Please rate and review! This is my first real attempt at writing a multi-parter story so please tell me what you think!
Ui Hirasuwa was a ten year old girl from the town of Twinleaf. Ui had woken up early today, maybe a little too early. Yawning and raising her arms above her head in a big stretch, she sat up and looked at her magnezone alarm clock. Six o'clock! Oh man, I'm so tired but there is no way that I'm going back to sleep! Ui thought. "Today's my birthday!" Ui said as she jumped out of bed with sudden energy. Realizing that she couldn't run out of the house in her pajamas, she quickly cleaned up and got dressed. She picked up her backpack that she had packed the night before with all the necessities for travel, and ran to her parent's room.
There was one day that any child growing looked forward to more than any other day, and that was their tenth birthday. On any given day, you could go to Professor Rowan's lab and watch new trainers get their first pokemon. Ui didn't live in Sangem town, where Professor Rowan was however, so she had to wake up extra early to make sure she got to pick her first pokemon before they ran out. Twinleaf town was a good fifteen minute walk from Twinleaf town, if you used Rout 201. You could walk there faster if you walked in the tall grass and forest, where wild pokemon were.
Ui had literally skipped down the stairs to her parent's room. Knocking on their door, she didn't wait for them to answer. She opened the door and ran inside yelling, "It's my birthday wake up!" Jumping on her parent's bed before they had time to react, she hugged each of them. "Morning baby." Ui's mom said, and let out a yawn, getting out of bed. "Happy birthday!" Ui's dad said, a little more energetically. They all got up and went to the kitchen. "I know you have to leave soon Ui, but let us prepare you some breakfast first!" After about twenty minutes of talking about the journey that was about to happen for Ui, they had eggs and bacon. Ui was enjoying the last bits of quality time with her parents when she realized she was twenty minutes late. "I'm late!" Ui jumped out of her chair, almost knocking the table over, and grabbed her backpack which was sitting near the front door. Her parents followed her to the front door, and looked at her sadly. "Well honey, I think its time for you to get going." Her dad sighed and gave her a hug. "I love you baby, make sure you change your underwear every day!" Her mom gave her a hug that was significantly longer than the one with her dad and stepped back. "Thanks mom and dad, I love you so much!" After that Ui and her parents exchanged one more hug good bye and then Ui started on her journey.
