After a lot of positive feedback I decided I'd post the first chapter of Framed. I have the basic plot of this story planned out but until I finish my story Nightmares I'll only update not so often. Sorry but Nightmares is kinda ruling my mind right now XP.
Anyway this idea came to me as I watched old episodes of Justice League Unlimited. What gave me the idea everyone was when everyone thought the Justice League was bad like the Justice Lords. Even though it was really Lex and Brainiac framing them for everything. I then thought of the Teen Titans and thought what if the tables were turned? And ta-da Framed was born.
This is a crossover story so I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it.
Summary: The Titans wake up confused and with no memory of the past week. As it turns out they are now wanted criminals and guess who's hunting them down? Now the Titans are on the run from the League while trying to clear their names. The question on every Titans' mind is; who set them up?
Pairings: Rob/Star, BB/Rae, Cy/Bee, Aqua/OC, Speedy/Terra, Flinx, a hint of JeriKole, BM/WW, GL/HG, BC/GA, H/Q.
Disclaimer: I don't own Teen Titans or Justice League Unlimited
"Ughhhh." Robin groaned as he sat up and looked around. He slowly placed a hand to his forehead as he felt his head throb rather painfully. He looked around to find himself on the floor of the Ops Center, "What happened?" he murmured. Robin then caught sight of his friends passed out around him and not only them but Titans East as well.
Robin groaned as his headache seemed to increase in pain as he got up on his wobbly legs. He felt weak and drained, he glanced down and was surprised to see some bruises on him as well as a few tears on his uniform. "What happened?" he asked again as he tried to recall what happened.
Flashback:
Robin smiled and clapped Speedy on the back, "Hey guys." he greeted.
"Hey Robin what's up?" Speedy asked with his own smile.
"Hey Robin." Terra greeted and hugged him quickly before releasing him and standing next to Speedy.
"Nothing much man." a voice called from behind Robin, he turned and smiled at Cyborg who had a massive grin on his face. A smiling Bee was next to him, standing particularly close to the cybernetic teen.
"Anything up with you guys?" the Boy Wonder asked.
"Nah not really it's been slow in Steel lately." a voice answered.
Robin then saw Aqualad standing by Sam, holding her hand and a grin on both their faces. He nodded and Starfire beamed, "How wonderful it has been the slow here as well."
"Well duh! Those dudes know not to mess with us!" Beast Boy boasted and Raven rolled her eyes at his enthusiasm but a teasing smirk was playing on her lips.
"Yea well…."
End Flashback:
Robin squeezed his eyes shut as he tried to remember what happened next but it was all too blurry to try and recall. With a sigh he glanced around the room and saw three people begin to stir, he walked over to the person next to him. "Star? Star are you alright?" he asked and kneeled down beside her as he saw her eyes begin to flutter.
Eventually her eyes slowly opened to reveal her emerald irises, "Mmmm, Robin?" she moaned as she placed a delicate hand on her forehead. Robin sat her up gently as a dizzy spell came over the Tamaranean.
"What… what has happened Robin?" she questioned as she looked up at him.
"I'm not sure Starfire."
A moan was then heard as two other people began to stir, they turned their attention to Raven and Bumble Bee who were beginning to sit up.
"What hit me?" Bee questioned as she rubbed her head and opened her chocolate brown eyes. Raven stood up, her cloak covering her body and her hood was down as she rubbed her head and opened her amethyst like eyes. What was different though was the ends of her cloak looked worn and a little torn, she had a few bruises decorating her face. Bumble Bee was the same there was a hole in the bottom of her pants. Her top looked worn and dirty as well, bruises and cuts littered her arm and her face.
"What? What are we doing in the Ops Center?" Raven questioned. As she looked around and was surprised to see her friends knocked out.
"I'm not sure." Robin told her as he helped Starfire up.
"Let me see if I can wake the guys up." Raven told them and closed her eyes as she began to levitate in her lotus position. Her breathing became calmer and she looked more relaxed, soon Sam moaned and opened her crystal blue eyes.
"God what hit me?" she questioned as she sat up slowly. Bumble Bee helped her up, "Thanks…Bee?"
"Sam I need your help." Raven murmured, with a shrug Sam sat in her lotus position and helped Raven awaken their friends.
