Okay so i'm not really new to fanfiction but this is my first time actually writing my own story so please rate and review. I'd really appreciate any constructive criticism~

Here's the first chapter to my story.

Enjoy guys~


The sun had just begun to set and Fionna and Cake were just getting back from a long day's work chasing hug wolves away from the candy kingdom. As they climbed into their soft, plump beds, Cake's being in a cozy dresser drawer and Fionna's in a comfortable bed made from wood taken from the forest close to their tree house-like home that they built together, Fionna had an uneasy feeling about the hug wolves and the Candy Kingdom.

"Hey Cake, do you think those dang hug wolves would try to attack the candy peeps at night?" She had been thinking about it for quite some time after returning home.

"No baby. Even if they did, I'm sure Prince Gumball would tell us before anything could happen."

Fionna's face flushed with a bright reddish pink tint as she heard the name 'Gumball'. Ever since she saw the candy prince introduce himself as Gumball the first time she ever walked into the Candy Kingdom, that darn prince was all she could think about and she wasn't exactly sure why. "Ooouu girl, you were thinking about gumball again, weren't you?" Cake said in a joking manner, a bright smile on her kitty cat face. "Wha!? Pssh! No, of course not! Why would I think about HIM?! He's just a dang prince... why would I even- hey!" Fionna became so flustered. What was she going to say just now? She couldn't even think about the candy prince without getting a weird fuzzy feeling in her stomach. And frankly, she didn't like the way it felt at all. "He's definitely a sweet prince, that's for sure. Right Fiona? Cake declared with a mischievous smile below her whiskers. "Whatever..." Fionna said, red still lingering in her almost porcelain cheeks.

The Next Morning

The day had started off with Cake who had just woken up from a good night's sleep. She walked down their tree branch staircase and began to cook breakfast for the both of them. After the eggs and bacon were finished, Fionna walked down the stairs and entered the kitchen sluggishly but immediately became energized with the aroma of the freshly made food. This was a pretty regular routine for the both of them. Ever since Fionna could remember, Cake was always there through thick and thin for her. She always felt the need to repay her somehow but could never think of anything to suffice Cake's kindness. Cake being Cake never asked for anything in return but Fionna had always thought that she deserved it. She is a great guardian, even though Fionna never really thought of her that way, and an amazing friend.

Fionna had felt something was a little off about Cake but she couldn't exactly put her finger on it. What happened? Why did she seem so tense?

"Uhh… Cake? You okay?" Fionna asked, a little unsure of what to expect from her furry friend. "Cake?"

"What? Oh, yeah baby I'm fine." Fionna could tell there was something up. Cake was so serious all of a sudden. "Cake. What happened?" She asked again, her voice was a little more demanding this time.

Cake looked at her with a somewhat frightened face and handed this morning's newspaper. "Something is going on in town. The people are saying there's another monster hanging around there at night attacking anyone who goes near it. I know we've beat the glob out of a lot of monsters already but this one gives me a weird feeling. The fur on my tail stands up just thinkin about it!" Fionna looked down at the newspaper, unsure of what to think.

She didn't know what it was about this 'monster' that made cake so frightened. "I don't think we've ever seen a monster like this one, hun." Cake said as she tried to comb the fur on her tail down. Fionna had to agree with her. Something did seem a little weird about this. "Maybe we should check it out. I'm sure its nothing to worry about. We just gotta see for ourselves Cake." Fionna said, as she patted Cake's head. "Lets head into town to see what's up." She exclaimed as she began to walk out the front door taking her green backpack and a few small weapons, just in case. "But what if it attacks us?! The town people said it attacks anyone who goes near it!" Cake said with a little sense of panic in her voice. "Don't worry about that. They said it only comes out at night, remember?" Fionna asked with a small shrug to emphasize her question. She smiled at Cake and assured her cat companion that it would be alright, even though she did feel a little uneasy about it but she wouldn't dare frighten her friend anymore than she already was.

They both got their things together and headed out into town to find out what ever this 'monster' was.

But little did they know, they would be in for quite a surprise.