ext. Outside New York street powerline - day
The camera pans over to an electrical technician who is setting up his construction truck to work on a power line that was knocked down during a current thunder/lightning storm that is going through New York City. As the man climbs up the poll it zooms in on his face
Maxwell Dillon
Of course they send the new guy out to work on the electrical power lines during a lighting storm. Bull shit. That's what this is.
The camera then pans back out and shows him working on the power line. As he works on it, it zooms in on his hands re-arranging the wires inside the power box. It then zooms out to a mid shot of him closing the box and proceeding down the trucks ladder. As he is walking down the camera pans out to a wide shot of him walking down the ladder. As he is walking down the ladder a bolt of lightning strikes the truck and shoots up the ladder shaking it, electrocuting Maxwell and knocking him off the ladder onto the floor from about 30 feet high. As he hits the floor his head whiplashes back onto the concrete opening his scalp and knocking him unconscious. The camera then quickly switches away and we hear a school bell ring.
Int. School hallway - Day
The camera then switches to a shot of Gwen Stacy looking through her locker. As she closes the locker door, it reveals Peter Parker leaning up against the locker next to Stacy's. As she closes it and see's Parker she is caught off guard and is startled by him and jumps back
GWEN STACY
God. Why?
Peter Parker
Why what?(chuckles)
GWEN STACY
Why do you always have to sneak up on me?
PETER PARKER
Because you're easily frightened?(reluctantly smiles)
GWEN STACY
(Glaring at Peter)
Come on. Lets go to physics
PETER PARKER
But wouldn't you rather stay here and just look at the beautiful school ceiling that is so wonderfully painted with the help from the tax payers dollars
The camera pans up to the roof showing that it is worn down and torn up
GWEN STACY
Well that's quite an observation Mr. Parker
Gwen moves close to Peter as if she is going to kiss him and at the last minute she moves away
GWEN STACY
Come on
Begins to walk away and looks back
GWEN STACY
We don't want to be late... Again
She extends her hand as an invitation for Peter to hold her hand. Peter then walks over, grabs her hand and the two begin to walk to the science wing of the school.
Int. Physics Room - Day
As the two walk into the classroom they notice a new kid, dressed in blue jeans, and a gray hoodie with the hood up, sitting in the back corner of the class. As the two sit down Peter leans over to Gwen
PETER PARKER
Uh. Whose that?
GWEN STACY
Who?
Peter then nod's his head over into the direction of the kid sitting in the back of the room
GWEN STACY
I'm not sure. I haven't seen him around before
Teacher
Alright class, calm down. We have a new student joining us today who just transferred in from a school in Brooklyn. This is Herman Schultz. Why don't you guys be nice and give him a hand if he needs anything
Flash Thompson
Herman? Wow! What a ridiculous name! Looks like you might be getting a break for awhile Parker
teacher
Flash thats enough. He's a new student, don't scare him away just as he gets here
Herman Schultz
Watch yourself kid. One day you'll be begging me for help
Whole class laughs
Teacher
Class! That is enough! Now. Open your books to page 366. We will be going over high frequency vibrations, and how it can level cities almost like an atomic bomb
As the teacher is talking the camera closes up on Herman's face as he sits up and takes notice. As the teacher finishes talking it switches over to Gwen and Peter having their own side conversation while working on an activity assigned by the teacher
GWEN STACY
Odd kid
PETER PARKER
What?
GWEN STACY
The new kid. He seems a little, I dont know, odd?
PETER PARKER
He's just new. I'm sure he'll come around and sweep you off your feet(laughs)
GWEN STACY
What?
PETER PARKER
Nothing just a little joke
GWEN STACY
Hmmm. Well, alright Peter whatever you say
The bell rings and the class begins to leave the room
PETER PARKER
I'm going to go talk to him
Peter then walks up to Herman and extends his hand in a friendly gesture
PETER PARKER
Hey man, I'm Peter
Herman looks up from putting his books in his bag, looks at his hand and then goes back to putting his books away
PETER PARKER
Right. Anyway, ignore Flash. He's just a prick to anyone and everyone
Herman picks up his back pack, begins to walk towards the door but stops shoulder to shoulder with Peter
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Ya know. I could care less about "Flash" and everyone at this school because I know I am about ten times smarter than everyone here and will be something larger then everyone here combined
He then walks away from Peter leaving him a little confused on what just happened. As he walks out of the classroom the camera pans over to Peter and shows him saying something under his breath
PETER PARKER
Well so much for trying to "help out the new kid." Have fun flash
The camera then shows Peter walking out of the classroom and over to his locker. As he walks over to his locker the scene switches
Int. Hospital room - Day/night
The camera then switches over to the construction worker from the opening scene laying in a hospital bed, bruised and scarred. As he is seen laying there, a nurse walks past the camera and picks up the clip board at the end of the bed. As she is looking through the papers, Maxwell slowly opens his eyes. As the nurse see's him open his eye's she is shocked and calls in for the doctor
Nurse
Doctor! Doctor come quick! He is waking up!
