This is my first ever fanfic, or story for that matter. Its split into 3 parts and I wanted to post the first to hopefully get some feedback. Hopefully my writing will be enjoyed and hopefully il get some critisim and suggestions, I'l need those to get better :). This is based on the amazing Sqauresoft game Final Fantasy 7. Please enjoy, The unfinished story
A dark midnight mist clouds the sky till the end of eyes reach. The thunder screaming throughout the great mountains. Lightning crashing to the ground below. Rain pouring down as if the heavens themselves cry.
A tall shadowed figure stands strong against the ground; the tension in his muscles could crack the rocks below his heavy feet. The cold wet rain seemed almost afraid to touch his shoulders. He stretched his neck upwards to gaze into the sky. His long fine tipped sword scratching into the ground with the slightest movement. He draws a smile across his face as he spots an object floating above the ground. A large ship being pounded by the weight of the elements. He lowers his eyes, the smile remaining on his face. He takes his sword and his remaining arm and threw them into the air the smile on his fact becomes more sinister with each passing moment. He opened his mouth and screams at the top of his voice "Come! Fight with me!"
A strong scream is heard from above. A large sword whistles down from the ship and crashes down into the ground below almost shattering all nearby rocks. A second shadowed figure crashes down at almost the same force as the mighty sword. The wind rustles through his spiked hair as he stands up and takes a deep breath in. "I am the only one who can put an end to you" he spoke strongly as he reached to his side to pick up his sturdy weapon.