Sakura-chan: Okay! Here's a better version of the first chapter of my first story! I hope you like it!
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO! I wish...-.-"
Angel In Disguise
By Sakura-Chan555
Chapter 1
The First Day of School
It was a beautiful day outside, and 17-year-old Haruno Sakura had just awoken to the warm rays of the sun. This made her smile. The birds were singing and there wasn't a cloud in the sky, and the dew on the grass glistened underneath the sun's bright rays. That's when Sakura checked her calendar. She literally screamed. It just so happen to b her first day as a sophomore at Konoha High School. She got out of bed and didn't even bother to fix it. She ran down the stairs and saw that one of her older sisters, Haruno Rei (means "Lovely Bell in the Spring Field".) in the kitchen, sipping on some hot coffee.
"Ohayou Gozaimasu," Sakura said sleepily. She rubbed one of her eyes and sat down in one of the kitchen chairs.
"Ohayou," Rei replied, although she wasn't as tired as Sakura. Rei was a second year college student, and majored in physiology, since she wanted to become a physiologist. Sakura started eating her breakfast, when one of her older brothers, Haruno Susumu (means "Advancing Through the Spring Field".), entered the kitchen.
"Ohayou, Sakura-chan, Rei-nesan!" Susumu said cheerfully. He wasn't a bit tired. In fact, he was never tired. It was like he lived off of caffeine, which he didn't. Susumu was also a second year in college and was already used to getting up early. He was majoring in English, since he wanted to become a writer. Sakura stood up and went to room. She looked inside her closet and put on a beige, short-sleeved shirt with a huge butterfly on the side, and a pair of black Calvin Klein sweatpants. She tied her shoulder length hair into a high ponytail, grabbed her black messenger bag (which had a pair of blue and white K-Swiss sneakers in them) and put on her roller blades. She took out her pink Mp3 and headed out the door.
"Sayonara!" Sakura yelled. Susumu and Rei both bid Sakura goodbye, as Sakura started skating to her high school.
17-year-old Uchiha Sasuke was currently driving in his car, with the music blasting so loud, you could hear the vibrations of the music. The other three passengers in his car were his best friends, Nara Shikamaru, Uzumaki Naruto, and Hyuga Neji. The four boys have been friends since their freshman year, and have been inseparable since then. While they were all waiting at a stoplight, Sasuke spotted a pink haired girl, skating on the sidewalk. She looked like she was going to Konoha High, but he shrugged it off. He didn't have time to think about new freshmen or new students.
By the time Sasuke got to the school, he started to crane his neck over the crowds of fan girls, to see if the pink haired girl was at the school. He quickly shook his head and started to make his way through the sea of fan girls.
'Grrr…I don't give a crap about her.' Sasuke thought to himself.
'Dude, admit it. You think she's hot.' Sasuke's inner self said. Sasuke ignored him and went to class, his mind on the mysterious pink haired girl.
During class, Sakura was scribbling down lyrics for a new song. The teacher didn't catch her, though. She was always invisible throughout all of the schools she's attended. She didn't care, though. She cared a lot more about her music and her education. Once she was done scribbling down lyrics, she turned to a different page and started to write a new song. And then when she was finished with that one, she started to write another song. And another, and another. She would have written new dance instructions, new stories, or recipes, but she wasn't in the mood. She loved to cook, and so did her siblings. In fact, they could all sing, dance, and cook. They could also play musical instruments, but that's not important.
'Hurry up, you stupid bell! Ring already!' Sakura thought to herself. She hated being stuck in class and have to wait until the bell rang.
When the bell rang, Sakura ran out of the classroom (with all of her stuff, of course), and ran over to her locker to pick up the bento box that her older sister (and Rei's twin sister.), Haruno Hotaru (means "Firefly in the Spring Field".) made for her. Once she had that in her possession, she ran to the courtyard, and into a field, until she found a cherry blossom tree.
When Sasuke was leaving class, he noticed the pink haired girl run outside and into a field. He had no idea where she was going, and had no intention to find out. So, he went to where his friends and a couple of other guys were.
"Hey, guess who I met?" asked 17-year-old Naruto.
"My cousin Hinata?" said 18-year-old Neji sarcastically.
"No! I already met her!" Naruto yelled back.
"So, who did you meet?" Sasuke asked curiously.
"Haruno Sakura. You guys probably don't know her. She's pretty shy," Naruto explained.
"Well, what does she look like?" Sasuke asked. He was getting interested in this "Haruno Sakura".
"She has pink hair and green eyes. Kind of like that girl you saw this morning with the roller blades," Naruto said. When Sasuke heard this, he started running to the cherry blossom tree he saw earlier, in search of Sakura.
"Teme! Where are you going?" Naruto yelled. Sasuke ignored his best friend's yelling and kept running towards the cherry blossom tree.
Sakura-chan: Well? What do you think? Should I use the shorter one, or should I stick to this? Happy holidays! And don't forget to review! .