Ever since I was a kit I was bullied, not just by a clan mate or a couple of cats I was bullied by nearly the hole clan. The only people who like me are Redstar and Badgerfur. I like Badgerfur because he always tells me I'm beautiful but I don't get called that, not after the attack my ears were torn of and my pelt is just ragged that's how I got scar in my name.

It was are warrior ceremony today me and my popular sister Cinderpaw will be made warriors.

"Cats of Thunderclan graver around the ledge" Redstar called.

"There are going to be two new warriors today Cinderpaw and Scarpaw please come here".

"Scarpaw doesn't deserve to be a warrior" my mother called out.

Anger boiled up inside me why was I hated so much? I wanted to shout at her but I left it in.

Redstar ignored the she-cat "by the powers of Starclan these cats have trained had and there ready to become warrior. Cinderpaw from now on you will be known as Cinderbreeze Thunderclan thanks you for you bravery in battle" Cinderbreeze rubbed noses with her leader.

"Scarpaw from now on your will be known as scarpetal Thunderclan thanks you for ..Um.. Your helpfulness to the clan" scarpetal smiled at her name it was a nice name she rubbed nose with the leader and waited to her name to be cheered but all she heard was Cinderbreeze.

"Cinderbreeze, Cinderbreeze, Cinderbreeze" everyone cheered.

But she heard Badgerfur and Redstar call out her name.

As it was still early she still had loads of time before she had to do the vigil.

I was just about to go in the warriors den when I saw Cinderbreeze and the deputy Icemist sharing thongs.

I growled why dose Cinderbreeze get everything I get nothing.

Then I saw Badgerfur come up to me

"Do you want to go hunting" he asked.

"Sure" I replied smiling.

We went out the camp.

I tried to impress the clan and Badgerfur by hunting a rabbit, I saw one and was massive I went to get it and I caught it as I was walking back to the camp with it and a few mice. Cinderbreeze came along and stool the rabbit I ran after her but it was too late she showed the hole clan telling them that she court it and I tried to steel it.

I was so angry then I saw my mother she pushed me to Redstars den and told him the story Cinderbreeze told her .

Redstar nodded "what's you point of view scarpetal" he asked.

"I was hunting and I court the rabbit as I was walking back Cinderbreeze took it"

"My child wouldn't do such a crime" my mother shouted.

Redstar thought "well Cinderbreeze must be making up a lie because she never went hunting"

"but..but" my mother said.

Redstar came out his den "Cinderbreeze may I talk to you" he asked.

Not long after Cinderbreeze came out of the den frowning.

It was dark now and we started the vigil I waited to the perfect moment when everyone was asleep that was the right time right time to get my revenge.

I leaped onto Cinderbreeze digging my claws into her fur I killed her so quickly she didn't have time to scream.

I screamed to wake the clan I told them that a rouge came and attacked her and I tried to save her since then everyone liked me.