As he fully wakes up, the camera zooms in on his hand that tries to grab onto the metal bed handle but is shocked away
NURSE
Maxwell(Concerned voice) Maxwell can you hear me?
MAXWELL DILLON
Where? Where am I?
NURSE
In the hospital
MAXWELL DILLON
Why am I here?
Maxwell sits up quickly, scared and startled when hearing he is at the hospital. As he sits up the nurse quickly runs over to the bed side and try's to get him to lay down. As she puts her hand on him, a shock is sent off his body into his hand.
NURSE
You've been unconscious for the past three months. You were electrocuted and knocked off of your construction truck
MAXWELL DILLON
What? I... I dont remember any of this happening
As he lays back down the doctor walks into the room, grabs the clip board and begins to look through the papers
Doctor
Hello there Maxwell. That was quite some fall you had awhile ago wasn't it?
MAXWELL DILLON
I still don't understand what "fall" you guys keep talking about
Maxwell grabs the back of his head feeling a large scar from where he had hit it when he fell of the truck.
NURSE
He doesn't remember anything doctor
DOCTOR
Then its worse then we had thought
He looks back at Maxwell and walks over to the side of the bed
DOCTOR
Maxwell, you had a fall while working about three months ago. You were working during a thunder storm on a power line and were struck by lighting. The fall knocked you uncontentious and we weren't sure when you were going to wake up. We're going to keep you here for the next few days and if you feel any better we'll release you. Does that sound ok?
MAXWELL DILLON
Uh, ya sure doc. All I know is that my head is killing me, I dont know why I'm here and...
DOCTOR
Just relax and everything will be alright
The doctor looks over to the nurse
DOCTOR
Give him a little more to put him back out for a bit
The doctor then walks out of the room and Maxwell is shown falling back asleep
Int. Gwen Stacy's room - Night
The camera then changes to Gwen and Peter laying on Gwen's bed talking
PETER PARKER
I tried talking to Herman after class
GWEN STACY
And?
PETER PARKER
(chuckles)
Well, you were right when you said that he was "odd"
GWEN STACY
How so?
PETER PARKER
Well, to say the least he thinks he's better than everyone
As Peter talks the two hear a siren going off below in the city and Peter sits up quickly.
PETER PARKER
Can I?
GWEN STACY
Just be safe
PETER PARKER
I will, I will
Peter gets up off the bed and walks into the bathroom and changes into his Spider Man suit and then walks back over to the bed
GWEN STACY
You better come back
PETER PARKER
I will. Dont worry
Peter kisses Gwen and then runs, and jumps out the window falling into the city below.
Ext. New York City - Night
As he is falling, he shots out a web and begins swinging toward a speeding car, being followed by a group of police cars. As he swings behind he see's the speeding car crash into the side of a building and a man get out of the car. The man who gets out of the car then runs into an ally way
EXT. ALLY WAY OF NEW YORK - night
As the man is seen running through the ally he runs into Spider Man who is standing in front of him and falls to the ground
SPIDER MAN
Did you really think you would be able to get away on foot?
The man quickly stands up to his feet, pulls out a gun, and fires off three shots at Spider Man but the shots are fastly dodged
SPIDER MAN
Really man? You dont have anything better? Come on!
Spider Man shoots out two webs tripping the man and causing him to fall to the floor
thug
Who are you?
SPIDER MAN
Really? You don't know who I am? Saved the city from some big scary lizard thing? Looks dashingly handsome in this skin tight suit?
The thug stays silent and looks at Spider-Man in an odd way
SPIDER MAN
I'm Spider Man dude! Now, lets see who this criminal behind the ski mask is, shall we?
Spider Man walks over to the thug laying on the ground and takes his mask off revealing a man in his, mid 30's with long blond hair and a scruffy face. When Spider Man see's his face he steps back in disbelief
SPIDER MAN
It... It can't be?
Spider Man grabs his left arm and pulls up his sleeve revealing a star tattoo on his wrist
SPIDER MAN
You bastard!
Spider Man picks the thug up by the collier and throws him into the left wall.
SPIDER MAN
You think your tough killing innocent old men? Do you? Do you!
Spider Man then punches him across the face and the thug begins to bleed.
thug
I don't know what you're talking about!
SPIDER MAN
You're lucky I just dont kill you in your tracks! No. I'm above that. I'll just let you rot in prison
He then sprays the thug in a web and restrains him to the ally wall so that the police can take him into custody. When the police arrive Spider Man is nowhere to be found. The police then cut the thug out of the web and take him into custody.
ext. top of building - night
The camera then pans to Spider Man sitting on top of a building with his mask off and his cell phone in his hand. He then looks down at the phone and presses the voicemail button to listen to his voicemail's
Uncle ben(voicemail)
Hello Peter, I know things have been ruff lately, and I'm sorry for that...
