anything like a killing machine is insane." Danzo showed a stoic face.

"I wish to vote as to whether or not Naruto Uzumaki shall remain in this village or should be banished indefinitely." Tsunade knew she had no choice but agree to the vote under law lest she be found in contempt but she felt confident about this vote many of the clans that had originally hated Naruto now saw him as a hero and would never vote him off so twelve votes for Naruto to stay while the village population rarely cared about any good a ninja does only the horrible rumours they hear and Naruto ,having the Kyuubi in him, probably had some doozies so that was twelve votes to send him away thus it would end in a tie and the matter would be dropped.

"All those for the removal of Naruto Uzumaki" predictably 12 hands went up on the civilian side before Tsunade turned to the ninja side.

"All those against the-"

"hold on Tsunade" Danzo had once more interrupted Tsunade "I wish for you to remove these people for being personally influenced in this vote" he held out a sheet of paper and Tsunade could not help but let her jaw drop as he listed out half of the ninja council

"How are any of these people personally influenced in this vote." Danzo quirked a smile that infuriated Tsunade.

"All of these members have children who work with and are friends with Naruto and thus someone they would take about at home and many of you, I am sure, would be influenced not to cause your child any harm whatsoever emotional or otherwise upon those children thus their votes shall be stricken from the tally." Tsunade knew it was a ridiculous claim but the claim was correct and justified by any courts standards so she could only watch as the vote was cast again.

12 for.

6 against.

"Thus it is agreed Naruto Uzumaki shall be banished from the village within the week or be forcibly removed council dismissed." Danzo announced and as the civilian council walked out it was obvious they were proud of themselves while the ninja council just sat in shocked silence as the leader of the civilians walked past Tsume he muttered.

"Good riddance" which was a mistake as Tsume clocked him across the jaw with a solid right hook that broke many teeth and knocked the man out cold but Tsunade couldn't care less she just sat in total shock

(Back to the present)

Everyone was shocked to say the least everybody had either a gaping mouth or wide eyes but none was more shocked than Naruto he seemed to be trying to reason it as a sick joke Tsunade wished she could tell him that but she couldn't.

"Naruto I am so sorry." and then Naruto fell back into his bed with a look no one had ever seen on Narutos face before.

It was a look of defeat.

Naruto stepped out from the bed stumbling on his shaky legs he shrugged off every attempt to stop ,no one really wanted to, he slowly made his way through the village occasionally grabbing a handhold to steady himself as he made his way to the training grounds he stood before the wooden post he had been tied to during the genin survival test he made a cross sign letting another Naruto pop into view he held out his hand to the clone the two started making a Rasengan the only difference between the regular Rasengan and this one was the sheer size it the ball had engulfed Narutos arm skin tore from his arm in pieces, he screamed in anger pain and frustration before thrusting the Rasengan forward reducing the post its brothers and the ground right before him to rubble the crater was deep but Jiraiya just walked into the crater picked the boy up and brought him back to the hospital.

The next six days of Narutos recovery were not happy ones everyone would try to get him back in his usual cheerful mood but no one could pull him out of his depressed silence the most movement any one ever saw of him was when he ate and he only ate regular human portions as compared to his usually monstrous servings of Ichiraku ramen even when Jiraiya told Naruto he would train him the genin only gave a half-hearted "thanks."

Eventually the final day arrived and it was due for Naruto to leave he had packed up all his possessions into one small backpack and he now stood at the village gates with everyone who had ever cared for him even Neji had made it against all medical recommendations by Tsunade no one smiled many people had tears in their eyes Naruto went from one to the other shaking their hands exchanging goodbyes Sakura collapsed at the knees when he came to her she begged hi forgiveness saying that it was all her fault Naruto just kneeled down and pulled her into a hug whispering his forgiveness until she had calmed down Naruto stood back and slipped his backpack on his shoulders turned down the road heading away from the village.

He never looked back.

(7 years)

The squad jumped through the trees with clinical precision it was a six man squad two more than usual but everyone agreed it was necessary.

This man had singlehandedly defeated the Akatsuki and captured some of the most dangerous bounties on the market and he was probably the person who would be the least likely to help Konoha but right now he was really the only choice they had.

They came upon his hut it was surrounded on all sides by trees and it was a simple 2 storey log cabin the door opened to reveal Naruto Uzumaki he had grown over the years he stood at 6'1 and his spiky blonde hair had grown out a bit but his fringe was trimmed he wore black pants without his shirt and it was quite obvious he had been training he was ripped not an inch of his flesh was not toned muscles but the muscles weren't bulging against the skin they would be easily hidden under a jacket or long sleeved shirt he kept his left hand in his pocket as he gazed out at the trees.

