The Perfect Teenager

by BrookieRW

Katlina lives a strange life in which she is the main character of a video game called the perfect teenager. the game is about doing tasks to be nominated the perfect teenager, but something goes wrong... guest star, markiplier the youtube gamer. be warned first few chapters suck and feel free to express your opinion, it will help me improve as a writer. and i cant spell...

1. Chapter 1

Chapter 1

"Hello mom!" I ran down the hallway to greet her as she came in the door. I hugged her and in the process made her drop the bag in her hands.

"Katlina! I have eggs!" I moved out of the way and picked up the bag. She clucked her tongue and took it from me. "Silly girl." I grumbled as we moved down the hall to the kitchen. She set her bag on the counter and walked towards her room. "Put that stuff away for me dear?" she asked.

"Yes mom!" I thought about saying no but a ringing came into my head from my left ear. Instead I went to the bag and rummaged inside. I found bananas and threw them on the floor. Why? The ringing got louder. "Lets not make a mess." I found myself saying. I pulled out eggs and put them on the counter after I put the bananas back on the counter. I then threw everything off.

After I went to the door my mom had gone through and found it locked I went looking for the key. I let my body guide me and the ringing stopped. It led me to the bathroom after checking all the cupboards and drawers and finding nothing. Inside their was a key in the toilet. "That's an odd place to put a key."

I walked to the bedroom and unlocked the door. The key had worked. Inside the room was only a bed, a bottle of soda, and a lamp. The thought crossed my mind of where my mom was but it caused the ringing to start again so I ignored it. Instead I focused on the bottle of soda on the bed. 'Calypso soda' it read. I picked it up and drank it. I collapsed.

My sight was black except for a line of words across my vision, 'You Died'. Suddenly three boxes appeared under the words. The first one said 'Play Again?'. The second one said 'Continue?'. The last one said 'Exit?' a white arrow head came into view and clicked 'Continue?'.

I was immediately standing in front of the bottle on the bed. "Let's not drink that again." I said. I then picked up the bottle and drank again.

I died again but this time I heard a faint voice. "No! I didn't mean too!" The arrow head clicked 'Continue?' again. I repeated my words, "Let's not drink that again" I then drank for the third time. The voice said louder, "Forget it!" the arrow head then clicked, 'Play Again?'.

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"Hello mom!" I ran down the hall to greet her as she came in the door. I hugged her and in the process made her drop the bag in her hands.