Peter then pulls the phone away from his ear, burying his hands into his lap. As the camera shows his face, it looks as if Peter is about to cry
PETER PARKER
I'm so sorry Uncle... I wish I could have saved you
The camera then fades out
int. aunt may's house - day
The camera then fades in to the kitchen of Aunt May's house where it shows her sitting eating a bowl of cereal and watching the local news. As she is sitting at the table she hears a knock on the door and walks over to it
int. front door, aunt may's house - day
When Aunt May reaches the door the camera reveals two police officers standing on the outside of the door. She then opens the door and begins to talk with the two men
officer 1
May Parker?
Aunt may
Yes? Can I help you officer's?
OFFICER 2
We are here regarding the murder of your husband Ben Parker. Can we come in?
AUNT MAY
Oh yes. Please do. Have a seat in the kitchen and I'll call down Peter
The two officers walk past Aunt May and have a seat at the kitchen table where they lay out a few papers
AUNT MAY
(Calling up the stairs)
Peter! Come down here, there are some men down here that need to talk to us
INT. AUNT MAY'S HOUSE - DAY
Aunt May then walks back over to the kitchen table and Peter is seen in the background walking down the stairs
PETER PARKER
Whats going on Aunt... Can I help you officers?
OFFICER 2
We are here to talk to you about your Uncle's murder
Peter walks closer to the table
PETER PARKER
What of it?
OFFICER 1
Well we caught the man who did it last night. If you both would have a seat so we can go over a few things that would be great
Aunt May and Peter take a seat at the table across from the officers
OFFICER 2
Last night at approximately 10:56 PM we caught the man who killed Ben Parker in an ally way, in up state New York. The man's name is Adrian Toomes and has been one of the hottest car theifs, and thugs on the streets in the past year. We've been searching for this guy for a long time. He is looking at facing close to 15 years in prison with a possible death sentence. The court date is set for this upcoming Wednesday where all of this will be decided.
AUNT MAY
Its good to know that this man has finally been caught and that justice will be...
PETER PARKER
(Interrupting Aunt May)
What does this have to do with us?
OFFICER 2
What do you mean?
PETER PARKER
What does this have to do with us? Ya great you caught the man who killed my uncle. Now what? Do we just sit here?
OFFICER 1
I don't think you get it? This is a great victory for both you and...
PETER PARKER
No! I feel like we shouldn't have even been informed or anything on this. All it does is makes us relive a horrific event that neither my Aunt or I want to go back to
AUNT MAY
Peter calm down
Peter stands up and slams his hands down on the table
PETER PARKER
No Aunt May I won't calm down! I could have saved him! I could have helped him. But I didnt! I don't want to keep dwelling on something that I could have avoided!
Peter then turns around and walks quickly out the front door and begins to walk down the sidewalk. As he walks out the door, he slams it shut causing it to make a loud bang noise causing Aunt May to jump a little. The camera then switches to a distraught Aunt May
AUNT MAY
Well officers, I would like to thank you for coming over and letting us know
OFFICER 2
Don't worry about it mam. We're just doing our jobs. Should we inform you on the verdict of the trial?
AUNT MAY
Yes. Please do.
The two officers then get up from the kitchen table and walk out the door returning to their squad car.
ext. side walk - day
As Peter walks down the sidewalk we see a worried Gwen Stacy heading towards the Parker's home and towards Peter. When Gwen notices Peter she runs up to him worried about last night.
GWEN STACY
Peter!
Peter continues to walk by ignoring Gwen and obviously angry about the situation that had just occurred at his house
GWEN STACY
Peter! What is wrong with you?
Gwen has to walk fast to keep up with him and cuts him off to stand in front of him
GWEN STACY
Are you going to talk to me? You're being ridiculous
PETER parker
Adrian Toomes
GWEN STACY
Who is that?
PETER PARKER
He's the man that killed my uncle. Last night when I left to follow the sirens it was a car theft and it was the guy that killed my uncle. I helped the police arrest him and now he's in a holding cell waiting for his court case
GWEN STACY
Well thats great that now he's been caught right?
PETER PARKER
Its not enough.
Peter begins to walk away from Gwen but she grabs his left arm. As she grabs his arm he squints in pain and lets out a little groan
PETER PARKER
Ah!
GWEN STACY
(Worried tone)
What? Whats wrong?
PETER PARKER
Nothing. I just hurt my arm in the fight with the lizard
GWEN STACY
Are you sure you're ok?
PETER PARKER
Ya it just hurts
GWEN STACY
Come on. Lets go back to your place
Gwen tries to grab him and walk back to Peter's house but Peter doesn't move
PETER PARKER
I dont want to. I just want to go somewhere
GWEN STACY
Where?
