Hi!!! This is my first fanfic. Oh yeah! There are some parts that they will be a bit OOC.
Kidnapped!!!
Chapter 1:
" " talking
' ' thinking
Tommy and Zoe are walking towards the park to meet Kouji, Takuya, Jp and Kouichi because they are going to hang-out. While on their way there, a robbery was going on. Tommy and Zoe saw it, the robbers threw the diamonds away from them because the police are coming towards
them.Tommy picked up the diamonds and ran away with Zoe following behind. They intended to go to the police station to report what they saw.
"We have to hurry!" Tommy cried.
"I know! I know!" Zoe said.
While they were a few feet away, one of the robber's comrades blocked them and took them away, not noticing Tommy, throwing the diamonds near the place where they should meet with their friends.
They arrived at the park.
"What's taking them so long?!" Takuya whined.
Kouji just shrugged "Just wait..."
Then, he noticed something sparkling near them. Kouji picked up one and analyzed it 'What's this doing here?' He thought.
"Whoa! A robbery! In the headlines!!!" Takuya yelled while reading a newspaper he just bought nearby.
"Give me that!" Kouji said and grabbed the newspaper from Takuya's hands. He read it and noticed two figures on the picture that looks like....
"That's Tommy and Zoe!!!" He yelled which startled Takuya.
"What?!" Takuya asked suddenly, grabbing the paper from Kouji's hands.
"Hey guys! What's up?" Kouichi asked finally arriving with JP.
"Oh nothing much, just that Tommy and Zoe must have been kidnapped by robbers..." Takuya sarcastically said.
"What?! Zoe?! Kidnapped?! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" JP yelled.
They all looked at him and sweatdropped.
"Will you calm down!" Kouji said
"Yeah, we're gonna save them, don't worry." Takuya said
"Let's tell the police." Kouichi suggested.
"No, we can't. There's not enough proof. And we don't know where they have been taken." Kouji answered.
"Okay then, let's go over to my house and talk about this." Kouichi said.
They all agreed and headed over to his house. While they were almost there, they passed by an old factory and heard strange noises.
"What was that?!" JP asked.
"Don't mind those noises. Kouji and I always hear those noises when we pass by." Kouichi replied.
"Do you think it's haunted?" Takuya asked.
"Nah. It can't be." Kouji answered.
Inside Kouichi's room:
"I can still here those strange sounds..." JP complained, covering his ears.
"Don't you think they sound more like a call for help?" Takuya asked curiously.
"I don't know. What do you think bro?" Kouichi asked his twin.
"Maybe... but I have a feeling that Takuya is right." Kouji said.
"Yeah." Kouichi agreed.
"Why don't we go and check it out?!" Takuya suggested.
"Yeah. Who knows, it could be Tommy and Zoe." JP said.
The twins nodded and they all went to the old creepy factory.
They saw a small hole and peeped in it.
"Well? What do you see?" Kouji asked Takuya
Takuya gasped. He saw two familiar figures trying desperately to escape. "It looks like Tommy and Zoe!!!!"
"What?!" They all yelled.
"We'd better get ready and save them!" Kouichi said.
"Right!" Takuya said and headed back to Kouichi's house to get ready.
Over to Tommy and Zoe:
"Zoe! I can't move..."
"I know, Tommy, I can't too."
"Let's just hope someone heard our cries"
"I just hope Takuya and the others noticed that were not yet there..."
Inside Kouichi's room:
"Okay, what do we have to bring?" Takuya asked
"I'll go and get my key collection!" Kouichi said.
Takuya and JP sweatdropped. "What key collection?!"
Kouji sighed "It's just his hobby to collect keys... don't ask why..."
"O-kay!" Takuya said.
When Kouichi arrived...
"What else do we have to bring?" Kouichi asked.
"I'll go home and get my waterguns!!!" JP said.
The 3 of them sweatdropped
"Yeah..." Kouichi said
"Sure..." Takuya said
Takuya went home and grabbed his slingshot.Kouji, went home and took his kendo stick with him.
JP grabbed his 3 waterguns and gave one to Kouichi.
They went to the factory and stood in front of the door.
"Okay..." Takuya said.
"Let's go..." JP said and loaded his watergun like it was a real gun.
'As if we're going to war... sheesh!' Kouji thought.Okay! That's Chapter one! R&R please! Tell me my errrors....