THE NUT JOB
MY STORY REMAKE WITH A NUT JOB 2 AT THE END OF THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS
STARTS WHEN THE TREE BLOWS UP IN FLAMES
"who caused this" Raccoon asked
The Burisers walk up carrying Surly
"let me go" surly says
Surly turns around and looks at the tree witch was on fire
"oh, haha, you guys are a mess for winter" surly jokes
"raccoon, tell we what to do i will set up the trial" Andie says
"another trial, come on" on of the birds in the back say
"all in favour of banshment, raise your paws" raccoon says
They all put there paws in the air including andie and greyson
"fine you all will regret this" surly says
They climb up a telephone poll
"surly you should of had a trial, Im sorry" andie says
Surly walks across and down the otherside
He ran across the road and into a ally and when in a empty trash can
"stupid raccoon" Surly mumbled
Surly laid down for a couple hours
Then heard a noise he, looked around and grabed a spoon that was laying next to him.
Buddy looked in the trash can
"what are you doing here" surly asked
He just looked around
"ok" surly says
They go walking in to another part of a ally and come up on a main street and walk down it, When Buddy stopss and stairs at a window, the Surly looks
"buddy awesome job, now we get a plan, break in, and get all the nuts, and we do it my way" surly says
Buddy just nodds
NEXT DAY
"lets go" surly says
They run and sneek in the door and climbed up the walls to above the celling tiles
the were walking and Surly accadently steped on a mouse trap and it clamped his leg down
"quick get the gun" one of the guys said on the floor
"na its proble just a rat" another one says
"ahhhhhhhhhhh" surly says trying not to yell
"buddy un clamp the thing" surly says in pain
Buddy does
"ow that hurts" surly whines
"look" surly says
There dog was still barking
Surly watched as one of the humans blew the whistel that the dog stoped barking and that other guy down there was falling down from it
"buddy we have to get that" surly says
Buddy nodds
They keep watching and one guy grabs the whistle and throws it out side
"come on" surly says
They walk back around and go out the window above the door
They run over to were it went and start looking for it
A couple minutes later
"i got the thingy" surly says then falling in a box loseing the whistle witch rolls over in front of Andie
"Surly, what are you doing" andie asked
"Trying to get that thing" surly says pointing a thee whistle
"does it have somthing to do with food" andie asked
" no " surly says back
"really" andie says holding it over the drain
"ok it does" surly says
"follow me" surly says
They cross the street and go inside every one had left the store including the dog
"down here" surly says
They go down in the basement
"wow surly you found this" Andie asked
"yes" Surly says
"this is enough to feed the park for years" Andie says
"wo wo wo there, this is mine" Surly says
"come on surly split it 50/50" Andie asked
"oohh...fine" surly says
"cool thanks surly" Andie says hugging surly
"welcome" surly says back
"im going to tell the park" andie says
"i will be here tomarrow" surly says
Andie goes out the hole in the convaer belt
Surly and Buddy climb to the roof and stay there
NEXT DAY
Andie comes back the next day with the bruisers and mole
Surly jumps from the railing above them and lands infront of andie who saw surlys leg
surly felt pain when he hit the ground
"Surly you all right" Andie asked
"yeah i just messed it up yesterday" surly says looking at his leg
"ok heres the plan, we dig a hole right here and break in that way then we unlock that door(points to coal shoot) and get the nuts out" surly says
"good plan" Jamie says
"i will start digging" jimmy says
"no i will" john says back
Then they start digging
Mole was sitting under the van waiting for a cloud to move over
the dog came up and oped the coal shoot
Surly walk over to her
"who are you" surly asked
"percious, What are they doing" Percious asked
"Nothing" surly says
"let me in here" surly says
He walks in but andie sees him go in there and runs and goes in there to
"surly what are you doing" Andie asked
"getting some food" surly says
"hummmmm" andie says
"what" surly says
"oh No" Andie says
"what" surly says and turns around and sees it
andie and surly jump down and run and grab the dynomate as it blows up sending the bruisers out of there hole and landing on top of the van
Andie helps surly up the hole because his leg was hurting
Andie also brought up a bag of nuts
"Raccoon would love this" jamie says
"thank you" Jamie says to Andie
Andie looks of to her side and sees Surly setting against the tire of the truck
Andie walks over to surly