PETER PARKER
Follow me
Peter grabs Gwen's hand and walks into an ally way just around the corner of a building on the corner of the sidewalk
EXT. ALLY WAY OF NEW YORK - day
Peter and Gwen continue to walk down the ally but Gwen stops confused on where they are going
GWEN STACY
Where are we going? Are you just taking me through all the ally's of New York?
PETER PARKER
Yes. I'm taken you to the Kingpin!
Gwen slaps Peter's chest
GWEN STACY
Don't joke like that! You know he has a hit on my family
PETER PARKER
Ya but you know I'd never let anything happen to you
Peter grabs Gwen and holds he close. As he is holding her he throw's up his right hand and lets out a web sending the two flying fast up the side of the building. The two then land on the top of a building
EXT. TOP OF BUILDING - day
Peter walks over to the side of the building
PETER PARKER
This is where I come to relax
GWEN STACY
The top of a building? You do know that they make spa's and stuff for that right?
Gwen walks over and wraps her arm's around Peter
PETER PARKER
Its my fault that my Uncle died
Peter breaks Gwen's hold and walks over to the corner of the building being followed by Gwen
GWEN STACY
No it wasn't Peter. You can't blame yourself
PETER PARKER
Why? I was the reason he left the house that night looking for me, I'm the reason that guy shot him. I was in the store that he robbed. I could have stopped him. But I didn't. I let him go and now my uncle's dead
GWEN STACY
But now the police have him. He's behind bars.
PETER PARKER
He should be dead
Gwen turns Peter around to talk to him face to face
GWEN STACY
Listen. You couldn't have done anything to change what happened that night. You can't blame yourself for something that was out of your hands
Peter looks down, looking disappointed
GWEN STACY
Cheer up
PETER PARKER
Its a little hard to
Gwen kisses Peter
GWEN STACY
Please?
PETER PARKER
Alright
Peter smiles and the camera fades out
ext. font of hospital - day
The camera then switches over to the front of a hospital showing the double sliding doors opening and revealing Max Dillon walking out of it. The camera then follows him as he walks outside and looks up to the sky. The camera then quickly switches to a shot of him in his apartment
int. apartment - day
The shot shows Max sitting at his table eating a yogurt and watching the news.
INT. APARTMENT - night
The camera then switches to a shot of him walking over to the microwave. He then opens it and puts a "TV Dinner" in and presses the start button. As the microwave cooks the meal he places his hand on the top and watches tv. As he stands there the camera switches to a close up of the microwave and reveals that it is starting to spark almost like a lightning storm on the inside of the microwave. The camera then switches back to focusing on Max. He notices the bizarre sparking and take his hand off the microwave. When he takes his hand off the microwave he is in shock. He then puts his hand back on the microwave and the sparking begins again
MAXWELL DILLON
What the hell?
Max then puts both his hands on the sides of the microwave and puts his face up to the plastic viewer on the front of the microwave. As he is looking into the microwave the camera switches to a first person view and shows the Tv Dinner beginning to shake. As the camera focus' on the Tv Dinner it explodes all over the microwave startling Max and causing him to jump back a little bit. As he jumps back the camera focuses on him.
MAXWELL DILLON
Gah!
Max grabs his hand in sheering pain. As he holds his hand he looks down at it and see's little sparks flaring off of his fingers.
MAXWELL DILLON
(yelling)
Whats wrong with me!
As he yells the camera then switches away from him and into Peter and Gwen's school
INT. PHYSICS ROOM - DAY
As the camera switches to the school a bell rings and reveals the Physics class room where we see numerous students walking in. The camera then switches over showing Peter getting his notebook out of his bag and showing the same teacher from before standing in the front of the room
TEACHER
Alright class. Today we will be going over...
As she is talking Herman(the new kid) walks in late, interrupting the teacher. As he walks in everyone in the class stares at him
TEACHER
Good morning Herman. Nice of you to join us this morning
Herman walks past her ignoring everything she is saying and sits down in his desk. The camera then switches to Flash who is crumpling up a paper. The shot then shows one of the boys sitting next to Flash patting him on the back
bully
Do it Flash
Flash then turns around and throws the crumpled paper at Herman. As the paper hits off of his head the entire class laughs and he stands up angerly and walks over to Flash. He then grabs his sweater in an angry/abrasive motion
HERMAN SCHULTZ
You think you're funny kid?
He then punches Flash across the face and the teacher runs over and pulls Herman away from Flash
TEACHER
That is enough! Herman! Get to the office now!
Herman then turns around and stands face to face with the teacher
HERMAN SCHULTZ
No! I'm done here. One day! One day you will be bowing down to me!
The class laughs at Herman as he storms out of the class room, meanwhile the teacher is shown walking over to Flash
TEACHER
Are you alright Flash?
