Hi! This is my first ever Harry Potter fic so it's probably gonna turn out
really crap. Please read and review anyway and tell me what you think. Go
on, you know you want to..pleeeeeeeese.
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Chapter 1:
Harry woke up in his 6th year dormitory at Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. He yawned and stretched. It was Saturday, Harry's favourite day of the week. He got dressed and went down to breakfast in the Great hall.
Hermione and Ron weren't there. They were probably still asleep. Harry felt like eating alone this morning anyway. The Great hall was fairly quiet, it was only 7:30 so most students were probably having a lie-in.
As he entered the Great hall Harry instinctively looked towards the Ravenclaw table to see if she was there, but there was only a few 1st years talking loudly about which Quidditch team was the best, and some students gathered in a huddle talking quietly, Harry didn't quite catch what they were saying as he sat down and took a piece of toast. He didn't really care either.
He took along time over his toast and pumpkin juice that morning hoping to catch a glimpse of a certain 7th year Ravenclaw female.
Just when Harry was about to give up and go to the common room to find Ron and Hermione the doors opened again and the person Harry had been looking out for all morning walked in. Surrounded by her usual huddle of girls was Cho Chang.
Harry watched her walk casually to the Ravenclaw table and sit down. She looked beautiful. Her long black hair hanging loose around her shoulders. It shimmered as it caught the light from the ceiling of the Great hall. Her face was smiling making her deep brown eyes look even more amazing and entrancing, her whole body drew Harry's eyes to her, he was mesmerized by her, Harry smiled dreamily and sighed.
Just then he was snapped back to reality by Ron and Hermione sitting either side of him. Ron waved a hand in front his face.
"Earth to Harry, is anyone there." He said. Harry shook his head and looked at them both.
"Oh s.s..sorry I was j.j.just thinking about..er...Quidditich training." Harry lied quickly. Ron and Hermione weren't convinced. They'd always known he had a crush on Cho Chang but thought it better just to eat their breakfast and leave him to his thoughts.
"So what are we doing today in Quidditch practice." Ron asked. Harry had gone back to staring at Cho, but was jerked back to reality (again)
Oh..er.just the usual, our next game is against Hufflepuff so it's not like we have to do any especially hard training. Ron laughed and made a comment about how crap Hufflepuff were. But no-one heard it because his mouth was full of toast.
By 9:30am Ron had decided he'd finally eaten enough and the three friends traipsed back up to the common room.
Hermione gathered her books for a morning of studying in the library whilst Harry and Ron grabbed their Quidditch gear and headed down to the pitch. All the way down to the pitch Ron tried to have a conversation with Harry but gave up because quickly because Harry just kept staring into space, lost in his own thoughts.
Harry was of course thinking about Cho. Each day his desire for her grew, Now he thought about her almost 24 hours a day. He dreamt of kissing her and he wished more and more that he could touch her, hold her in his arms, like he had done the year before.
He looked back on that time wishing he'd never mentioned Hermione, if only he could turn back the clock, but he couldn't. He tried to forget but that made his feelings for her even stronger. He had to do something before he exploded. But what and how could he do anything. Cho was a year older than him, how could she ever like him again, how could he do anything.
He was at the Quidditch pitch now. He kicked off hard from the ground and did several fast laps around the pitch. But not even this could take his mind off it now. He had to do something, anything to get Cho.
He had a long hard training session but still he couldn't forget. He trudged up to the common room with Ron and sat down in front of the fire.
For the rest of that day, when was eating, studying, playing chess with Ron, Cho was on his mind.
He stayed up in the common room until only He and Ron were left. Ron was finishing off homework (as usual) and Harry was staring into the flames of the warm, glowing fire. Ron muttered something as he wrote.
"The secrets of the.." he said to himself as his quill scratched against the parchment. But Harry heard no more, something had just clicked in his brain..secret...secret...he'd just had an idea. He sat bolt upright in his chair and smiled. Maybe it just might work he thought..maybe it just might work...
