Well, my other story…. Sucked. This story, I hope, will be better. It'll sorta be writing itself. Tell me what you guys think.

Disclaimer: No, I do NOT own Tenchi or any of the Tenchi Characters, etc. If I did, I'd be RICH. All the Tenchi stuff belongs to Pioneer and all those big corps.



Introduction



The orange sun rose slowly over the forest-covered mountains, spreading its light throughout the country. A lake with a peculiar looking tree in the middle of it was nestled in these mountains and by that lake sat a lonely figure. The light began to grow, revealing the figure and its identity. The figure stood by the lake, watching the glorious sun break free from the horizon and uncover the beauty of the mountains and lake from their veil of darkness. He listens to the breeze rustle the trees, the waves lapping at the shore of the lake, and the birds singing sweetly from above. Gradually, more of the splendor of the mountainside and lake are uncovered. Birds fish for food in the lake and fly through the sky performing amazing feats in the air. He feels peaceful; the whole setting is full of peace, harmony, beauty, and wonder. Life is abounding and all the pieces of the puzzle are there in perfect harmony and love.

Silently another figure moves towards the first. This figure is smaller and non-human. It reaches the first and rubs up against it, meowing. The first hands it a carrot and sits down, causing the second to climb into the first's lap, settling down and munching contentedly.

Abruptly, a shrill call interrupts the calm and beauty of the scene, disturbing the quiet and all the life forms.

"TEEENNNCCCHHIII!!!!"

The first form jumps up, startled by the call, consequently knocking the second off his lap.

"TTTEEENNNCCCHHHHIII!!!!!!!!!" The voice calls once more. "COME ON!!!"

The first figure runs towards the direction of the voice and reaches a building nestled in the forest. He enters the building, oblivious to the second, and closes the door before the second has a chance to enter as well.

That was the Intro. What do you think?? Should I continue it?? Any suggestions??? What's your overall rating of the story????