FLASH THOMPSON
Ya I'm fine. His right hook has nothing on me(awkward chuckle)
The camera then switches to the Parkers house
INT. AUNT MAY'S HOUSE - DAY
The shot then shows Aunt May sitting in the living room watching the news while we over hear on the news:
TV(News Channel)
And right now we are getting news of a third bank robbery. This has all happened in a five hour time period ladies and gentlemen
Peter is then seen walking in through the front door
PETER PARKER
Aunt May I'm home
AUNT MAY
Peter in here. Come watch this.
Peter walks into the front room and sits on the couch with Aunt May
AUNT MAY
They're saying a high school kid has robbed three banks today
PETER PARKER
A high school kid? Well do they have a name of anything?
AUNT MAY
No he's wearing a mask
PETER PARKER
Weird. Where was the last bank he robbed?
AUNT MAY
On 51st why?
PETER PARKER
Uh no reason
Peter then jumps up quickly and runs up the stairs
PETER PARKER
I have a lot of homework to do Aunt May. I'll be down later
int. peter's room - day
The camera then switches to Peter in his room changing into his Spider Man suit. The camera then shows Peter crouching on his window and putting on his mask before jumping out the window and swinging away
ext. busy new york street - day
The camera then pans over to a shot of Herman Schultz walking down a busy street through crowds of people looking very suspicious and nervous. As he is walking he see's an apartment building and walks in. As he walks in the camera switches to a shot of Spider Man swinging. As he is swinging he notices the suspicious man and follows him inside
SPIDER MAN
Something tells me that he doesn't live here
int. apartment building - day
The camera then switches to a shot of Herman trying to open a door to one of the apartments. As he is trying to open it the neighbor from across the hall walks out from hearing the noise
neighbor
Having trouble?
The neighbor catches Herman off guard and causes him to jump a little bit
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Uh ya. I forgot my key
NEIGHBOR
You know I haven't seen you around here before. Are you sure this is the right building?
HERMAN SCHULTZ
I'm visiting my uncle for the month and forgot my key inside. Its fine. Just go back inside and do what you were doing
NEIGHBOR
I have my eye on you
HERMAN SCHULTZ
I'm sure you do
The neighbor then goes inside and Herman begins trying to get into the apartment. He is able to break the lock and rushes inside, closing the door behind him
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
The camera then pan's behind the door and follows Herman as he searches for something in the apartment. He then walks into the bedroom and pulls a safe out from under the bed and is able to crack the code insanely fast. When he opens the safe he see's two stacks of money, he takes the money, turns around and begins to walk away but as he turns around to walk away he see's Spider Man standing in front of him
SPIDER MAN
Ya know. I'm pretty sure that doesn't belong to you
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Get out of my way
SPIDER MAN
Not gonna happen
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Why are you here?
SPIDER MAN
Because its my job to take you to jail
HERMAN SCHULTZ
You're not a cop
SPIDER MAN
Good job captain obvious! Aren't you just a super genius?
Spider Man then sprays him in the face with web and ties him up. He then picks him up and brings him over to a window with a flag poll out in front
SPIDER MAN
Alright so this is whats going to happen. I'm going to hang you from that flag poll, upside down so I dont break your neck, and then the police are going to come, arrest you and then you get to go to jail for a long time. Sound good?
Herman tries to talk but he can't speak clearly due to the webbing around his face. Spider Man then opens the window and ties him to the flag poll and lowers him about 20 feet above the ground.
SPIDER MAN
Alright well have fun hanging around, the cops should be here pretty soon. And well, see you around
Spider Man then swings away and the camera focuses on Herman who is hanging there. He begins struggling and trying to break free. As he is struggling sirens come over and police arrive at where he is hanging and we see him taken into custody
int. jail - day/night(doesnt matter)
The shot then shows him sitting on a bench and a the jail cell door closing in front of him. As the door closes the camera zooms in and looks like it goes "inside" of Herman's eye
int. courthouse - day
As the camera goes "into his eye" the camera then switches to a judge hitting his hammer on the panel in front of him and saying
judge
Alright lets get started
The camera begins to zoom out revealing that it is the court case of Adrian Toomes who is Uncle Ben's killer and also reveals that Aunt May is sitting in the front row of the court.
judge
We are here today for the trial of Adrian Toomes who has been charged with several cases of battery, assault, robbery, and is being charged for the murder of Ben Parker. To the defendant, what do you plead?
Adrian toomes
Are you asking whether or not I did these things?
judge
Well, thats what it would seem
ADRIAN TOOMES
I did everything that you have said sir.
JUDGE
So you are pleading guilty?
ADRIAN TOOMES
Thats what it would seem
JUDGE
You are aware that you are facing the death penalty correct?
ADRIAN TOOMES
Do it. Kill me.