Soon everyone was up, confused and drained but awake none the less. They were surprised to find their uniforms a bit dirty, worn, and a little torn, not to mention some cuts and bruises on their body.
"Did we go out and fight someone?" Speedy questioned.
"Yea that's why we all passed out in the Ops Center." Bee sighed.
"Cyborg check the security cameras." Robin ordered and Cyborg nodded. He walked over to the computer and began to type away.
"Anyone remember anything?" Terra questioned and the room shook their heads.
"All I remember is you guys showing up but even that's a little blurry." Robin admitted.
Titans East nodded, "We remember that too."
"Well I don't." Beast Boy piped up.
"Me neither." Sam told them.
"Neither do I." Starfire admitted as Raven nodded indicating it was the same for her. Robin raised an eyebrow, "Huh that's weird."
"Yo Robin! You won't believe this." Cyborg called over. The Titans turned their attention to Cyborg and found a screen in place of the window.
"Cyborg what are you-"
"Just watch man."
There was an anchor lady standing in front of a camera wearing a blue cardigan over a white ruffle neckline shirt with a black skirt that stopped at her knees. She was standing in front of what looked like a wrecked city.
"…So sad. Who was once our heroes is now our greatest threat. As you can see these so called heroes have damaged much of the city in the last week. And not only here, Jump City is not the only city to be hit, many others have been damaged, though not as severely, all around the world." the anchor announced a stony expression on her face.
"Jump City?" Bee questioned.
"We have to go help the citizens." Robin told them as he was about to go out Cyborg called out to him, "Wait just watch."
"Now the police have no choice but to capture these villains and put them behind bars. Our protectors, who was once our friends are now our greatest enemy. Who can save us from these teens? Who can we trust as our heroes? Why have they turned on us?" as she said this you could see the tears beginning to form on the rims of her eyes as she fought back a scowl.
"Perhaps it was all a ruse so we would have our guards down before they struck…unfortunately it worked. Many citizens are hurt either severely or not, only a handful dead not by their hands but by there deeds. The authorities have assured us they won't rest until the Teen Titans are brought to justice."
"What!" they all shouted, shock evident on their faces.
"Some other heroes are also on the case to stop them but can we trust them? How do we know if Superman, Batman, Wonder Women and the rest of the Justice League are not part of this scheme? But who else can we turn too we just have to hope they are actually on our side." the anchor women continued.
Cyborg sighed and looked back to the computer, he pressed a button and the TV was paused and a picture took it's place.
It was them, of all of them in the middle of the wreckage sick smirks on all of their faces.
Robin was in the center with his bo-staff a large smirk on his face as he seemed to be enjoying the ruins and fire around him.
Cyborg clicked another button and another picture came up, it was of Starfire and Robin destroying some buildings. Starfire was throwing star bolts at building while Robin threw explosives and electric disks, they looked like they enjoyed that a lot.
The next picture was off Raven and Beast Boy, Raven was scaring the hell out of the citizens as many dark tentacles spewed out of her large cloak. Her four demon eyes glowing with malice, a smirk on her face. Beast Boy was lion and roaring at the citizens screaming and running away.
The picture changed again and showed Sam and Aqualad wreaking havoc as well. Sam was levitating cars and throwing them everywhere, Aqualad was riding a wave through the streets sweeping up anything in his path.
Again a picture change as it showed Cyborg and Bumble Bee working together to destroy the city, shooting off their electric charges (Bee), and sonic blasts (Cyborg). Next was Terra and Speedy, Terra's eyes were glowing yellow and rock pillars were shooting up everywhere. Speedy was shooting off arrows in a frenzy as well from a top of a tall rock pillar.
The team stared at these pictures in shock, "B-but how?" Starfire questioned her eyes wide.
"For the past week days?" Speedy asked.
"But we don't remember any of this." Aqualad argued.
"Doesn't matter no one will believe us." Raven pointed out.
"Wait didn't that reporter say not only Jump but all around the world?" Sam questioned. A silence draped over the room before, "Cyborg."
"Already on it." called the android as he typed furiously.
With a sigh he turned to the team, "It's been confirmed in Russia, New Zealand, Star City, Central City, South America, China, the Middle East….everywhere. Every Titan on record has attacked at least one city this past week.." he said with a sad frown on his face.
Robin's eyes were wide, "This doesn't make sense." he murmured.
"We didn't do any of this but these photos, those people, the cities how?" Beast boy asked.
