This is my first Bakugan for the grammatical errors

After defeating Visermana brawlers have made party of Dan were Dan decided to go sailing with Drago and it told no brawlers were very upset about their delay,but after a half hour Dan has arrived and immediately got a fist on the head of Runo"You idiot why did not you call anyone when you left?I understand Dan,but and do you Drago?"

"The Dan arrived you, why so late?"asks Marucho

"Sorry about that, but it took me some time to be alone"said Dan in a low tone

"It's okay that you've already arrived, let the fun Julie, and playing music.

But Dan is not something played,it has already attracted the attention of something else- it is as usual pulled him by the ear"Good old Dan voracious as ever ".To what they all was really nice to see all the brawlers together after a long is true that a lot of change over the years but their friendship's still hard.

"People'll pray a little attention,Marucho has something to say."Mira said, and began to applaud,Marucho take over a word:"Dear friends, it's been 6 years since we met our of these years, but our bakugan partners we met many friends who are not with us today here, so I made ?a little video presentation".When he finished, everyone gave him a big round of applause and the picture appeared on the big screen.

The first picture was a picture Marucho,Shun and Dan with Jake,Fabia and Ren after winning were smiling as they watched images of their previous fight.

Until the canvas was not the image appeared of a beautiful girl about 13 years old with red hair and eyes the color of chocolate on what they all calmed down and looked astonishment.

While on one Gunz not shout"Oh my God, you didn't told me that you have such a nice friend" on what him Shun looked over.

"Yes, that's our friend from Russia Alice,we have not heard from her for a long time"said Marucho

"Runo are you are you may have heard with her?"asks Julie

"No, I have not heard with her how much neither you.I tried to get it a few times but never reported either by phone or over the network.I'd love to know what happened to her "said runo sadly.

"You know Gunz actually it was one of our best friends when he started this whole adventure with Bakugan"

Dan Retrospection

Before nearly six years on Earth have started falling , we did not know what they are made and then have them appeared did not know that the Bakugan living things even we Shun and I make new then it was Masquerade which sent all the Bakugan in Doom six Runo , Marucho, Julie, Shun, Alice and I are united in order to win we all were like best friend until we found out that she was a that we fought with Naga supreme Bakugan challenger to problems in the world,and we won him.

-From this period that image.-After that, he doesn't feel as good as a fighter, and time we met with her three years ago after a battle in the New Vestroia and since then we have not heard anything about it.

End Retrospection

"So there is something wrong under such a pretty face"said Gunz

"You're all wrong Ganz realized it was really good but it was possessed evil energy Core of Silence"

Julia said waving his hands.

"Very well, then I think that I did not best understood"Gunz said while scratching his head.

"I'd really like to know where he is, and what it does, and how she looks."Runo said melancholic expression.

"I think like that we to yesterday was like a sister and now as it is only a shadow of the is driving me crazy."Dan said, slamming his fist on the table.

Shun did not say anything even though him lacked the most,only stood up a tree with his arms folded as if nothing is happening.

Mira suddenly appeared bringing refreshments.

"Is someone for lemonade?"asks Mira

"Yes!" they all said in unison.

All were taken lemonade and behaved as if the conversation was a little before wasn't conducted.

Well that's my first Bakugan story, tell me what you think, do you think I should continue?