A/N this is my first try at writing so please point out all that i did wrong. and i think there will be a lot.
yes this is non canon
Burning Dream
Tali walked the down the distorted corridors of the Normandy. Her eyes focused on the exploding components and wires as she walked down not knowing where she was headed. She can see the sparks that the exposed wires where making. She could feel the heat from the flames that where all around her, but all she hears is silence. Save for the whisper of a voice that she holds on to so dearly. Slowly she comes to a stop in front of the door that she wanted to open so many times before.
Tali slowly presses the floating icon on the door. When the oddly slow door opens. Tali freezes in shock at the sight that lies before her. Blood covering all the walls, dripping from the ceiling to pool on the floor. In the mist of all the carnage, she sees him standing in in his blacken and charred battle armor. When Tali looks in the ice blue eyes of Commander Shepard all she sees is pain, terror and anger all show in the eyes looking back at her.
"Save me Tali" She hears the bloody figure before her say in hoarse voice
"NO..." she screamed finding her voice, as she turns and starts to run down the burning corridors.
"Please..." he calls to her. Reaching with his hand and slowing walking to her. Leaving chard flesh in his wake
"It...It can't be...you can't be him ….." she says before the floor buckles sending her back the way she came. She looks up from her back to see him standing over her looking down at her. Quickly getting to her knees she tries to crawl away but to find her way block by a walk. "Why.. ..why did you make me fall in... love with you ... why" she said as she brought her knees to her chest and tried buried her head behind them as tears filled her eyes
"Why Tali?" she heard him say in the voice that she misses
Tali lifted her head up as she heard the question to see the burnt and charred face the of the man who she secretly loved inches away from her face' WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME TO DIE' it screamed.
"AHH ... NO... I didn't leave you" she cried as she tried to crawl away from the painful image that was facing her but finding that she could not move.
She watched in horror as the flesh slowly burned off leaving a blacked skull looking back at her. "Why Tali... why did you kill me." it whispered before it too turned in to ashes.
"NO!" she screamed as she woke for her hellish nightmare. Bolting up right, she looked around to see that she was in her small home aboard the Neema. The only sounds that she heard was her own heart beat that was pounding in her ears and her breathing as she gasped for air. She felt cold sweat covering her body even though she was in her suit. She brought her knees to her chest, warping her arms around them as she started to cry.
A/N
well there you go. this was a part of a different story that I'm working on, but i decide to change where I'm going with it and I had to cut this part. I was happy with this so I wanted to get it up as my first attempt on writing.
I did try to get all the errors that I could find, but i still think that I missed a few.
so any and all help is welcomed
Update 1/18/2013: fixed a pointed out error
