Hello, everyone. I have decided to embark on a new story. This story purports to tell the story of one Ms. Marvel, aka Binary and Warbird. I hope you all like it. this story was suggested by my friend, Heartsyhawk, who noticed a strange resemblance between Ms. Marvel and a Kryptonian character from DC, Kara El, aka Super Girl. I hope you like it. Also, here is my disclaimer: I do not own Marvel Comics, DC comics, Super Girl or Ms. Marvel, Carol Danvers, or Warbird.
THE UNTOLD STORY OF CAROL DANVERS
Chapter One: A TRAGIC BEGINNING
Our story begins on a planet far, far away. This planet is larger than Jupiter and orbits a large red sun. There are several moons in orbit around this planet. Its inhabitants are highly advanced in their civilization. They are united as one planet. Many of their cities are completely crime free. Poverty is largely unknown to its inhabitants. It's capital city covers one quarter of the populated area of the planet. The planet is Krypton.
In Kandor, a young couple was headed to the chancellor's office. They were seeking permission to marry. The young man was Zor-El, the younger brother of the most powerful man on the science council, Jor-El. His bride to be was named Allura. She was a very pretty young woman. There was no doubt that she was in love with Zor-El. They were eagerly looking forward to being married. At the chancellor's office the happy couple began to fill out the mountain of paperwork required for their marriage. Finally, they came to the end and were waiting for the interview. The interview was the final step before their license was granted. They had planned to take their honeymoon in Argo City. That is also where they planned to make their home. Zor-El had a position lined up at Krypton University. He was going to be teaching Kryptonian Science. Allura was looking forward to being a homemaker. Her goal was to have many children and to be the best mom possible. After several hours at the Chancellor's office, the happy couple realized their dream and was married.
Fast-forward one year later. Allura looked at her husband. "Zor, it is time," the pretty woman said. "Our baby will be here soon. I need to get to the maternity unit." Just then, she felt a stab of pain surge through her. She started to fall but Zor caught her. Quickly, the couple made their way to the antigrav disk to go to the maternity unit. Another contraction shot through Allura. "What is going on in there," she thought. "It feels like there is an army fighting inside me." A few minutes later, they were at the maternity unit at Van-El Center. Allura was whisked into the birthing unit and quickly sedated. Zor-El made his way to the father place. According to Kryptonian custom, all new fathers had to undergo specialized training in order to better understand what their wives were going through. This training lasted for three days and they did not get to see their children until the training was over. This training encompassed many different things, from supporting the children and wife to changing diapers and feeding. Kryptonian fathers were expected to do everything for the new mothers and infants.
Allura was unconscious when her time came to deliver her baby. Unbeknownst to her, she had been carrying twin girls. Twins were an extreme rarity on Krypton. Many people thought twins were a punishment by Rao. Usually, when twins were detected one would have been aborted. In Allura's case they went undetected through out her pregnancy. When the doctor saw there were two babies, he decided to keep one for himself. He and his wife were childless. When he saw the two girls, his heart melted and he knew what he had to do. The child that he hid, he and his wife named her Kiral. This is her story.
Dr. Kim-Da and his wife Won-Da lived in Kandor. It was there that he raised the child named Kiral. Kiral was a beautiful girl with golden blonde hair and piercing blue eyes. At an early age, the girl showed flashes of being a prodigy. She was walking and talking by age one. She was able to read and write the Kryptonian alphabet by age two. In her playgroup she was the adorable yet precocious leader of a group of kids. They called themselves the War Birds, an interesting choice by Kiral, since war had largely been eliminated on Krypton at this time. Shortly before Kiral turned three, her mother, Won, was killed by a person who had just been released from the phantom zone. This had a profound effect on the young girl. She became much more withdrawn and introspective. One day she heard a report from the leader of the Science Council about a villainous android from the planet of Colu. This android had been traversing their galaxy and stealing cities from the various planets he visited. It was believed that he was heading for Krypton. All residents were urged to remain calm. It seemed that some members of the Science Council wanted to negotiate with this villain in order to save Krypton the indignity of losing one of its cities. At the same time, Jor-El, also a member of the Science Council, was warning the residents of Krypton about an impending explosion which was going to destroy Krypton.
