Hi! So this is a small poem that I wrote about how it would look like in heaven. Tell me if it's good or bad. :)
Heaven!
I looked around to see if anyone there
But alas I found darkness everywhere
I saw a light across a river,
And the darkness around faded forever
I remember the sound of a bullet going off
And after that I found me here
I looked again to find no-one,
But saw a man with dark black hair
"Come here my Daughter" He said, and I did.
Walking into the arms of His
I'm sure tat I've seen Him somewhere
But my memory is like a goldfish's hair
The man took me through a Palace's gate
And saw my childhood friends playing there
I looked again at the dark haired mate,
And was sure that he was a man from the church.
"Who are you?" I asked Him and He answered,
"Someone who was with you everywhere you went"
Now I'm sure that he was whom,
Non other than the Christ Himself!
May God bless you! Review and tell me what you think!
Good Day!