"you can all come out now." he was obviously talking to them since there wasn't another human for a quarter mile the leader of the group decided to step forward and leave everyone else in the treetops "ah Kakashi, been a while." indeed the Jonin stood before Naruto and nothing had changed at all he still had the gravity defying hair and the mask covering his face.

"Naruto I am sure you have heard about the recent problems with the hidden stone village."

"you mean the fact that Orochimaru was taken in by the rock villages newest Tsuchikage who was later assassinated by Orochimaru who then took over the position and has declared war against the leaf village, yeah I've heard what about it." the cahalantness Naruto spoke of the war with shocked Kakashi but he continued.

"Well you see the leaf village wants you to help defend-"

"Forget it." Kakashi hadn't even finished his sentence but the words "the leaf village" probably sent any chance of the proposition into hiding. "The village was nothing but a source of pain for me so give me one good reason to help that hellhole."

"Naruto I think I should warn you if you don't accept any of our offers we are allowed to use force." Naruto just chuckled.

"Well you had better bring everyone else in otherwise you won't win." Kakashi gave the signal for everyone to come down what he saw was amazing.

They all had kunai held to their throats by a Naruto shadow clone standing behind them all of them shino Kiba Hinata Sai and Ino even Akamaru was tied and bound.

"Still think you can take me by force?" the Naruto clones released their prisoners before popping out of existence "but I am willing to listen to your offers." Kakashi quickly pulled out a list.

"The village is willing to offer you a reinstatement into the Konoha ranks."

"next." He didn't even consider the proposition

"Tsunade wants me to point out that this is where your friends all live."

"Hey if Konoha is destroyed they are more than welcome to stay with me, next."

"The last offer is 20 million ryo." Naruto just shook his head in disbelief before turning back to the cabin.

"Tell everyone I say hi."

"What about a life for your family?" shino spoke up and Naruto stopped in his tracks.

"I don't have a family shino I thought that was rather clear." shino just adjusted his glasses.

"you have always taken bounties that would be able to feed you for a little over 5 months but it only seems to last a month before you have to hunt again suggesting you are providing for more than one person and you are hiding your left hand which could have a ring on it, not to mention the sheer size of this house would leave you quite lonely if you were by yourself." Naruto turned and glared right through Shino's sunglasses before breaking out into a defeated smirk

"you always were the most observant of us weren't you shino." before anyone could figure out what the two were talking about the front door to the house opened to reveal a woman wearing only a very long shirt wiping at her eyes sleepily her hair was a dark purple that just seemed to shine she wasn't a child by anyone's standards she actually seemed to be the exact same age as Sakura and her figure was not extremely voluptuous but no one could argue it was the perfect figure for her on her left hand was a simple golden ring.

"Good morning sweethea-"her singsong voice stopped midsentence as she noticed the uninvited guests "everything okay?"

"its fine sweetheart let me introduce you to everyone." she walked up to stand beside Naruto as he planted a kiss on her cheek "everyone this is Sayuri Suikazan my fiancé." everyone was shocked to say the least the only people without either a collapsed jaw or wide eye was shino who showed his usual stoic demeanour and Sai who just seemed to smile a fake smile of confusion "well no need to stand out here in the cold come on in"

Eventually everyone found themselves seated around the kitchen table sipping tea and waiting for the inevitable.

"ALL RIGHT THAT'S IT." Kiba jumped up from his seat and pointed accusingly at Naruto "how did you get such a babe as a fiancé?" Naruto just smirked.

"we actually met through Kisame turns out that Kisame didn't get his Samehada through the traditional wait and inherit method he instead killed the previous wielder Fuguki Suikazan who was the father of Sayuri we met while we were both trying to track down Kisame we got to travelling together and when it was finally over we just didn't want to separate we stayed together before finally I proposed and we became fiancés and keep it down would you."

"Why?" but then everyone heard what sounded like little footfalls.

"Too late."

"DADDY!" right before the groups very eyes three young children ran down the stairs from the second floor over to the dinner table they all appeared to be the same age of 8 and ran straight up to Naruto and gave him a huge bear hug and just as quickly the three looked at him with almost symmetrical puppy dog eyes "didjya bring gifts didjya didjya didjya?" Naruto placated the children before going over to a large bag in the corner

"tsubaki here is that tea set you wanted." the only girl of the group ran forward and squealed with the delight she had lime green hair and purple eyes she placed a kiss on Narutos cheek before running off to her room assumedly to start her own cafe.