"I don't know." Robin admitted as he racked his brain for any thoughts.
"Could someone be impersonating us?" Terra piped up.
"Nope I already checked, this past week we weren't in the Tower we were out there…wrecking the city." Cyborg told her as he walked over to the team.
"This week was a blur we can't remember anything maybe if we-"
Speedy was cut off as a transmission was trying to come in on the screen, everybody eyed the call wearily.
Robin then walked forward toward the computer, "Wait Robin!" he turned to see it was his sister who addressed him.
"Do we know who it could be? It could be the police or… the League for all we know." she told him.
"But what if it's one of the Titans trying to contact us." Robin argued, it was quiet and he took that as an ok.
He then typed in a few buttons and pressed the enter key, a large face then popped up on screen. The team tensed as they received a cold glare from the one, the only….Batman.
"Batman." Robin greeted tightly with a nod.
"Robin." he replied his voice cold and almost emotionless.
"What can we do for you?"
"What can you do? What can you do! Robin you are a wanted criminal, you have wrecked a city for the past week and terrorized many civilians and you have the nerve to ask me that!" he snapped.
"We didn't do any of that." Robin replied not even flinching at the Dark Knight's tone while the others practically cowered.
Batman shook his head, "There is clear evidence Robin, we had Flash check as well as Wonder Women, Black Canary, Green Arrow, and Martian Manhunter. That was you and your team, all over the world! Did you just have a sudden epiphany to join the dark side?" the Dark Knight questioned harshly.
"We would never!" Starfire piped up regaining confidence and flying next to her leader's aid.
He glared at her and she met his gaze evenly, "Words mean nothing, your actions speak louder. We have no choice but to arrest you."
Robin scowled and slammed his fists on the consol, "We didn't do this Batman can't you see that! We must have been framed!"
"That was you Robin! Martian Manhunter has confirmed it! You attacked the innocent and destroyed a city!" Batman snapped.
"We don't remember doing that! We have no memories of the past week at all!" Sam shot back.
Batman could have snorted, "Please we know you remember we won't let our previous relationship get in the way of your punishment. You will be arrested, you will be brought to justice." he hissed.
Raven looked around suddenly feeling a presence in the room, one that was not of her friends or a normal Titan. "Sam I'm gonna link us up, I think someone's in here with us." she told her telepathically. Sam complied and they both scanned the room looking carefully and they found four unidentified personal in the room, hidden.
"Can't you get it through your thick head!" Robin shouted getting very annoyed and he felt kind of…hurt. Bruce was technically part of his family and had (somewhat) accepted him as such, but now that he was being accused by his own step-father well that hurt…
Batman's eyes narrowed, "Robin you don't realize the crimes you and your team have committed. You and your teammates don't have a choice but to turn yourselves in…or are we going to do this the hard way."
Robin growled and then a smirk played on his lips, "I'm not afraid of you, you can't possibly take down all of the Titans."
"No one can." Speedy added as he stood their ground, everyone else looked defiant as well.
"We've helped so many people." Cyborg put in.
"Stopped many plans." Bee added.
"Even saved the world." Beast Boy chimed in.
"And we still don't have your full trust?" Terra questioned incredulously.
"We won't do time in prison for something we didn't do Batman, you can try and capture us but you won't succeed." Robin informed the Dark Knight.
Sam's eyes snapped open, "Robin watch it!" she shouted and placed up a purple transparent shield by him. A clang was heard as a kind of weapon smashed against the shield shattering it, the figure had flown past Robin.
"It's an ambush." Raven shouted as her hands began to glow black with a white outline.
Robin was surprised as the Flash, Hawk Girl, Green Lantern, and Wonder Women stood at the door looking ready for a fight. He turned to the screen and scowled, "You wouldn't even let us defend ourselves!" he shouted outraged.
"Some father!" he shouted and slammed the end button down as a surprised look crossed Batman's face.
He was enraged and the titans were glaring at the heroes at the door, he turned and a fierce glare was on his face. Starfire was next to him throughout the conversation, she placed a hand on his shoulder but her gaze was focused on the four at the door.
