Song written by utsuP (Rin Kagamine)
Poem written by Yoshipower321
Date Written: 12/3/11
Yoshi: Another "interpret as you like" kind of thing. I tried to keep hidden patterns going. Can you find them? Do you understand what feelings I was trying to get across through this poem? What's your interpretation of it? I'm happy with the meaning and hidden effort I put into this. I hope you can see it.
I'm thinking about uploading these to my deviantART account… Hopefully I can get feedback there as well. To tell the truth, I usually don't feel comfortable uploading my writings. Whether they're good or not, there's always going to be that one person who tries to imitate a writer's work.
The Dying Message
Through the rain of sorrow,
I stare up at the sky.
Too much to ask for, as
I stare into the blue abyss.
Life ends suddenly; endlessly
I strive to fight for loved ones.
To disappear eventually,
I strive to continue moving.
Through the harsh sunlight,
The ocean appears closer than before.
Two hands cannot move at all, as
The ocean swallows me.
Life has meaning; I write
The message I leave behind.
Tomorrow and thereafter,
The message of another day alone.