"Ichinose I found that rare book you wanted." a bespectacled raven haired kid stepped forward and gave Naruto a quick hug before burying his nose in the book and went to a seat in the lounge and plopped himself down without a word.

"Takato I know you wanted a kunai set but you are too young so instead I got you these practise kunai." the red headed boy didn't seem to mind as he accepted the wooden imitation kunai and asked.

"Will you teach me how to use them daddy?"

"in a minute I just have to take care of our guests and then I will be right out." the kid ran out the back Naruto returned to his seat before he realised everyone was looking at him with even more shock than before "what?" everyone (save Sai) shouted.

"DON'T WHAT US!" and everyone began describing why it was so weird for Naruto to have kids many found him to be too young others found it wrong to have children and not be married but Naruto just laughed out loud waiting for the group to settle down.

"They're orphans me and Sayuri decided to take care of after we beat the Akatsuki."

"Why only three" Sai spoke up "you were starved for a family when you were younger you could easily have found more and yet you only chose three I wonder why." Naruto and Sayuri shared a miserable look before Naruto turned back to the group.

"In truth we only took in three because we only needed three." everyone shuffled forward in their seats. "Those three are jinchuriki that me and Sayuri sealed." everyone gasped with surprise. "before we could defeat Akatsuki they had captured the 7 tailed beetle the 5 tailed bull and the 2 tailed cat I sent an envoy out to the Kages asking what I should do and I got told by most of them to seal the "monsters" away parents brought their new borns forward and every time I tried I just couldn't bring myself to do it so me and Sayuri decided to try and find somewhere to seal them like caves or dungeons but before we got a chance to we found ourselves in rain country the kids had been abandoned and they walked straight up to me looked me in the eye and said "make us jinchuriki" and it wasn't greed that drove them they honestly wanted to help the lands from the bottom of their hearts so right then and there me and Sayuri made them jinchuriki and our adopted children." everyone was speechless to say the least until Sai decided to speak up.

"You know how painful it is to be a jinchuriki and yet you made three of your own?"

"Well in truth we refused for a total three days before the constant 'will you make us jinchuriki? Will you make us jinchuriki? Will you make us jinchuriki?' finally got to us." Everyone sweat dropped at the notion "by the way who are you?" the mood of the room suddenly grew very tense.

"I am Sai I am a student under Kakashi Hatake."

"So you are a member of squad 7?"

"Yes."

"So you are basically my replacement?"

"Yes it certainly was an easy job to do." Naruto stood up and walked right over to Sai staring him straight in the face.

"Is this really a new guy or is Sasuke trying to pull a prank on me?" Kakashi just pated Narutos shoulder.

"We know how you feel."

"now all joking aside shino has actually convinced me that the village would be best I mean I sure as hell can't give them any good sort of education and it would be safer for us in a village than here should Orochimaru decide I am a threat so I will come with you." a sea of smiles broke out around the table and 30 minutes later the Uzumaki family had packed all their belongings and were ready to set out 20 minutes later the group walked out of the forest but as everyone walked on Sayuri grabbed Narutos cheek painfully.

"Naruto aren't you forgetting something?" Naruto turned around.

"oh right" Naruto held up his favourite handsign and before everyone's eyes the trees all suddenly turned into clones of Naruto who set to work disassembling the house in moments the house was a pile of lumber, a pile of furniture and a pile of nails all of which were sealed into a scroll and handed to the real Naruto before the 500 Naruto clones all went up in a puff of smoke Naruto turned back to the dumbstruck group "let's be off shall we." as everyone started walking away none of them noticed a Naruto clone release a messenger hawk with a note strapped to its leg.

As the group walked along Naruto began introducing Sayuri to everyone no one could find any fault with the woman that is until Kiba came up and made a rather inappropriate comment Sayuri then picked the unfortunate man up and threw him straight through the very peak of a mountain and out the other side so cleanly that the top of the mountain rolled all the way to the groups feet and finally the only person remaining was Hinata now the group tried to seem indifferent when in truth they were interested as hell even Kakashi who was at the back of the group supposedly reading his book had drilled a small see through hole in the cover.

"and this is Hinata." the two shook hands before Sayuri leaned in and whispered something to Hinata before the two walked off Kakashi started casually diverting course towards them but as he went around the tree the girls had gone around he was thrown back with a severe boot print in his face and around the tree came the sound of tearing pages.

(With Sayuri and Hinata)

"look Hinata I have explained to Naruto that all the times you fainted around him wasn't a medical thing but the fact that you had a crush on him and in all honesty I am-"

"Worried that I will try to take him from you." Sayuri just nodded guiltily. "Don't worry I was hopeful to see him again but I only wanted to see my friend again and that's all he is now, a friend."