"Father, what is going on?" Kiral asked.
Dr. Kim-Da looked at his beautiful daughter. "Many people believe that Jor-El is crazy, Kiral. However, I have worked with this man. He may be right about Krypton's impending doom. Jor-El wants to use space arks to evacuate our home. Unfortunately with the destruction of Wegthor by that rogue scientist, Jax-Ur, Space travel has been banned. No one is allowed to come here or to use missiles from here into space."
"What about this android, this Brainiac? What will happen if he comes here?"
"Don't worry about that, Kiral. Braniac would never try to steal Kandor," her father reassured her. "It is believed that if he takes a city, it will likely be Kryptonopolis or Argo. Kandor is just too big. Our government will protect us."
Kiral looked at her father with trust and understanding. She had been reassured that they were safe from Braniac. Just then, there was a large rumbling and the land shook beneath their feet. Several buildings were swaying with the quake. Soon the rumbling stopped. "These Krypton quakes seem to be getting worse, father."
"Yes, Kiral, they are. That is why I have secretly been building a spaceship for us to leave Krypton in the next couple of days. I believe the time is growing short. We will need to get prepared."
The next couple of days were filled with intense preparation. Kiral and her father were constantly training for their trip into space. They knew that their activities were illegal and could get them banished into the phantom zone for a very long stretch. Still they continued to prepare both individually and collectively. The day they were supposed to depart, the weather was bad and they had to delay their departure for several hours. Dr Lon Da was glad that his daughter was such a prodigy at this time because she seemed to pick up everything so well. Since their trip was delayed, he decided to take her out to dinner in their favorite Kandorian restaurant. They had just returned home and were about to get into their spacesuits when their communication beacon went off. Negotiations with Brainiac had broken off and he was heading directly for Krypton. Government Forces were taking to the skies in Argo and Kryptonopolis. The alarms also began to sound in Kandor. Soon the skies began to darken as Kandor Defense fighters took to the skies, blocking out the stars. All of a sudden, there were several flashes of light and several of the fighters were shot down. Now a very ominous shadow began to cross the evening sky. It was the biggest spaceship ever seen over Kandor. Kiral had gotten into her spacesuit and was inside the spaceship. At that very moment, she saw her father being arrested by Kandorian authorities. Quickly, she closed the spaceship and sealed the cockpit. Then she fired up the launch sequence. She figured her father was going to be put in the phantom zone and she knew she had to escape. As her ship cleared the launch bay, she looked back at her home for the last time. Just then, she saw a giant blue ray beam come from the giant spaceship. It completely covered the city. Kiral had just escaped the city limits and was just about out of the atmosphere when her home was literally ripped from Kryptonian soil and pulled upwards towards the massive spaceship. It was shrinking as it was pulled into the sky. The young girl began to weep at the sight. The evil android, Brainiac was stealing Kandor. She was all-alone in outer space. She could not go home if she wanted to. There was no longer a home to go to. Sadly, the girl engaged the autopilot. Her father had programmed a course for a small blue green planet about 50 light years from Krypton. She also set the suspended animation process into motion. This process would take two Kryptonian days to complete. Her ship had cuts its main engines in order to conserve fuel for the trip. Only booster engines were being used to keep the ship's course true. It appeared that her ship was drifting but it was not. The next day, Kiral was beginning to get sleepy. As luck would have it, her windows were aimed back at Krypton. As she looked back at her home planet for the last time, the unthinkable happened. There was a blinding flash of light and then a series of explosions ripped apart the planet. All of the radioactive gasses pent up at the core of the planet were released at once, causing the fragments of what once was the proud world of Krypton to turn an emerald green. The explosion caused her rocket and one other small rocket launched from Kryptonopolis to be forcibly propelled towards earth.
Well what do you think? Like it or hate it? Please tell me. This is my first solo fanfic and I look forward to your reviews, positive or negative. I hope you enjoy. Also, this story is a companion story to End of the World but is not reliant on that one. Se the blue button at the bottom of the page...read and Review please.
