Author's note –
I've just been reading through my stories and I must say I know i am not the best person at grammar and spelling but some of those stories are terrible, this was the first one I wrote but I've re-written it to give it more of a better story line.
So here it goes…
Re-write of two walls won't stop us,
Disclaimer, sadly I own none of the characters in doctor who and I don't even own doctor who *sniffs* but I do own Annie and Emily.
Anyways to the story …
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Rose's hand fell out of 'the doctor's, it wasn't the same not no-more, there hands didn't fit perfectly together. This was just the clone of the doctor that she had kissed for all the wrong reasons, one been the fact that she was mixed with emotions at the exact time, 2 is how she had waited for him to say those 3 words… it was just 3 words but they meant everything to her, but what had hurt the most was that the love of her life had slipped in and out of her life with out even a chance for her to catch her breath.
"I'm …" rose started anxiously
"I understand rose" said 'the doctor' putting a hand on her shoulder.
"You don't even know what I was going to say?" replied Rose folding her arms,
"Yes I do, you're so easy to read rose" he said putting a hand to her cheek, "even with out having my Timelord instincts, I know that you would rather be with the doctor...'the real doctor'"
"You are the doctor though!" said rose.
"Rose, we both know that I'm not" he said, softly.
Rose looked down at the sand.
"But its ok, because I would rather be my own person, you know" started 'the doctor' "I'd rather be called John Smith, start my own life, a new adventure!"
"What about us though?" asked Rose
"Best friends, like always" he smiled
"Where are you going to stay?" she asked
"I'll find somewhere, I mean I have got Donna instincts inside me" john laughed causing rose to smile.
"That's one thing I missed seeing everyday" said John
"You can stay with me, my apartment is big enough with my torchwood salaries, and it's a three bedroom…" Rose said quickly
"No, rose I couldn't impose on you like that, you have a life to go on with" said John
"I insist, it wouldn't be as if you was kicking someone out of there room and it's always nice to have some company round!" she smiled
"Well until I earn some money to buy my own apartment ok" insisted John
"You have a Deal there John Smith!" said Rose holding her hand out
"That is one good Deal Rose Tyler!" said John shaking rose's hand
"Oh my god, I feel like I'm on some corny TV show!" laughed Rose
"I know!" laughed John
"Rose you ready then? Your father will be here soon with the private Jet" shouted Jackie from down beach
"Yep ready when you are!" replied Rose
"So private Jet?" asked John
"Yep we have a couple of them, but if I was going to be fairly honest I prefer the old fashioned get in a car or walk or…" said rose breaking off nervously
"The Tardis, ye so would I" said John "its ok you can still talk about that type of stuff"
"I know, but I just feel awkward" replied Rose
"Well you shouldn't, come on I think we should make our way towards you mother, I haven't been slapped by her yet in this body and I don't plan on been too" said john putting his hand to his cheek.
Rose Laughed,
"It's not funny" said John defensively
"It is, you looked so gay, when she slapped you before" laughed Rose
"Did not!" replied John
"Did too" said rose still Laughing
"I did not!" said John folding his arms
"Did too" replied Rose walking of, towards her impatient Mother.
"I so did not" said John walking after her.
"You so did" replied Rose Laughing.
"You two are just as bad as Tony and Emily" said Jackie as they approached her.
"Emily?" asked John
"Tony's…" started Jackie
"Friend" finished Rose
"Oh, how old is Tony then?" he asked, not noticing the look of confusion from Jackie to Rose.
"He's 3" said Rose "nearly 4"
"It's been nearly 4 years since I last say you" said John
"Yep 4 very long years" sighed Rose looking of into the distance, as if she was having a flashback of those 4 years.
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The doctor sat soaking wet, in silence of the Tardis, who also sounded as if it had given up on life, not humming its homely hum no-more. Just silence.
A million thoughts where flying round the doctor's brain, his hearts where shattered into a billion pieces,
'Why couldn't have I saved Donna' he thought 'why did I let Rose leave'.
Only a few hours ago was his Tardis full of all the people who loved: Rose, Donna, Martha, sarah-jane, Jack, even Mickey and Jackie because though he didn't like to admit it, they are his family, they made him better and made him the Timelord he is today, and he let them leave, he let Rose leave and he couldn't save Donna his best friend and that's what he has to live with because that is the curse of the Timelord's, watching the people they love get torn apart and wither and die, he has to watch them grow old.
And while all this made him sad and upset, someone else bothered him or more else something else bothered him, the thought making his blood boil was the Daleks they always came back: Van Statten's museum, the game station, canary wolf, New York 1930 and just now ! Always coming back, in some shape or form to torture the people the doctor knew and love and to cry there deadly scream 'exterminate' always killing.
The doctor needed a break, a real holiday, some place where no danger or trouble involved just somewhere, were he could relax, yep that sounded go to him, relax!
End of chapter one what do you think??
Review please :)
Lauren :)