"thank you Hinata I really appreciate this." the two hugged before returning to the group as the group walked everyone caught up on what they missed Naruto was particularly tickled to hear that in a few weeks Kurenai and Asmua would be celebrating their sons 3rd birthday but what really stunned Naruto was this news...

"So where is Sakura I would have thought she would have killed to see her old teammate." Kakashi answered with his face in his replacement book

"Well she would have but pregnancy is really weighing down on her." an audible crash was heard as Naruto tripped and landed face first into a very solid rock.

"SAKURAS PREGNANT?" Kakashi just replied very nonchalant.

"Yeah 7 months."

"WHO'S THE FATHER?"

"Sasuke." a smile broke across Narutos face

"Wow so they found each other talk about romance." but then he noticed the group all wore the same depressed look "what's wrong?"

"it wasn't really as romantic as that, in the leaf village if a clan is dwindling in numbers the council picks a suitable man or woman of the clan and provide them with a harem regardless of the woman's or mans wishes if they are picked by the clan member they have to help...increase the numbers, 2 years ago Sasuke picked Sakura for his harem" Naruto took on the same depressed face

"Oh"

"But there is some good news you remember Temari?"

"Yeah she's Gaaras sister right?"

"That's right and I hope you remember Shikamaru."

"Of course."

"well they're wedding is in a month." once more an audible crash was heard as Naruto walked into and through a tree before continuing like nothing had happened

"So let me get this straight the laziest most unexcitable person of the rookie twelve is getting married first, and to a woman known for having a legendary short fuse."

"That's right." Naruto just gaped at the group.

"I think I need to sit down."

15 minutes and 500 Naruto clones later everyone was seated in the living room of Narutos house sharing a meal made by Sayuri and enjoying a cup of tea served by Tsubaki and her new tea set Naruto seemed to flinch slightly before turning to his son

"Takato how about I show you how to use those kunai now?" Takato was out of his seat and rummaging in his backpack in an instant and before long he had his kunai in hand with Naruto leading him into a forest on the edge of their 'camping' grounds the two walked for a few minutes before they came upon a man leaning against a tree he was dressed in black pants and a grey shirt his hair was a dull black which separated into a few bangs around his face and went back into a ponytail Takatos face lit up before running up and hugging the man.

"UNCLE ITACHI!" the man tousled the little boy's hair before he spotted Naruto who led his son away and began teaching the boy on kunai.

"Maybe you could give him a few pointers." another Naruto was leaning on a branch just above Itachi.

"I would certainly be a better teacher than you." Naruto pretended to be stabbed in the heart and fell to the forest floor landing on his feet.

"You say such hurtful things."

"Why did you call me here?" Naruto became serious.

"I have a bit of a problem the leaf village has asked for my help in the war with the earth village in exchange they give me and my family somewhere to live."

"I don't see the problem."

"everyone knows since that since pain Orochimaru and the three sanin aren't as powerful as this generation hell Gaara could probably beat him and we all expected Orochimaru to stay underground but now here he is leading an army, he wouldn't do that unless he was confident he could win against the entire village that means surpassing pain and I want to be ready in case he has done just that and I couldn't think of a better person than you to be by my side."

"What's in it for me?"

"A chance to go back to your old life in Konoha."

"Even Tsunade wouldn't do such an unpopular move to reinstate me." Itachi kept a nonchalant face but Naruto saw a look of longing in his eyes.

"I am certain I can convince the village that Madara committed the massacre and we can probably find old documents to show what really happened to the council plus I will make it a condition of my help that they give you immunity."

"I don't know if I will be able to do it Naruto." the two argued incessantly before Naruto growled in frustration.

"I cannot believe there is nothing in Konoha that you would go back for." he went up in a puff of smoke just as Itachi reached into his pocket and pulled out his old leaf headband many would have thought he was thinking about his loyalty to his village but instead he reached behind the metal plate and pulled out a photo.

There was only a single person in the picture it was a girl she looked to be only 14 years old when the photo was taken but anyone could tell she would grow into a beautiful woman she was wearing a light cream summer dress her brown hair was blowing in the wind and she smiled at the camera as she tried to tuck a strand of hair behind her ear Itachi had looked at this photo many times and every time he did his heart would ache for the girl he had always dreamed to return to and now he had his chance he replaced the photo behind the metal plate before once more returning the headband to its rightful place before walking over to the father and son pair.

"I'm in."

And so another story is born, now I am writing an actual novel that I hope will kick-start my career as an author so my stories here will take a hit if you want to read a very very rough draft of the first three chapters then go to worthy of and search for game over my penname is begging4abreak2

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