Hello all! I know I should finish my other story but....I wanted to get some feedback on this fanfic I'm thinkin' about submittin' for a contest!! It's Fushigi Yugi, there's yaoi of course, NurikoxTasuki, ChichirixTasuki. So, comments are accepted, reviews loved, flames hated! I'll post up th' prologue first so if pple like I'll work on th' first chapter and post it up later! So hope ya enjoy it!! And I really am sorry for takin' so long on Dance For me!! I decided to re-write it for you all! It'll be up soon tho!!! -- Hope ya enjoy this!!!
Disclaimer: Not mine....lost th' bid on ebay..TT
Warnings/categories: yaoi, swearing, angst, humor, AUness...sort of, PWP, lime? (maybe...)
Dead Hope
By: Kitsuna Ri
Tasuki kneeled down and set the small boquet of purple flowers on the grave. He dusted dirt off the tomb and gave a soft sigh.
"Another life time and another battle.....and what do ya do?! Ya giver yer life up again!! Do ya do this ta torture me?!"
He gave an empty chuckle.
"Nuriko....is this a sign or somethin'? Am I really not suppsed to be with ya?"
A tear ran down his cheek and he brushed it away quickly.
"I told mysefl I wouldn't cry again....but...Damnit Nuriko!! Why can't I be with ya?!"
He hit the ground angrily and held his head down. All the seishi had been reincarnated into another life time and were lead into another huge battle. Nuriko had given his life up to protecgt Hotohri. The emperor had been fighting, his back turned, when an enemy charged towards him. Nuriko saw the enemy and ran in the way, taking the blow. Tasuki saw it all. The scene was forever embedded into his mind, and it stung his heart so badly whenver he thought of it or when it played in his dreams. He clenched the ground, wanting the pain to just go away, and felt more tears spill down his face.
"Nuriko..."
From a distance, Chichiri watched his friend's turmoil. His head told him to go over and consol his friend, but his heart told him no...
I'll only get hurt worse...
He stood there, torn between two choices, and continued to watch Tasuki in agony. He heard the sky rumble and looked up to see dark clouds moving in. He began to walk towards Tasuki quietly when he heard Tasuki saying something.
"Ya told me th' night before that there is another...but who th' hell is gonna replace you?! No one can..."
Chichir felt himself walk closer to Tasuki bt he seemed as though he was so far away...
"Tasuki-kun..."
Chichiri had whispered the bandits name softly and Tasuki looked up immediatly. As Chichiri looked at the bandits tear stained face, he felt his chest pang in saddness and misery. He spoke carefuly, making sure his voice would not crack.
"Tasuki-kun, we need to go back to the inn, no da...a storm is coming this way..."
Tasuki stood up quietly and began to walk off. Chichiri stared at Nuriko's grave for a moment before bowing his head in a prayer. He finished moments later and began to walk after Tasuki.
"Well this just isn't gonna work..."
Nuriko floated around his grave watching Tasuki and Chichiri's retreating forms.
"Tasuki has such a thick skull....He's gonna get over me one way or another and end Chichiri's suffering...."
TBC
Sorry it's so short but it's only th' prologue!! Chapter one will be up soon if people like it!! So please review!!
Disclaimer: Not mine....lost th' bid on ebay..TT
Warnings/categories: yaoi, swearing, angst, humor, AUness...sort of, PWP, lime? (maybe...)
Dead Hope
By: Kitsuna Ri
Tasuki kneeled down and set the small boquet of purple flowers on the grave. He dusted dirt off the tomb and gave a soft sigh.
"Another life time and another battle.....and what do ya do?! Ya giver yer life up again!! Do ya do this ta torture me?!"
He gave an empty chuckle.
"Nuriko....is this a sign or somethin'? Am I really not suppsed to be with ya?"
A tear ran down his cheek and he brushed it away quickly.
"I told mysefl I wouldn't cry again....but...Damnit Nuriko!! Why can't I be with ya?!"
He hit the ground angrily and held his head down. All the seishi had been reincarnated into another life time and were lead into another huge battle. Nuriko had given his life up to protecgt Hotohri. The emperor had been fighting, his back turned, when an enemy charged towards him. Nuriko saw the enemy and ran in the way, taking the blow. Tasuki saw it all. The scene was forever embedded into his mind, and it stung his heart so badly whenver he thought of it or when it played in his dreams. He clenched the ground, wanting the pain to just go away, and felt more tears spill down his face.
"Nuriko..."
From a distance, Chichiri watched his friend's turmoil. His head told him to go over and consol his friend, but his heart told him no...
I'll only get hurt worse...
He stood there, torn between two choices, and continued to watch Tasuki in agony. He heard the sky rumble and looked up to see dark clouds moving in. He began to walk towards Tasuki quietly when he heard Tasuki saying something.
"Ya told me th' night before that there is another...but who th' hell is gonna replace you?! No one can..."
Chichir felt himself walk closer to Tasuki bt he seemed as though he was so far away...
"Tasuki-kun..."
Chichiri had whispered the bandits name softly and Tasuki looked up immediatly. As Chichiri looked at the bandits tear stained face, he felt his chest pang in saddness and misery. He spoke carefuly, making sure his voice would not crack.
"Tasuki-kun, we need to go back to the inn, no da...a storm is coming this way..."
Tasuki stood up quietly and began to walk off. Chichiri stared at Nuriko's grave for a moment before bowing his head in a prayer. He finished moments later and began to walk after Tasuki.
"Well this just isn't gonna work..."
Nuriko floated around his grave watching Tasuki and Chichiri's retreating forms.
"Tasuki has such a thick skull....He's gonna get over me one way or another and end Chichiri's suffering...."
TBC
Sorry it's so short but it's only th' prologue!! Chapter one will be up soon if people like it!! So please review!!