The judge seems shocked from what he had just heard
judge
I find the defendant guilty and sentence him to death by the electric chair in two weeks. Court dismissed
The judge hits the hammer on the panel again two police men take Adrian back to the jail
int. jail cell - night
The camera then switches to a shot of Herman sitting in the jail cell and an officer opening the cell
OFFICER
Here's your cell buddy. Don't get to attached. He'll be gone in a few weeks
The officer then pushed Adrian into the cell with Herman. When Adrian goes into the cell he looks at Herman
ADRIAN TOOMES
You're just a kid. What could you have done that got you trapped in here
HERMAN SCHULTZ
I robbed three banks in one day
ADRIAN TOOMES
That obviously turned out well
HERMAN SCHULTZ
I would have gotten away with it. But Spider Man caught me
ADRIAN TOOMES
Aha you got caught by the bug to?
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Ya. And when I get out of here he's going to pay
ADRIAN TOOMES
Wish I could say the same
HERMAN SCHULTZ
What did you do to end up here?
ADRIAN TOOMES
Stole a few cars, robbed some stores and killed an old man
Adrian walks over to one of the cots and lays down
ADRIAN TOOMES
And now I'll be dead in a few weeks
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Why?
ADRIAN TOOMES
I killed a man. You know. An eye for an eye? I'm sentenced to be killed in a few weeks
HERMAN SCHULTZ
So you're okay to die? Thats terrible man
ADRIAN TOOMES
Not really. I could care less. I lost my job a few years back. I was an inventor. I was in business with a man named Greg Bestman. I was the inventor he was the guy who handled the money. I created a harness that gives men the ability to fly and gives you super human strength. When I went to share the news of the invention with him, I found out that he embezzled the funds and that I was out of a job. I destroyed his office along with the harness. I kept it in my house hidden away from the world since it wasn't going to be getting any use, anytime soon. After that I couldn't find a job anywhere so I took to the streets and started stealing my way to the top and found that I could have everything. And now its caught up with me. I have nothing to live for so I might as well die
Herman looks down in disbelief of his story and looks back up
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Well, I am to an inventor. I have actually already figured out a way to get out of here.
ADRIAN TOOMES
Oh please do enlighten me
Herman pulls out a sketch of what looks to be individual hand restraints
HERMAN SCHULTZ
These. They're going to shoot air with high frequency vibrations powerful enough to level walls on buildings
ADRIAN TOOMES
And how do you expect to build those in here?
HERMAN SCHULTZ
Scrap metal. There's ton's of it laying around here
ADRIAN TOOMES
Good luck kid. Thats all I'm going to say. You seem to be way over your head
Adrian turns away from Herman and goes to sleep
HERMAN SCHULTZ
(under his breath)
We'll see if you say that when I break out of here
EXT. ALLY WAY OF NEW YORK - NIGHT
The camera then switches over to Max Dillon walking through an ally way looking for someone. As he walks down the ally he approaches a door and knocks on it. After he knocks on the door a man opens a little viewing hatch in the door to see who it is
door man
Who are you and what is your business here?
MAXWELL DILLON
My name's Max Dillon. I need to see Kingpin
DOOR MAN
What is your business?
MAXWELL DILLON
I... I have something that he might be highly interested in
The door man closes the hatch and opens the door
DOOR MAN
Follow me
int. run down gang room - night
The man takes Max through a small apartment like room. As they walk through Max looks around seeing all the old school looking gangsters who look like they belong in the 1940's. As he is looking through the crowds of people he see's Hammerhead(not knowing its Hammerhead) in the crowds
DOOR MAN
Wait here and I'll see if he has time.
The man opens a door, walks in, and closes the door behind him leaving Max standing in the room by himself. As he stands waiting for the man, he looks around again at all the men. When he is turned around the doorman walks back out
DOOR MAN
You have ten minutes. Make it quick.
Max walks into the small room and see's the Kingpin sitting at a desk. He then walks over to the desk and sits across from him
kingpin
Who are you and what can I do for you?
MAXWELL DILLON
My name is Max Dillon sir. I was involved in an accident about four months ago and now, well. I can control electricity. I need help with getting equipment to strengthen my powers. I need things from Stark Industry's that can help me become more powerful
KINGPIN
Seems simple enough. Now what is this going to do for me?
MAXWELL DILLON
I will take out anyone you need, I can get you anything once I have full control of my powers
KINGPIN
Listen to me and listen up because I'm only going to say this once. There's this family you see. The father used to be the head of the N-Y-P-D before being killed by the lizard. Well, I'm not done with the family. He may be gone but because of him we have lost a lot of our men. If I get you the equipment you need, I'll need you to take out the rest of the family. Do we have a deal?
Max sits back in his seat and thinks about the proposition offered by the Kingpin
MAXWELL DILLON
Deal.
