Hey! If I get anything wrong please tell me, not alot of stuff makes sense to me yet on this site! But i'll try my best!
I'm just messing around with the lorien legacies a bit, so it's not very serious writing, but i'll be trying my best!
Once again if anythings wrong just tell me! Thanks!
Now I need to get somethings straight before I start!
Number 10 and her cepan don't exist.
Number 7's cepan is still alive, but their a man named Bob (I just wanted to name someone Bob!)
They're now all united, including 5 and 8, but there's a catch, or this story would just be boring!
5 and 8 are both boys. Don't ask me why, it just seemed right to me *Shrug*. They don't have cepans either, they died protecting them.
Introduction
The remaining numbers (Author's note: I don't know what else to call them), Bernie Cosar and Bob sat around a small fire, mulling over everything they knew trying to figure out the best way to get rid of the Mogadorians and then get back to their own planet.
Six slowly looked up. "There's something I need to tell you guys before we start to plan and you can't interrupt" She started soberly. Instantly John (Or number four) lifted his head up and opened his mouth to speak, stopping when he saw number six's narrowed eyes.
She carried on like nothing had happened. "We're not finished on our mission to find the others yet, not everyone's here-" Instantly the rest of the group broke into outrage, not including Bernie (Short for Bernie Cosar).
"Shut up!" Six shouted, looking really annoyed; "A year ago I found another lorien! Well, more like they found me. They explained their story to me, about how their cepan had died three weeks after they'd got to Earth and how they had a major brush in with the mogs! Just when they were about to be killed by Setrakus Ra something extremely weird happened and the mogs just forget about them and left to go track their next victim." She told them all.
"It was number two; She was never killed".
So...
I won't force you to review, but I have nothing against stuff like criticism if you want to review, but you don't have to be cruel. But if you want to criticize, criticize! Thanks for reading, I really apprieciate it!
Go ahead and tell me if there's anything I've done wrong, because i'm sure there's loads!