she sets in front of him
"Surly whats wrong" andie asked
"my leg, my life, and Raccoon being on everyones mind" Surly says
"Surly, have somthing to tell you" andie says
"what is it" surly asked
"Raccoons planning to double cross you" Andie says
"I knew we would do that" Surly says
"remeber that saying he had" Andie asked
"yep" surly says
"if thats true, his starving the park so he can stay leader, and prevent Greyson, Myself, or you surly from being leaders" Andie says
"why me" Surly says
"well if we pull this off, it was your plan you found the place and everything" Andie says
"guess your right, if thats true he will have a plan" Surly says
"ok every one lsiten go back to that park come back tomarrow its getting late" surly says
"ok" mole says then the all left but andie
"andie are you going back" surly says
"can i stay with you tonight" Andie asked nervously
"sure fine with me, meet me on the roof" surly says
Surly went in side the store and stole a few soft rags and toke them to the roof
Surly looks over were buddy normaly sleeps to see him already sleeping
Andie was looking around and found were surly sleep the night before were he had rags layed out
"here you go andie" surly says setting some rags down
"thanks" Andie says
she lays hers out about and inch aways from surlys
surly was already in bed laying on his back
Andie got in hers and layed on her back
"surly, i will do every thing i can to prevent raccoon from doing this" Andie says
"thanks andie" surly says
NEXT DAY
Surly and Andie were sleeping facing each other with ther noses about to touch
"what do we have here" Raccoon says
"it not what you think" Andie says
Raccoon grabs them and trow them in the back of the van as it starts moving
after it takes off Greyson jumps and lands on top of the van
"No" Raccoon yells
Raccoon jumps on the back of another moving van following the first one
"Surly you idiot why did you get us in to this" jamie yelled
"guys its not his fault" greyson says as he opens the door
"its raccoon"greyson also says
Raccoon jumps in the van and grabs surly, but Greyson grabs his tail
"let go lets get rid of him once and for all, For The Park" raccoon chanted
No one said anything
"was it true that you are starving the park to stay leader" Andie says
"awnser the qustion" Greyson says
"its true raccoons a double crosser he told me every thing" mole blurts out
"all in favour of banshment raise your paws" greyson says
All in the van rasied there paws including surly
Raccoon grabs surly ad throws him in to Andie and hit the van wall
The van slides to a stop
"every one out" surly orderd
"you'll never get away with this Raccoon" Andie says
Raccoon gets up and hits andie then throws her in to the wall
"Andie" surly looks at her
"hahahahaha" raccoon laughes
then the van took off and hit the side of the bridgeand fell off
surly jumps holding andie and grabs on to the edge of the bridge
Surly saw that she had a bloody nose and there was a cut on her back that was bleeding
"andie, andie wake up" surly says well trying to pull them up
"what.. oh, surly help" Andie says
"im trying" surly says
then the bridge splits and breaks surly and andfall down into the water
"oh" Andie says
"you ok" surly asked
"yeah the cut on my back hurts" Ande says
'they swim over to a log stuck on a rock
they both look to see the other truck fall offto floats over to log andie goes over to help get them out
Surly was looking around when Raccoon jumps out of the water and grabs Surly
"look" mole says
they all run down to help
Buddy and andie grabthe end of the whistle that surly had out
"buddy we almost pulled it off" surly says
"Surly dont let go" Andie says
"bye" surly says then lets go
"nooooooooooo" Andie yelled
surly fell down had aganist the water breaking hid already hurt leg, also he hit muiltable rocks when falling scraping up his body
after the water calmed down surly tryed to swim but couldnt he was in to much pain
"why" surly says floating down stream
5 Days later
Andie and Buddy were walking by the creek when the seen a purple small body laying down on a shore
"surly" andie says running toward it
Buddy followed her
"best freind" buddy said
"buddy did you just talk" Andie asked
he noddes yes
Andie smiled
Andie rolled him over on his back to see his back leg was broken badly and the he had srapes on his chest and stomac and back and side he was bleeding a little bit
Andie was watching and seen hem open his eyes
"Andie" surly says weakly
"we got to get you to Jamie" Andie says
END OF CHAPTER 1
SO WHAT DO YOU THINK
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THIS WAS BASICLY MY VISION OF THE MOVIE NOW AFTER THIS IT WILL BE ALL MINE SO CH2 STARTS NUT JOB 2