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So how was it, did it suck. Please review and tell me what you think..good bad. I wanna no. Should I continue. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REVIEW!
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Chapter 1:
Harry woke up in his 6th year dormitory at Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. He yawned and stretched. It was Saturday, Harry's favourite day of the week. He got dressed and went down to breakfast in the Great hall.
Hermione and Ron weren't there. They were probably still asleep. Harry felt like eating alone this morning anyway. The Great hall was fairly quiet, it was only 7:30 so most students were probably having a lie-in.
As he entered the Great hall Harry instinctively looked towards the Ravenclaw table to see if she was there, but there was only a few 1st years talking loudly about which Quidditch team was the best, and some students gathered in a huddle talking quietly, Harry didn't quite catch what they were saying as he sat down and took a piece of toast. He didn't really care either.
He took along time over his toast and pumpkin juice that morning hoping to catch a glimpse of a certain 7th year Ravenclaw female.
Just when Harry was about to give up and go to the common room to find Ron and Hermione the doors opened again and the person Harry had been looking out for all morning walked in. Surrounded by her usual huddle of girls was Cho Chang.
Harry watched her walk casually to the Ravenclaw table and sit down. She looked beautiful. Her long black hair hanging loose around her shoulders. It shimmered as it caught the light from the ceiling of the Great hall. Her face was smiling making her deep brown eyes look even more amazing and entrancing, her whole body drew Harry's eyes to her, he was mesmerized by her, Harry smiled dreamily and sighed.
Just then he was snapped back to reality by Ron and Hermione sitting either side of him. Ron waved a hand in front his face.
"Earth to Harry, is anyone there." He said. Harry shook his head and looked at them both.
"Oh s.s..sorry I was j.j.just thinking about..er...Quidditich training." Harry lied quickly. Ron and Hermione weren't convinced. They'd always known he had a crush on Cho Chang but thought it better just to eat their breakfast and leave him to his thoughts.
"So what are we doing today in Quidditch practice." Ron asked. Harry had gone back to staring at Cho, but was jerked back to reality (again)
Oh..er.just the usual, our next game is against Hufflepuff so it's not like we have to do any especially hard training. Ron laughed and made a comment about how crap Hufflepuff were. But no-one heard it because his mouth was full of toast.
By 9:30am Ron had decided he'd finally eaten enough and the three friends traipsed back up to the common room.
Hermione gathered her books for a morning of studying in the library whilst Harry and Ron grabbed their Quidditch gear and headed down to the pitch. All the way down to the pitch Ron tried to have a conversation with Harry but gave up because quickly because Harry just kept staring into space, lost in his own thoughts.
Harry was of course thinking about Cho. Each day his desire for her grew, Now he thought about her almost 24 hours a day. He dreamt of kissing her and he wished more and more that he could touch her, hold her in his arms, like he had done the year before.
He looked back on that time wishing he'd never mentioned Hermione, if only he could turn back the clock, but he couldn't. He tried to forget but that made his feelings for her even stronger. He had to do something before he exploded. But what and how could he do anything. Cho was a year older than him, how could she ever like him again, how could he do anything.
He was at the Quidditch pitch now. He kicked off hard from the ground and did several fast laps around the pitch. But not even this could take his mind off it now. He had to do something, anything to get Cho.
He had a long hard training session but still he couldn't forget. He trudged up to the common room with Ron and sat down in front of the fire.
For the rest of that day, when was eating, studying, playing chess with Ron, Cho was on his mind.
He stayed up in the common room until only He and Ron were left. Ron was finishing off homework (as usual) and Harry was staring into the flames of the warm, glowing fire. Ron muttered something as he wrote.
"The secrets of the.." he said to himself as his quill scratched against the parchment. But Harry heard no more, something had just clicked in his brain..secret...secret...he'd just had an idea. He sat bolt upright in his chair and smiled. Maybe it just might work he thought..maybe it just might work...
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So how was it, did it suck. Please review and tell me what you think..good bad. I wanna no. Should I continue. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REVIEW!