He took out his bo-staff and twirled it around, "It doesn't have to be this way." Wonder Women tried to reason, she was almost like a mother to him…
"We don't have much of a choice." he retorted as he took a battle stance, Starfire's eyes began to glow neon green, Raven's eyes began to glow, Sam's did as well, then Terra's, Speedy took out three arrows, Cyborg had his sonic cannon out, Bumble Bee had her stingers charged, Aqualad and Beast Boy took a battle stance as well.
"You won't give us a choice." Sam reminded her.
"We either go to prison."
"Or go to prison." Speedy finished for Bee.
"The way we see it we can't do that." Cyborg told them.
"You won't even here us out." Raven told her.
"We're not going to take the blame for something we didn't even do." Beast Boy told them with narrowed eyes.
"So if that means we have to fight."
"Then so be it." Starfire finished for Aqualad.
Robin glared at them, "Titans GO!" he shouted and they all charged at them.
Diana sighed but flew ahead as did the other three, Sam and Aqualad dealt with the Flash, Cyborg, Beast Boy, and Bee dealt with Green Lantern, Terra, Raven and Speedy dealt with Hawk Girl, while Starfire and Robin dealt with Wonder Women.
Sam growled as the Flash kept running, she shot a beam at him but missed by a mile as he kept running, "Hehe too fast for you." he taunted.
"He's definitely related to Kid." Sam commented as she tried to land a hit. Aqualad chuckled but then concentrated on the sink and water flowed out from it. He tried to redirect the flow to slam into the Flash but again he was too fast.
Sam grunted as the Flash punched her and she tried to land a kick but he dodged, she stumbled forward again as she felt another punch. She growled and shot up into the air, she saw Aqualad now trying to deal with the fast man.
He blocked a punch and a kick from the speedy person, he then tried to land a kick but missed. He then fell forward as he felt someone sweep his legs from under him but as soon as he hit the ground he spun around. His legs kicking the Flash's and Sam managed to finally land a beam.
"If your not on the ground you can't run." Sam mocked and levitated him up from the floor. Aqualad then slammed a current into him that caused him to fly across the room.
Hawk Girl dodged several arrows and dived downward with her electrified mace (which was charged right now). She then attempted to smack Speedy with it but Terra blocked the attack with a rock wall (ripped the floors of the Tower the whole time).
Hawk Girl's mace simply destroyed the wall, Beast Boy transformed into a lion and attempted to tackle her. Shayera proved to be faster though as she quickly dodges him and lands a kick to the belly of the beast causing Beast Boy to fly into a wall.
Speedy shot some more arrows but Hawk Girl deflected them with her mace and flew closer to them. Terra lifted her arms and a rock pillar shot out from the ground. Shayera reeled back and smacked her mace against the stone, destroying it.
She then managed to hit Terra with her mace causing Terra to fly back against the wall, she moaned and slowly opened her eyes showing she was very weak. Speedy glared at Shayera, "I'm sorry Terra but it had to be done." she somewhat apologized.
Speedy reeled back an arrow and shot it forward, Shayera flew up and dodged it but then was tackled by a lion again. The lion then transformed into a bear and she was punched.
Green Lantern placed up a shield as Raven sent down a dark beam, he then pulled back and the glowing green shield turned into a hand and attempted to grab Raven. John was distracted however when a beam of light just barley scraped by him, he turned to see Cyborg ready with his cannon.
John scowled and spun around, his green hand turning into a glowing green fist and smacked into Cyborg.
Cyborg grunted as he flew through the air, he then had his feet take the impact as he slammed against the wall. He used this to his advantage and propelled himself forward with a huge fist. John easily flew up and dodged it but was met with a kick as Bee became bigger from her small bug size.
Wonder Women gazed at the two teens glaring back at her, one holding bright star bolts in her tanned hands, the other with his bo-staff. "Won't you guys just come in quietly maybe that'll help ease your punishment."
"What point is there? We did not do any of this why take the punishment at all?" Starfire shot back.
"Because we saw you kids destroying the city we tried to stop you but…our feelings got in the way. Like Batman said that won't happen again and we won't hold back on you guys so save yourselves the trouble."
Robin scowled, "No way Diana we're not going with you, not until we clear our names."
Wonder Women sighed before flying forward at top speed she quickly punched Starfire which caused her to fly back, "I'm sorry Starfire." Diana called over to her. She ducked as the bo-staff swung over her head and she flipped back.
"Your not going to win this fight Robin." Wonder Women warned him as she stood up, hands on her hips.
