Madness
A poem from Ryou's perspective prior to when he knows about Yami Bakura.
Madness
He's laughing so loud,
But you can't hear.
You say it's okay,
That there's nothing to fear
But how can it be
With this voice in my head,
I don't hear my thoughts,
I hear his instead.
I woke up today
With blood on my hands
My head starts to spin,
I don't think I can stand.
What other friend
Has disappeared today?
Been thrown into a coma,
Left their body to waste away?
I don't remember
What I've done today.
I just found myself here,
So far away
Where can I go?
With the things that I've done?
Who can I turn to?
Where can I run?
But I must get away,
Leave behind my friends,
Before they too
Do meet their ends.
And in my head,
Ringing, so clear,
Is the laughter that no one
But I can hear.
Please review if you read the poem. Tell me, is it good, is it bad, or should I never attempt to write poetry again?
All advice is welcome.
