You promised we would be
Friends forever

You promised me we wouldn't be split
Ever

But promises are meant to be
Broken

Especially on that one day,
The words I dreaded were spoken

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"Will you go out with me?"
With that soft voice
Did she ask

And slowly
And slowly
Broke apart your mask

Years, after Years
Date, after date

I watched you guys carefully
Trying to wait

I knew you would break up with her
Just like all the other girls

But then I realized something
While you gave rubies, diamonds, and pearls

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You love her
You love her
I see it in your eyes

And with all my life
I knew they never once told lies

My heart started shaking
My ears started to pop

When I saw every stride you took
You added and extra, happy hop

Your friends liked her
Just as much as they hated me

And now they finally saw
What they wanted to see

They thought she was nice
They thought she was kind

They loved her,
I saw it in their minds

I knew you would never love me
I've dated from Suigetsu to Kai

I've pretty much dated
Every boy in
Konoha High

Your promise to me
Was slowly, slowly
Breaking

As she took your, and your friends
Time for her taking

And finally the promise was broken
When you gave her that one, that one
Simple token

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A simple band,
A wedding ring

She laughed, she cried
She most likely wanted to sing

I lost you to
That pink haired, green eyed
Girl

I thought she was so ugly
I wanted to hurl

You told me
She was mischievous and unique

And that she had a temper, that made you feel
Meek

You once told me
Her hair was soft, and her eyes so
Bright

And that to your cold, dark world
She brought this amazing warm light

I watched you two steal kisses
Every now and then

And I wonder (and wish)
If that's how my life could've been

How I wanted to be
The one that you cared for

How I wanted us to be
So much more

But I still went to your wedding
Where I saw what you called,
Bright, lively eyes

And right then,
Right now,
I also knew they never told lies

Pure admiration,
And love shone through

And then I saw you
With a smile full of love so
Very true

She walked down the aisle
In her white wedding gown

I even saw your family
With no frowns

They even liked her
When they didn't like me

Was I so bad?
Was I so…
Un-free?

The opposite of me
Was she

She was the one
The one who was free

Free with her lover
Free with her life

While I stayed here
Living my life with strife

As I watched you two exchange your oaths, kiss and tokens
I realized something

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It's oaths that are meant to never
Be broken


Review please! Which do you like better?

"This is Konoha. You can't trust nobody but yourself. But here's a question: Can you trust yourself?"

Or

"This is Konoha. You can't trust nobody but yourself. But considerin' the way I turned out, can you really trust yourself?"

I'm trying to decide which to put in the next chapter of one of my stories. Which one do you like better?

How many of you thought this was from Sakura's POV?

Come on! Its not like i would make Sasu anyone else!

It was Karins POV if you were wondering.