Robin's eyes narrowed, "We'll see about that." with that he three electric disks forward.
Diana flew out of the way but was punched to the side by Starfire, "Haaaaa!" Starfire cried as she tried to hit Wonder Women with her eyebeams.
Wonder Women flew up in the air, Starfire threw two star bolts at the Amazon but she deflected them with her metal bracelets. She then grabbed her lasso that hung on her hip and twirled it in the air, Robin got out a bird-a-rang and threw it at the Amazon.
Diana saw it coming though and quickly dodged it before throwing it at Robin, he was caught in the lasso. She then pulled him up and threw him to Starfire who couldn't dodge in time.
They were tangled in the lasso as Diana planned, she then looked over at them and sighed, "I'm sorry." she said.
Robin glared up at her, he then discreetly got out an electric disc and nudged Starfire. She got the message and shot off beams from her eyes trying to distract the Amazon princess.
Diana deflected each one but didn't notice as Robin threw the electric disc by her red boots. It then exploded and had Diana in what seemed to be an electric net, she winced and got to her knees as the electricity crackled around her. Starfire then managed to get the lasso off of them, she then reeled back and kicked Wonder Women into the wall.
The two exchanged triumphant smiles that is until the windows suddenly broke. A loud crash resonated throughout the room and shards of glass flew in all corners. The Titans turned to look who was at the door, "Crap." Robin muttered as he saw the Man of Steel himself floating by the now broken windows with his arms crossed in front of his large chest.
The Titans tensed, they could just barley hold their own with the four league members but Superman? Yea they were doomed.
Suddenly Aqualad and Sam were tied together super quick by Flash who had found rope. Shayera kicked Speedy into Raven and then smacked them with her mace over to John.
Green Lantern had trapped Cyborg, Bee, Terra, and Beast Boy into a large green bubble. He then made it bigger to contain the other two that Shayera had thrown his way.
Wonder Women had recovered from her attack and had lassoed Starfire and Robin yet again. This time taking Robin's utility belt all the while, in almost lightning speed.
Superman calmly landed and walked over to them giving them a disapproving look. "It didn't have to come to this." he said in a stern voice.
"All we want to know is why? Why would you do this? To the citizens you swore to protect? The many great things you have done and you decide to throw away? For what?" he asked.
The Titans glared at him, "Any ideas?" Aqualad murmured to Sam.
"Getting there." she murmured back, her blue eyes on Superman.
"Why would you do this? Betray everyone's trust? Didn't you know we were going to stop you no matter what."
"Funny didn't seem that way to us in the beginning." Beast Boy murmured, Raven nudged him and told him to be quiet after all Superman does have super sonic hearing.
Superman glared at Beast Boy who shrunk down, Clark then sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. "We should take them to prison." he said finally looking at the League members.
"Will that even hold them?" Shayera asked.
"She's got a good point, these kids prove to be tough and stubborn I doubt any prison here on Earth will hold them." John piped up.
"Then what do you suggest?" Superman asked.
"Perhaps we should keep them at Watchtower." Diana suggested and tightened her lasso as she saw Starfire fidget.
Clark raised an eyebrow, "Is that a good idea? As John has pointed out they prove to be very persistent. What if they get break out?"
"Out of our cells? Please I highly doubt it plus we can watch them at all costs." Flash replied for Diana.
Clark thought about this before nodding, "Alright we'll keep them up there for now, I still have to run it by Br-Batman first." he informed his teammates.
Sam glanced at Raven who nodded, throughout this whole exchanged they had began to talk telepathically. They had come up with a plan to get them out of the current situation but this would drain them of their power significantly. Still it was better then being locked up in Watchtower for something they didn't do.
Raven closed her eyes, "Azarath Metrion Zinthos." she began to chant under her breath.
Superman's ears perked up at this, he looked over at Raven and saw her with her eyes closed. "Will that energy field keep them contained?" he asked Green lantern.
He nodded, "It should." he replied and looked over at the bubble.
Raven's dark energy began to outline her figure as black energy seeped out of her. Her chants began to grow a little louder.
Sam closed her eyes and focused on her energy, she tried to gather as much as she could. She then moved her hand a little and managed to grab hold of Aqualad's.
Though not sure of what she was doing he squeezed her hand, she smiled slightly but got back to focusing.
