You promised we would be
Friends forever
You promised me we wouldn't be split
Ever
But promises are meant to be
Broken
Especially on that one day,
The words I dreaded were spoken
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"Will you go out with me?"
With that soft voice
Did she ask
And slowly
And slowly
Broke apart your mask
Years, after Years
Date, after date
I watched you guys carefully
Trying to wait
I knew you would break up with her
Just like all the other girls
But then I realized something
While you gave rubies, diamonds, and pearls
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--
You love her
You love her
I see it in your eyes
And with all my life
I knew they never once told lies
My heart started shaking
My ears started to pop
When I saw every stride you took
You added and extra, happy hop
Your friends liked her
Just as much as they hated me
And now they finally saw
What they wanted to see
They thought she was nice
They thought she was kind
They loved her,
I saw it in their minds
I knew you would never love me
I've dated from Suigetsu to Kai
I've pretty much dated
Every boy in
Konoha High
Your promise to me
Was slowly, slowly
Breaking
As she took your, and your friends
Time for her taking
And finally the promise was broken
When you gave her that one, that one
Simple token
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--
A simple band,
A wedding ring
She laughed, she cried
She most likely wanted to sing
I lost you to
That pink haired, green eyed
Girl
I thought she was so ugly
I wanted to hurl
You told me
She was mischievous and unique
And that she had a temper, that made you feel
Meek
You once told me
Her hair was soft, and her eyes so
Bright
And that to your cold, dark world
She brought this amazing warm light
I watched you two steal kisses
Every now and then
And I wonder (and wish)
If that's how my life could've been
How I wanted to be
The one that you cared for
How I wanted us to be
So much more
But I still went to your wedding
Where I saw what you called,
Bright, lively eyes
And right then,
Right now,
I also knew they never told lies
Pure admiration,
And love shone through
And then I saw you
With a smile full of love so
Very true
She walked down the aisle
In her white wedding gown
I even saw your family
With no frowns
They even liked her
When they didn't like me
Was I so bad?
Was I so…
Un-free?
The opposite of me
Was she
She was the one
The one who was free
Free with her lover
Free with her life
While I stayed here
Living my life with strife
As I watched you two exchange your oaths, kiss and tokens
I realized something
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It's oaths that are meant to never
Be broken
Review please! Which do you like better?
"This is Konoha. You can't trust nobody but yourself. But here's a question: Can you trust yourself?"
Or
"This is Konoha. You can't trust nobody but yourself. But considerin' the way I turned out, can you really trust yourself?"
I'm trying to decide which to put in the next chapter of one of my stories. Which one do you like better?
How many of you thought this was from Sakura's POV?
Come on! Its not like i would make Sasu anyone else!
It was Karins POV if you were wondering.
