Alright, this is my first poem I'm posting. I'm new with this so please don't flame me or anything if you don't like it.
It's just a short poem about Sasuke during the time that he leaves the Leaf Village to go to Orochimaru for power, I hope you all enjoy it.

The path of an avenger-

I will be stronger then
I have in the past
Trying in a futile attempt to avenge those I have lost
That is why I must leave you
Despite the callings of my heart
I have sworn to get revenge
And I've decided this is the path I must go down alone
None of you can help me
None of you can save me
None of you will ever understand me
I am going down the path of darkness
And there is no turning back...

Please review this and my other poems that I'll post really soon