KINGPIN
Good good. Now, I'll get my men right on getting you the equipment you'll need. Come back here in a few days and you can pick it up
MAXWELL DILLON
Alright thank you
KINGPIN
Ya ya whatever. Now get out this isn't tea time
Max gets up and begins to walk out of the room. As he walks out Kingpin is seen in the background lighting up and smoking a cigar
int. restraunt - night
The camera then switches to a scene of Peter and Gwen sitting in a restraunt eating dinner and talking
GWEN STACY
So any news on what they are doing with your uncles killer?
PETER PARKER
He plead guilty and is sentenced to death
GWEN STACY
Well thats good. He'll get what he had coming to him
PETER PARKER
Ya. Aunt May said that he admitted to doing it
GWEN STACY
He probably knew that he was going to be found guilty anyway so he probably just thought "why not admit to it?"
PETER PARKER
I dont know. I think there's a little more going on then what we think
A waitress walks over to their table
waitress
Can I get you guys something to drink?
GWEN STACY
Water please
WAITRESS
And for you sir?
Peter is zoned out staring at something on the table and doesnt hear the waitress
WAITRESS
Sir? Sir?
GWEN STACY
Peter!
Gwen's voice knocks Peter out of his day dream
PETER PARKER
What?
WAITRESS
What would you like to drink sir?
PETER PARKER
Oh, uh, water, waters fine
WAITRESS
Ok. I'll be right back with those
GWEN STACY
Thank you
The waitress walks away
GWEN STACY
Whats wrong with you?
PETER PARKER
I just have a lot on my mind
GWEN STACY
About?
PETER PARKER
Uncle Ben... I just miss him so much
GWEN STACY
I know how you feel Pete. Its not easy losing a father figure. Trust me, I know what you're going through. You just have to try and not let it dictate your life
PETER PARKER
I know its just ruff
Gwen grabs Peter's hands
GWEN STACY
I know it is. But I'm here for you if you need anything
The waitress walks back over to the table carrying the two waters
WAITRESS
Here you go, two waters
She sets down the waters on the table
WAITRESS
Alright. Are we ready to order or do we need more time?
PETER PARKER
Some more time please
The waitress nods her head and then walks away from the table and walks back into the employee section of the restraunt
GWEN STACY
When is the guy going to be killed?
PETER PARKER
Tomorrow
Int. Jail Electric Chair Room - day
As Peter finishes talking the camera quickly changes to a shot of the electric chair. As the camera is focused on the chair an officer walks past the camera holding Adrian Toomes by the arm and setting him down into the chair. He then straps him into the chair and puts a wet sponge on his head and lowers down the helmet. The officer then turns around and begins to walk away from the chair but as he walks away the chair began to short circuit causing electrical sparks to fly everywhere. As the chair short circuits the charge caused Adrian's body to age significantly rather then killing him.
OFFICER
Shut it off! Do something!
The officer then runs over to the circuit box and tried to open it. As he tried to open it the metal box electrocuted and killed the officer. After the sparks stopped and the circuit stop shorting the officers weren't sure if the aged Adrian was alive or not. And officer opens a door and walks into the room where the chair is. He then grabs the wrist of Toomes and checks his pulls then turns around back towards the other officers
OFFICER 2
He's... He's alive
INT. RUN DOWN GANG ROOM - Day
The camera then switches to a shot of Max Dillon waiting outside of the Kingpin's door. The door opens and the door man from before walks out
DOOR MAN
The Kingpin will see you now
Max then walks into the room and sits across from the Kingpin once again
MAXWELL DILLON
Where's my equipment?
KINGPIN
Calm down there buddy. What? No hello? How've you been? Doesnt matter. I have your equipment I just want to be sure we are still on for our deal.
MAXWELL DILLON
Ya, ya whatever. Just give me my equipment
KINGPIN
Need I remind you who I am? If you turn your back on this deal, your ass is mine. I can have you dead with one phone call
MAXWELL DILLON
(irritated)
I understand sir. Now where is my equipment?
KINGPIN
(yelling)
Hammerhead! Bring in the gear!
Hammerhead walks in through the door holding three medium sized boxes labeled "Stark Industries"
hammerhead
Here ya go boss
Hammerhead sets down the boxes and exits the room
KINGPIN
There ya go kid. Ya happy?
MAXWELL DILLON
Very!
KINGPIN
Now. You have a week to follow through on our deal or I will kill you
MAXWELL DILLON
Alright, alright. I'll get right on it.
Max grabs the boxes and begins to walk out of the room but turns around in the door way
MAXWELL DILLON
Whats the name of the family?
KINGPIN
The Stacy's. The dead father was once the police chief and he put to many of my men behind bars. Time to make the family pay for his mistakes
Max nods and continues to walk out of the room
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
The camera then switches to Max sitting in his living room holding the electrical handles in his hands on high. The electrical handles are helping him gather more electric charges and helping him become more powerful
MAXWELL DILLON
Up it. Just. One. More. Gah!
