So,this is my 2nd try at posting this story.I'm very sorry for the 1st attempt...I had a great deal of trouble uploading stuff(and not really enough time for it)so it all ended up looking really messy, chunks of text missing etc.!
Anyway,this is the prologue and I'm not all that happy with it(neither with the 1st chapter)but I just hope that you bear with me,it does get better from chapter 2 onwards!Thanks!:)
Um...I don't really own anything,just Liat really who is my own creation!;)
From Hawks and Rodents:
Prologue:
Liat sat and watched as her friend Shoshana put on her make-up. Every movement seemed determined,meaningfull,almost likewarpaint. Tonight they would kill the Nazis,smoke them out in their very own gas chamber. Liat had to smile at the memory of how easy it had been to organise it. Once this young German soldier had developed a crush on Shoshana,wanting to show the movie of his heroic deed in their cinema,it had all fit together. All the greats in Nazi Germany would be spending an evening at their cinema,not knowing that it would be their last.
Shoshana and Liat had made a video,wanting to revenge all Jews."You look worried.",Shoshana's voice brought her back to reality. "No,actually I was just thinking that it couldn't have been easier." But the other woman still continued to look at her through the mirror. "But still,you are right.I fear for us...if something should go wrong...I couldn't stand to lose you as well." "I am willing to die...if that's what it takes...the jew hunter will be here tonight and I want to see him dead." "That's exactly what I'm afraid of.",Liat stated silently,"you're posessed with this...hatred...consumed by this dream of revenge." "He killed my family,Liat!",Shoshana exclaimed loudly,"they didn't have a chance...it was a foul,cruel thing to do...Nazis are all the same,they don't deserve another chance." When Liat failed to reply,Shoshana continued. "Have you forgotten what they've done to you?!" "How could I?",Liat asked her voice drenched with the pain of the memories.
She had only been a girl when their family had been caught,trying to cross the German border. They had been brought to one of the concentration camps. One day a guard had taken her family to a wall outside the camp. She and her brother had to stay behind as their parents were asked to lean against the wall,to be measured. But once they were standing against the wall they were shot in the neck,killed like animals. Liat could still see that brief look of horror on her mother's face and then the blood,blood everywhere. She had thrown up,right then and there ,while her baby brother had begun to cry. They were separated almost instantly. Up to this day she didn't know what had happened to him,but she could only assume the worst.
She ,however,had been taken by the hand by a kind-looking German soldier. He was old,greying with a buldging stomach and very kind brown eyes."You are a pretty little thing.",he had whispered softly,"you'll get through this." And for a moment Liat had felt safe...but then...then he had begun to touch her,to run his hands all over her body and she had screamed and bit him and eventually managed to run away. "You won't get far!",he had shouted after her,"I caught your filthy parents,I will find you too!" And even now she still had the scar on the inside of her thighs,from when his fingernails had bruised her skin.
And suddenly she could feel the same flame of anger burn inside and back in reality Liat found herself whispering :"Lets kill them...no mercy!"
