Hello imaginative friends! So this is my first Fan-fic, though you will probably tell by reading this, and for the longest time I've been trying to think up a great concept for my first Fan-fiction. And for a while, I had remained stuck. But recently, I thought up the idea of creating a story based on one of my favorite fictional characters...Gollum! Don't be afraid to brutally express your comments on this first Chapter, because trust me...I might need it. :P
Disclaimer: I do not own the Lord of the Rings series. Though if I did, I would probably mess it all up.
The broad space in the dark murky room seemed to be full of silence. Then again, that's how it usually is. But today, that was our great advantage. We love the silence! The silence is our best friend. In Fact, the silence is the most perfect friend you could have. He's smart, funny, he listens to us, and he never says anything to us at all. Not a peep. Doesn't he sound wonderful precious?!
Yes. Yes he is precious. Many other friends talk so much that they never shut up! But silence isn't like those nasty friends. We can trust the silence. Silence will never betray us. But silence is also useful in other ways. Like hunting our prey. Just like the fishes. The juicy scrumptious fishes. And when it is nearby, silence is there to make the fishes think that there is nothing going on, and everything is all peaches. Then we come in, and we take a bite into the tasty fishes.
Thinking about the delectable treat suddenly makes our mouth very watery. We slowly notice there that the vision in our eyes become more dizzy. And the balance in our body starts to be slightly wobbly.
"Oh precious, we are so hungry!" I groaned while having my hand on my stomach, with desperation on my face.
"Oh, you're the only one? I'm starving too Precious! All because you can't catch a stupid little fishes. You idiot!" Gollum snarled.
"Shut up, shut up, shut up! Don't yell at me! It wasn't Smegal's fault. We haven't found a fish in the stream for days!" I cried.
"Oh lord, you really are that pathetic! There could be a swarm of fishes right now, teasing us for not seeing them! Because you're too stupid to remember to catch the stream daily." said Gollum.
"I'm not stupid!" He Pauses for a moment with a look of distraught "Fine! I'll check."
While hesitating at first, we turned our heads to look at a small shallow stream that was at a far distance from us. So we then start to slowly crawl on all fours towards the stream to search for food. As we started getting closer and closer, our anticipation for the thought of the juicy sea creature grew even more worse. Once our head looked down at the cool fluid of water, our rough dirty face went blank just waiting for a fish to snatch.
"Were getting impatient now precious. If you make us starve any longer, our bones might turn to dust!" snapped Gollum.
"I know! I know precious, I know! But, it's just that those fishes are stupid! And fat! And it hates us!"I cried with an emotional voice. When after that last word I say, suddenly in the water there was a splash with a tail along with it which alerts us.
We pause for a moment staring at the fast moving tail for confirmation, then our eyes spread out wide in excitement "FISH!" We screeched. When we instantly lunged towards the swift moving fish in the water. With both of us wrestling with each other, and having a strong grip on its center, with us forcefully moving the tasty fish close to our teeth. Until we both took a big sloppy bite of its head. Which suddenly makes our face change to a smirk.
"EATEN!" we shouted, following a us jumping up and down in victory, along with a satanic giggle. "We did it. We did it. Finally." We then instantly searched in our loincloth, and pulled out a golden ring "And it was all for you. Without you, we would still be eating bugs off the rocks in this cave. Without you we'd be lost. My love. My pretty. My precious."
Then in blink, we see a misshapen blur dropping face down with a high pitched scream. The impact of the blurry objects fall made us fall backwards from shock. And the scream sounded very odd. It was a scream we've never heard before.
For a couple of moments, I just stayed on the ground. Hesitating whether or not I should stand up and see who had broken in my space. Then I look right at the precious, and stare at it for a while, "Well I didn't ask for seconds precious, but who am I to stop you."
That's right! I'm leaving you with a one-liner. :) That's it for now, and I do promise more will happen in chapter 2 besides just hunting fish...trust me. Write your review and tell me what you thought of this first chapter. ;)