Raven's eyes snapped open, "Azarath Metrion Zinthos!" she shouted and Sam's eyes snapped open too.
Four silver rings appeared around her and Aqualad as well as Starfire and Robin, a black ball consumed everyone in Green Lantern's bubble. They had all teleported away from the Tower and away from the Justice League.
The group all found themselves on the outskirts of the city, they were surprised by this but grateful nonetheless.
Raven and Sam collapsed to their knees in exhaustion, after using so much energy they obviously had to be tired.
Aqualad went over to Sam while Beast Boy went over to Raven, "You ok?" Aqualad asked.
Sam smiled weakly, "Yea now that we're away from the League." she mumbled.
"We're not safe yet." Robin said. "We have to distance ourselves from Jump City for now."
"What good will that do? The Justice League headquarters is hovering in space! They could transport their members anywhere on Earth, unless we go back for the T-ship we can't get away." Bee informed them.
Robin sighed and ran a hand through his spiked hair, "We have to do something."
"We need to clear our names is what we have to do." Speedy spoke up.
"But how we don't have any clues, any leads nothing." Terra reminded him.
"That doesn't mean we have to give up. Something happened the night you guys came to the Tower, someone had to have ambushed us we have to figure out who." Robin informed the team.
"We can not go back to the Tower in search of such clues. There is a great chance the Justice League will have guards there." Starfire replied.
"She brings up a good point." Raven murmured as Beast Boy helped her sit up.
"I think we need to go to the other Titans maybe they'll have some clues or leads, anything that could help." Aqualad suggested.
Robin nodded, Speedy took out his communicator but Cyborg stopped him from using it, "The League can probably tap into our communicators and know who we're contacting and our plans if we choose to use them. Not to mention…track our location."
The Titans stayed silent for a second, "Give me your communicators, now." Robin ordered.
They all gave it to the Boy Wonder who threw them on the ground, he then looked over at Starfire and nodded his head, she nodded and charged up her star beam before shooting them at the pile of communicators. They sparked and soon caught fire, Aqualad looked at the communicators and closed his eyes a pipe came up from underground and spewed water onto the now useless communicators. They gargled and sparked even more as they were drenched, Speedy looked over at Robin who still had his. "What about yours?"
Robin looked over at him, "Give me a second." he then opened the communicator and popped open the bottom touch screen, he began to rewire the communicator. Then with a sigh he hit the talk button.
"Calling all Titans, you may or may not have received the news but now every Teen Titan is a wanted criminal. The Justice League is going to hunt us down to bring us to justice… I know what you are all thinking, I believe that you didn't hurt anyone or anything intentionally. We've been framed whether the League wants to believe us or not. For now all communication will be cut off in case the League may be listening in. Maybe we'll cross paths again. For now stay safe and hidden, good luck…to all of you." he said into the communicator knowing every Titan who had one had heard him.
He then hit another button and his communicator sparked up, Robin threw it onto the other communicators. It splashed into a puddle and sparked even more before dying out completely.
It was quiet for a moment as this news and Robin's small speech sunk into them. "What do we do now?" Beast Boy asked breaking the silence.
Robin stared at the ground in front of him as he contemplated everything that has happened in a short amount of time. "I think…Aqualad's onto something." he finally said.
He looked up to address the team properly, "We need to see the other Titans, maybe they hold something a clue or a lead."
"Who should we start with then?" Cyborg asked.
Robin hesitated before sighing, "I hate to say it but we have to spilt up for now."
"Why?" Terra asked.
"It's better if we don't travel in a group otherwise it would be easier for the League to spot us." Robin explained.
Another silence draped over them, "Maybe now we should get some rest." Bee suggested, "It's been a long day."
"Yea I wouldn't mind sleep right now." Sam piped up as Raven nodded in agreement.
It's true right now it was nighttime, they could hear the crickets chirping in the bushes, the stars twinkled in the night sky as the quarter moon hung in the sky.
"We would get more cover in the trees." Speedy pointed out pointing to the forest up ahead.
Robin nodded, "Alright then tomorrow we'll break up into teams and split up."
And scene! Ok I'll stop it here sorry if it seems a bit rushed but it was better then when I started it, trust me. So what do you think of it so far? Is it good, bad, or ok? Please review and tell me how I can improve but I won't accept flames. Alright so reviews are appreciated, until next time see ya!