Max then reaches over to the generator and turns it up to the highest it can go. As the more power rushes through his body, we see scars beginning to form all over his neck and face, he lets out an agonizing scream and then suddenly the power for about five blocks goes out and Max flies off the couch, hits the wall behind him and falls onto the floor. As the camera slowly pans over the couch we see a yellow glow coming up from the floor. As the camera pans over it shows Max laying on the ground, glowing yellow. As he gets up he has his eye's closed. When he fully gets up and stands up straight the camera focuses on his face and he opens his eye's revealing that his eye's have turned a bright yellow
int. stacy's household - night
The camera then switches to Gwen Stacy's mom making dinner in the kitchen
mrs. stacy
Gwen, Peter, dinner!
Gwen and Peter then walk out of her room, down the hallway and into the kitchen and sit down at the table with the rest of the Stacy family.
MRS. STACY
How was your day Gwen
GWEN STACY
It was good.
MRS. STACY
How was your physics test?
GWEN STACY
(irritated)
It was good mom.
As everyone sits at the table awkwardly they can hear the TV from the other room
TV(NEWS CHANNEL)
We aren't quite sure who, or what it is but there is something that has just broken out of the New York state prison. It seems to be shooting something from its wrists and is destroying everything in its path
When Gwen and Peter hear this they both look at each other with a worried look on their faces
GWEN STACY
Come on Peter.
Gwen gets up quickly from the table and walks into her room
PETER PARKER
Thank you so much Mrs. Stacy for the food, it was great. See you guys soon
MRS. STACY
Oh okay. See you soon
INT. GWEN STACY'S ROOM - NIGHT
Peter follows Gwen into her room where she is holding his Spider Man suit
GWEN STACY
Good luck
She tosses him the suit and he walks into the restroom to put it on
PETER PARKER
(From restroom)
What do you think it is?
GWEN STACY
I have no clue. Hopefully not another lizard thing
Peter walks out of the restroom with the full suit on except for the mask
PETER PARKER
I'll call you when I get home
Peter walks over to the window
GWEN STACY
Promise?
PETER PARKER
I promise
Peter then puts on the mask and swings out of the window
EXT. NEW YORK CITY - NIGHT
The camera then switches to a shot of Herman(The Shocker) using his high frequency gloves to flip over and destroy everything in his path. As he is destroying everything Spider Man swings in front of him
SPIDER MAN
Hey! Come on, its not nice to break other people's toy's
shocker
Spider Man!
SPIDER MAN
Yupp thats me! May I take your order? How about a little ass kicking
Spider Man shoots web at Shocker but he fires his High Frequency glove at the web repelling it away from him.
SPIDER MAN
(under his breath)
What the hell?
Shocker then fires his gloves at Spider Man sending him into the wall of a building knocking him uncontentious. Shocker then walks over to Spider Man
SHOCKER
Just know that this is your fault.
Shocker then walks away from the unconscious super hero and continues his rampage. A few hours pass and people begin to gather around the unconscious Spider Man and begin to take pictures of him and start to surround him. Spider Man then becomes conscious again and see's the crowd around him
SPIDER MAN(V.O)
What happened? Who are all these people?
Spider Man then shoots off a web and swings away from the crowd leaving them in shock
INT. GWEN STACY'S ROOM - Day
The camera then switches to Gwen sitting at her desk in her room looking worried/irritated. As the camera is focused on her, we see Peter drop onto the window balcony and knock on her window
PETER PARKER
Can you let me in?
Gwen walks over to the window and opens it but doesn't let him come inside
GWEN STACY
You didn't call.
PETER PARKER
I know, I'm sorry, I didn't get home till...
GWEN STACY
No, Peter. You promised.
PETER PARKER
Look at my face. Does it really look like I intentionally meant not to call you? The guy, he smashed me into a wall
gwen stacy
You do look pretty beat up Pete.
She moves out of his way and lets him into her room. Peter then sits down on her bed while she is still standing in the middle of the room
gwen stacy
What was it? Another cross species?
peter parker
No. This one was human. He had some sort of gloves that shot out air.
gwen stacy
Air?
peter parker
I dont know. More like, high frequency waves. Like a sonic boom
GWEN STACY
How weird
Gwen walks over to Peter and lays next to him on her bed
GWEN STACY
Can we not talk about some crazy dude for a little bit and just lay here
PETER PARKER
(smiles)
I think we can
INT. APARTMENT - day
The camera then switches to Max sitting on his couch with the Stark equipment attached to his body. As the camera shows him, we see the equipment slowly shaking while doing the functions. Out of nowhere a man kicks in his door
THUG
Your week is up buddy, Kingpin wants your head
Max reacts quickly and shoots a strong lightning bolt at him sending him backwards into the hallway wall. As the thug hits the wall the camera then switches back to Max who is looking at his hands
MAXWELL DILLON
Finally
