Desprate Chapter One
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"Al!" Ed yelled after his beloved brother as he left their small home, slamming the door behind him. Ed stood in shock in the entry way, his mouth hung open. He stood there a few seconds more before running after Al. He threw on his red cloak, and threw open the large door to reveal a heavy sheet of rain pounding on the sidewalk. He ran towards the street, not quite sure which way Al had ran, but going with the flow. He decided to turn left. He started running towards the end of the street when he saw it. A car turning the corner to fast, his brothers green eyes were too filled with tears to notice the car. The car collided with the poor teen sending him back a good five feet. The car didn't stop it just kept speeding down the street. Oblivious to the fact that an innocent person just got hit. As the car drove past Ed managed a look at the license plate, FIR 8754. The police that patrolled the area just so happened to pull up just then, one officer pulled out his phone and called an ambuance, as he ran towards Al. Ed was still ways away, he ran towards his brother. As he got closer he saw the ambulance pull up. Paramedics jumped out of their vehical crowding around Al. Ed ran even faster to glimps at his brother. Within a few seconds he was fighting his way through paremedics
"Move aside, that's my brother." He yelled shoving the taller men out of the way. When he made it to his brother he felt his knees go weak, then he collapsed, his brothers eyes were half lidded, his chest rising very slowly, blood covered his clothed chest. Ed put his face in his hands, and started bawling. He couldent help it. He'd lost his mother and father, he coulden't bare to lose his brother. He got pulled back, out of the paremedic circle. He was to discombobulated to fight back. He saw his brother being lifted on a strecher and pushed into the ambulance. And then everything went black.
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