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Chapter 1

Four POV

I am standing in Tris's new apartment. I want to surprise her. She walks in, sees me and says "What the hell Four." "I wanted to surprise you in your new apartment." I say, putting down the flowers in my hand and walking up to kiss her. "I have a surprise for you. Meet me at my apartment at five." "Okay." She says, and i leave. I walk to the jewelry store and pick out a diamond ring for Tris. I am going to propose to her.I go to my apartment and get my tux. It needs ironed, so I take it to Christina's apartment so she can iron it for me. When I get back to my apartment, it is 4:00. I decide to go buy her more flowers. When i get back to my apartment it is 4:45. I know that Tris will arrive any minute now. I sit on the couch, practicing what I am going to say. It is 5:00 and she still isn't here. I decide to wait for her. At 5:15, when I decide she isn't coming, I hear a knock on my door. Tris is standing outside, before I can say anything, she says "I'm so sorry I'm late. I walked as fast as I could in these heels." " Tris, you look amazing I say." She thanks me and walks into my apartment. "Can I ask you a question before we go anywhere?" I say. "Of course Toby." She says. I get down on one knee and say, "I know you're only 16 and I'm only 18, and that we just met a month ago, but I really love you and I know that you're the right girl for me. Just because we've only been dating for a few weeks, doesn't mean we aren't ready for this. I love you,Tris, we're meant for each other. Beatrice Prior, will you make me the happiest man in the universe and marry me?" She just stands there and I am worried she is going to say no. She says...

Tris POV

I walk into my new apartment and see Four standing there. "What the hell Four." I say. "I wanted to surprise you in your new apartment." He says, putting down the flowers in his hand and walking up to kiss me. "I have a surprise for you. Meet me at my apartment at five." "Okay." I say, and he leaves. I walk to the grocery store because i need food. I go back to my apartment and it is 4:00. I forgot to buy makeup and a dress. I get back to my apartment at 4:30 i start to get ready. I wear a black dress and red blush, sky blue eye shadow, and pink lipstick. I need shoes so i go to the nearest shoe store and buy heels. I get to Four's apartment at 5:15. Before he can say anything, I say "I'm so sorry I'm late. I walked as fast as I could in these heels." " Tris, you look amazing I say." I thank him and walk into his apartment. "Can I ask you a question before we go anywhere?" He says. "Of course Toby." I say. Hr get down on one knee and say, "I know you're only 16 and I'm only 18, and that we just met a month ago, but I really love you and I know that you're the right girl for me. Just because we've only been dating for a few weeks, doesn't mean we aren't ready for this. I love you,Tris, we're meant for each other. Beatrice Prior, will you make me the happiest man in the universe and marry me?" I have to think for a minute. I say...