Any ways after receiving some criticism I realized what I need to do.
First off what I realized years ago was that ninjas spend all there time training and what not. It was never said that they learned math and all that crap.
It's sort of like ninja/high school student know what I'm sayin'?
Trying to make it as creative as possible. BTW I'm skipping most of the school year.(anyone who would like to write about what happened during the school year go and knock yourself out.)
A Trip and a Kiss
As the bell rung to end 4th period Naruto headed to his locker.
"Hmm maybe I might go to end of the year trip….." he mumbled to himself.
"Damn where is he?" Ino was on a determined mission to find Naruto
"Oh god there you are! Naruto I NEED your help with something.
"Um sure .. um hey are you going to the trip next week?
"No it's too expensive. Are you?" she asked.
"Yeah. Hey I could pay for you. he suggested.
"Y-You would do that…. for me?"
"Sure I've known you for a large amount of my life so why not?" he said with a grin
"So… see ya after school!" he nodded and rushed off to Anko's class.
"I can never get that guy… troublesome." She said mocking Shikimaru
That Following Week
"Thanks Naruto a-are you going to pick me up for the party?
"Yeah of course ... Um your welcome Ino-chan."
"Did he just call me chan….?" As she stood there and thought about the very words still ringing in her head, then she felt a wave of guilt hit her like a tidal wave.
She was seething in guilt because she had been using Naruto as her personal driver monkey for days on end and she hasn't even show him how she appreciates it.
"Hey why don't I take him out for ramen … and pay for it myself?"
(At Naruto's House)
"What's wrong with me now?" he questioned. "Why do I get all nervous around her …. Why can't I get her out of my head?'' he questioned himself.
"You bett (hic) not be (hic) about me you pervert!" Anko stated as she "walked" in half dressed. (clearly to much sake)
"I honestly don't know why I lend you money to buy sake anyway."
He didn't hear any sly comments or teasing. The only thing he felt was a warm snake like tongue licking his neck in circular motion. Well you can't blame him for hesitating, cause he's a 17 year old getting those "feelings".
But he felt as if he was betraying Ino if he a admitted he enjoyed the sensation. "Damn… no… CUT IT OUT! he boomed. " What's your damage it's not like your cheating on anyone." She hollered. At that moment his face flushed red, and he stormed off to his room. He brushed off the covers and began spiraling into a whirlpool of thoughts.
Then he found himself thinking about Ino. "Why do I feel this way about her now?" There was no denying he was falling in love with Ino Yamanaka all of a sudden. Out of all the people.
Bang Bang Bang!
"There's no need to bust down my door Anko!" He was shocked to see who was at the door. "Hey Ino what are you doing here?"
A moment of silenced filled the air. "Um want to go gets some ramen? I'll pay."
"You don't have to do that." he protested. "I want any way I need to talk to you.
He agreed.
(Later on the walk home)
"Ok you have not said a word to me since we ate. What's up."
After a moment of silence he was beginning to get a bit impatient.
After a while she finally spoke up. "Naruto I'm going to run away from home! Alright!" She sobbed into his shoulder. For some reason she found this comforting. It was a awkward silence broken of sobs. "W-why?"
"Cause my mom wants me to go out with Shikimaru (sob) but I don't know (voice breaking) what to do. I'm sorry to put this on you all of a sudden."
"I'm sorry Ino but I don't know." Then out of no where she did the only thing she could, beg. "Please Naruto.. please!"
Well I think it's pretty good so far so till nest time.
OH .. review.